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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: adventure_gurl

thanks for the lovely update! keep up the great work!😃

Thanks for the sweet words dear...I will continue really soon 😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
Episode 41
Saloni couldn?t sleep the whole night...she was thinking the whole time about Shubra. She knew that something was wrong and she hide something. On the other side Shubra is in her room and call someone...she tell the person that they have to be more carefull in the future. She hear some noise so she cuts the phone and goes to her bed.Saloni is standing at the door of Shubra?s room and look at her for a while and than she goes to her own room.
The next morning Ambika goes to Saloni?s room...she see that she is still sleeping and give her a kiss on her forehead. She makes her eyes slowly open...
Saloni: Maa...aap yahan
Ambika: Tumhe jhee bhar ke dekhle do naa Saloni...Bahot jhald meri beti apni pati ka ghar jaayengi. Mein bahot khush hoon ke meri achchi se beti ek achcha sa jeevan saathi mila hai. Saloni tum hamesha Nahar aur uska parivaar ko khush rakhna. Tum apni har farz nibhaana aur ek achchi si patni aur bahu bana. Mein jaanti hoon ke meri Saloni ek bahot achchi patni banogi aur har farz nibhaayengi.
Saloni get tears in her eyes and hugs her mother...
Saloni: Mein wada karti hoon Ma...mein har farz nibhaayengi. Aur papa aur aap ki naam hamesha roshan karongi
Ambika gives her a kiss on her forehead and tell her that she trust her Saloni.
At Singh mansion
Tara and Aditi was busy with some work in the kitchen when Dheer called Aditi. She went to her room where she saw Dheer sitting on the bed. She asked him what?s happend and he looked at her with a angry face.
Dheer: Har waqt tum apne bhai ke liye kham karti hai...kabhi kabhi apni pati ka kham bhi karo
Aditi: Aise kyon kehe rahi hai Dheer...kal Nahar ka engagement party hai to hum sabko bahot kham hai. Iseliye mein todhi busy hoon
Dheer: Engagement party uska hai hamaari nahin?agar tum apni bhai ka sewa karna tha to mujhse shaadi kyon kiya hai??
Aditi: ( she got tears in her eyes..) Dheer mein to?
Dheer: Dekho yeh drama mere aaga math karo?yeh roona dhoona band karo. Aur jhaldi meri achchi suits pack karo. Kal raath ek bahot important meeting hai iseliye mujhe out of town jaana hai. Mein aaj hi raat jaaongi
Aditi: Lekhin Dheer?kal Nahar ka engagement hai.
Dheer told her that it?s her brother..he will not attend this party. Aditi tried again to stop Dheer but he pushed her away and left the room. She knew that he was lying about the meeting.
At Saloni?s house
Narpat and Ambika left the house because they had to pick up Hema Maussi from airport. Saloni was watching television when she saw Shubra coming downstairs..she was wearing a party dress
Saloni: Shubra tum kahan pe jaa rahi hai ise waqt...?
Shubra: Woh...woh mein..Di mera ek dost ka party hai...mein waha pe jaa rahi hoon.
Before Saloni could say something the doorbell goes and Shubra made the door open...she saw Nahar in front of her. She told Nahar that Saloni is inside and after that she left. Nahar goes inside and saw that Saloni was sitting at the sofa. She turned around and saw Nahar in front of her. She stand up and was a little bit suprised to see him.
Nahar: Hai sweetheart...kaise hoon ( he give her a kiss on her forehead)
Saloni: Nahar aap yahan pe...? Ise waqt...?
Nahar: ( he smiles) Jab kal raath tum mujhse kaha tha ke tumhaari parents tumhaari maussi pick up karongi airport se aaj tab maine socha ke hum dono kuch waqt saath ghuzaar sakte hai. Aur dekho mera luck...Shubra bhi ghar mein nahin hai...
Saloni: Kya Shubra chala gaya hai...?
Nahar: Haan...lekhin kya hua...? Sab thiek hai naa??
Saloni looked a little bit worried but Nahar pulled her close to him and he wrapped his arms around her waist. He gave her a kiss on her cheek and than on her neck...
Saloni: Kya kar rahi hoon tum...?
Nahar: Mein tumhaari saath ek bahot achcha lamha ghuzaar thi hoon...ab mujhse sach mein aur intezaar nahin hota hai. Mera paas ek idea hai...agar hum kal engagement ke wajah shaadi karle...
Saloni: Tum bhi naa Nahar...Meri liye kuch waqt aur nahin intezaar kar sakte hai...?
Nahar: Arre jaan tum to serious hogayi hai. Mein tumhaari liye kuch bhi kar sakte hoon. Tum nahin jaanti hoon ke mein kaise har pal ghuzaara hai tumhaari bin. Aur finally mujhe tum mila hai?Maine hamesha se mere sapno mein tumhi dekha hai...aur kuch dhinon mein tum sirf meri hogi
Saloni: Mein hamesha se tumhaara tha Nahar?
He had come closer to her ear and he whispered in her ear...that he loves her. Saloni hugs him and give him a kiss on his neck. They spend a nice time with each other and after two hours Nahar left from there
In a restaurant
Shubra was talking to a guy...she told him that she loves him and she want to tell her sister about him but the guy stops her and tell her that this is not the right time to tell Saloni about it. Shubra looked a little bit worried but than the guy goes close to her and kisses her on her lips. He looked in her eyes and asked her if she loves him...Shubra looked at him back and told him that she loves him a lot..and they hugged each other.
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This part is special for my sweet Nazia Di because she has always support me with everything...so here it is Di and also because I want make her happy...and special at this time. Mein aapse bahot pyaar karti hoon...
It is also for my Raksha Di who is really important for...
and for a great true friend..Judy...thanks for supporting me.
In the part the engagement of Nahar and Saloni will be happen..so that means a lot of romance 😳 😳 so don't miss it.
I will try to update this weekend...😊
Take care and keep smiling
Reena
Edited by jaanlover - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
This part is special for my sweet Nazia Di because she has always support me with everything...so here it is Di and also because I want make her happy...and special at this time. Mein aapse bahot pyaar karti hoon...
Aww..reena thank you soo much..u are tooo sweet..u always make me happy..
The episode was too good..to cute...two thumbs up!!
just brilliant...suberb..awesome....(u get the point)😆
Can't wait for the next episode please post soon..hehe im dying to find out what happens
Love you loads
apki bhari behan...
Nazia
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: naz_u54

