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saina

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Like it?? I love it!!! I love evrything you write... tum bas likhte jao

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Mera comment mujhe hi, bt frankly do tel me if anything is lacking.
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shruthi2010

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Posted: 14 years ago

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sadhli, romantic thriller only must have suspense not romance stories, dont stop there, waiting impatiently for the next update.

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blueopal

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Posted: 14 years ago

#184

wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! such a romantic scene yaar ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,gopi in aham's arm.............hmmmmm................ soooooooooooooo dreamy..............hope soon they will be together...............looking fwd..................

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tellyaddict

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Originally posted by: vaniabi
wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! such a romantic scene yaar ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,gopi in aham's arm.............hmmmmm................ soooooooooooooo dreamy..............hope soon they will be together...............looking fwd..................

thanx dear...i'll update soon..

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Dhrashtee

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Posted: 14 years ago

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sadhli... been reading ur FF... but u haven't updated in a while... plz update soon....and plz pm me when u update... thanks... keep up the good work

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tellyaddict

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Originally posted by: dhrashtee
sadhli... been reading ur FF... but u haven't updated in a while... plz update soon....and plz pm me when u update... thanks... keep up the good work

thanx 4 liking dhrashtee, i was at my home 4 diwali n now suffering frm fever, cold. Bt i'l try to update soon.
Thanx 4 appreciating.

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tellyaddict

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Aham still not able to believe his fate so just to assure that he is not dreaming tries to touch her face with his right hand while Gopi still looking directly in his eyes with Lil bit of Fear, Lil bit of Happiness of being in Aham's arms, Lil bit of Hope may be she will get him now, lil bit of shy that his gaze is making her.

Both of them staring at each other with thousands of feelings in their heart and Aham abt to touch her face.

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Part 15

But suddenly he hears someone calling his name from backside which distracts him, Aham leaves Gopi and both of them come into the senses abt the surroundings. Aham first turns towards the direction of voice and then back to Gopi who is not there, but Aham gets a glimpse of her Flying Pink Pallu. He wants to follow her so that this time he wont loose her again but Abhishek, he is one of biggest business rivals of Aham and also Pinky's cousin, holds his shoulder, Aham turns and address him in a very angry tone...

Aham: Abhishek, u will never leave me na, wherever I go u have to be there, isn't it ur Favorite Pastime

But Abhishek ignores his anger and says: U are here Aham, I can not believe that Mr. Aham Modi attends patries too.

Aham is still looking inside as he is not interested in Abhishek's talk even a bit, and is fuming with anger.

Abhishek continues: By the way who was that Gorgeous Lady in ur arms, wont u introduce her with me, may be I'll too try my luck.

Hearing this Aham can not resist his anger, punches on his abdomen and warns him to be away from Gopi as she is not any other girl...she is Gopi Aham Modi means My wife got it......and leaves him as it is and goes inside.

Inside the Mansion every one is waiting for Pinky to come down so that Engagement ceremony can be started. And Aham is looking here and there for Gopi but he is failing miserably as Gopi is hiding herself in her room coz she does not want to come across Aham again. Pinky comes downstairs slowly slowly and every one present in the hall just staring at her as she is looking Beautiful exccept Aham who is standing behind stage and is talking to himself how to search Gopi. But his mind is not at all functioning properly to think abt anything and is all lost in Gopi's thoughts and their recent encounter, Gopi running inside and her flying Pink Pallu suddenly he sees the same pallu flying and the girl is standing on the stage with Shashank and they are exchanging the rings, as he is standing at the backside of stage he cant see her face but the Saaree, the Pallu makes him believe that she is Gopi...His Gopi.....and this time Aham feels like someone snatched his life, his heart is almost stopped, his brain is not able to believe what his eyes have in front of him......and outside there is Thunder Storm, Lightining and Rain...may be nature is also trying to portray what Aham is feeling, his struggle with his Heart and Brain............and Eyes.......................

He is seeing Gopi n Shashank Exchanging rings, this means it was Gopi abt whom Shashank was talking, it was Gopi who was Shashank's life.....
and Gopi.......she forgot him so easily.....just 2 weeks of time erased all those memories they shared.......she forgot that she is Married to me.....and how could she do this even after meeting me.........she should have talked to me once...at least once, she should have given me a chance to prove my love for her now, to tell her the Real Truth of My Life.......What This Aham thinks, Feels abt her....but no...she dint...she dint bother to give me a chance......but then he remembered his own promise to himself that if Gopi will be getting re-married then he wont interfere in her happiness, she has all the rights to be happy and here he is doing exactly same.....she has found her love and happiness in Shashank so I dont have any rights to break her dreams now.....and leaves the mansion sadly...and tears in eyes........

Gopi is standing in her room on window and prays to Kanha Ji that Kanha Ji, kripya kar ke Aham ji ka dhyan rakhiyega...aaj galti se main unke saamne aa gayi thi aur mujhe pata hai wo bahut naraj honge mujhse......bas aap unka gussa shaant kar dijiyega.
(Kanha ji please take care of Aham Ji, today I came in front of him by mistake and I know he will be angry with me......pleas calm down his anger....)

saying so she was recalling the encounter where she was in Aham's arms, her hands resting on his chest feeling his heart beats.....and looks outside the window the Stormy night which again makes her feel that her inside Struggle is there what nature is with a restlessness in her eyes.

Aham goes outside and stands in rain nearby his car and starts crying badly and breaks down saying Gopi ye tumne kya kiya...kam se kam ek mauka to diya hota..bas ek mauka....
(Gopi what u hv done.....u shouls have given me at least a chance )

Gopi sees him from her window, gets worried as she knows that he will fall ill badly by this rain, cant stop herself and runs to stop him.

Gopi goes to him in heavy rain, wants to call him but hesitates as she thinks he still hates her, but she has to do it for her Love for his well being....so she puts Pallu on head and then calls him...

Gopi: Aham Ji...Aa...Aap...Aap yaha kyun khade hai.......aap Baarish me mat Bhigiye...tabiyat kharab ho jayegi....
( Aham Ji......why are u standing here......please dont stand here as u'll will fall ill...)

Aham looks backward and seeing Gopi there his anger is on full swing......and turns back...as soon as he turns Gopi turns her back to him and holds her pallu to cover her face but keeps saying:

Gopi: Aap yaha kyun khade hai....andar chale jaiye....shashank ji aapko dhundh rahe hai.....
(Please come inside as Shashank ji is looking for u inside..)

Aham moves towards her side, grabs her arm with his right hand, spins her to face him so that he can find the truth by looking into her eyes and also she should understand his feelings thru eyes.......backs her on his car, removes her pallu with left hand, Gopi gets shocked and looks upwards in his eyes and Aham keeps looking into her eyes with so much passion, anger, guilt, frustration and questions........

while Gopi first looks in his eyes and wants to keep looking but frightens by the anger in them so lowers down her eyes......

and Aham shouts: Gopi aaj nahi.....aaj tum is tarah se bina kuch kahe sune nahi ja sakti pichhli baar ki tarah...........aaj tumhe sach sun na padega aur sach kahna bhi hoga....Gopi.......meri taraf dekho.....meri aankho me dekho.......
Not Today Gopi.....today u cant leave w/o saying or listening anything just like last time.......today u hv to listen the truth and have to tell me the truth also......Gopi..look at me...look into my eyes.........)

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Hope u'll like this update.....i know this is not very good but I tried to write even when m not much well........so please comment.......