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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Eesha2

Beautiful Diya! Excellent as usual! 👏



Thanks a lot Eesha...
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: sujji0609

Awesome Diya.... loved reading it..... especially these two lines...

Kyon kabhi ghatti nahi, mushkilon me bhi, jeene ki aas

Kyon bujhti nahi, unke pass hone par bhi, deedaar ki pyaas




Thank you dear... am elated that you guys are liking my ramblings...
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: upasana.diya



Thanks Bro, for saying its beautiful even with 'anjaan' words😉

translation is done

arrey tum toh lajawab ho.. Forum sarojini naidu ho.. Toh anjaan words ke saath be teri poem toh zabardast hogi na? I lyked the way u wrote, samjhe?
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Jake-neil

arrey tum toh lajawab ho.. Forum sarojini naidu ho.. Toh anjaan words ke saath be teri poem toh zabardast hogi na? I lyked the way u wrote, samjhe?


samjhe.....
😆😆😆..... i know what you meant bro... i was just pulling your leg😉
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: upasana.diya


samjhe.....
😆😆😆..... i know what you meant bro... i was just pulling your leg😉
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hey, i might fall off.. Dont pull lyk that
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Posted: 14 years ago
@ diya---very eloquent.............inspirational poem.👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
superbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbb diya....

but can u plz check first two lines of hindi version....as "Nahi" is missing it seems....
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Posted: 14 years ago
Diya
The last stanza is awesome. In this Kaliyug it is more relevant. Altruism,compassion which is still prevalent needs to be protected.
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Posted: 14 years ago
Wow Diya! Sudden spike in your creativity! beatutiful poem Diya! please write more!
Posted: 14 years ago
Nice... Miss talented is in town!

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