This part is special for my sweet Nazia Di because she has always support me with everything...so here it is Di and also because I want make her happy...and special at this time. Mein aapse bahot pyaar karti hoon...

Aww..reena thank you soo much..u are tooo sweet..u always make me happy..
The episode was too good..to cute...two thumbs up!!
just brilliant...suberb..awesome....(u get the point)😆
Can't wait for the next episode please post soon..hehe im dying to find out what happens
Love you loads
apki bhari behan...
Nazia

Thanks you so much my sweet Di for this very sweet words and comments. It really means a lot for me.
You are the best Di....😊
I will update really soon and in the next part there will be the engagement of Nahar and Saloni and that means a lot of romance 😳 😳
and you will know some more about the secret of Shubra and there will be also a part od Aditi and Dheer.
Special for you a little preview 😉 😆
Love you very much...🤗
Aap ki choti behan
Reena
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Posted: 16 years ago
I 'm abit late commenting but finally i got to read your fanfic. It's soo unique and beautiful. I love NS's chemistry and I'm this time I'm going to make sure I don't procrastinate and read as you read.
Loved ur fanfic please update soon.
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Posted: 16 years ago
Meri pyari Pari didi kya update the. Oye hoye kya baat hai di. Aap toh ek such a great writer nikal aye hai. You have done a extremly great job. I just loved you both updates. Sorry I'm really sorry that I didn't comment on you FF. You know na ke main aaj kaal bohut busy rehti hoon. So bla bla bla par di main aab aapse kya kaho. Kya wonderful update the kya writing the.
Main ek hi shabd keh sakti hoon ''OUTSTANDING'' update. Di mujhe aab jaana hogo par jaldh main aapse phir se baat karongi.

Theek hai byebye love you. Main aapse bohut pyar karti hoon.
Please jaldhi update kijiye ga. Theek hai sab ko meri taraf se dher saara pyaar dena aur ek bohut bari hug dena aapne behen ko. Main humesha aapse saat hoon di haar modh par. Main dua karongi ke aap humesha khush rahe aur aapko duniya ki haar khushi mile.

Tumhari choti behen S.Rina
Edited by LoveBMTD - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: kernal

I 'm abit late commenting but finally i got to read your fanfic. It's soo unique and beautiful. I love NS's chemistry and I'm this time I'm going to make sure I don't procrastinate and read as you read.

Loved ur fanfic please update soon.

Thank for your sweet and kind words.
Iwill update really soon 😊
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: LoveBMTD

Meri pyari Pari didi kya update the. Oye hoye kya baat hai di. Aap toh ek such a great writer nikal aye hai. You have done a extremly great job. I just loved you both updates. Sorry I'm really sorry that I didn't comment on you FF. You know na ke main aaj kaal bohut busy rehti hoon. So bla bla bla par di main aab aapse kya kaho. Kya wonderful update the kya writing the.
Main ek hi shabd keh sakti hoon ''OUTSTANDING'' update. Di mujhe aab jaana hogo par jaldh main aapse phir se baat karongi.

Theek hai byebye love you. Main aapse bohut pyar karti hoon.
Please jaldhi update kijiye ga. Theek hai sab ko meri taraf se dher saara pyaar dena aur ek bohut bari hug dena aapne behen ko. Main humesha aapse saat hoon di haar modh par. Main dua karongi ke aap humesha khush rahe aur aapko duniya ki haar khushi mile.

Tumhari choti behen S.Rina

Thanks for your sweet comments my sweet little princess. It really means a lot for me
I have send you a message 😊
I will update really soon
Aap ki Pari Di
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Posted: 16 years ago

I will not be able to post the next part today..I promise I will update soon

Edited by jaanlover - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
Episode 42
It was finally Friday and Nahar woke up early this morning...he took a warm shower and after that he went to his brother?s room. He knocked at the door...he heard Tara's voice and she told him that he could come in the room. He had come inside...he asked his brother if they are ready because the have to go the mandhir. Brijesh and Tara looked in each other eyes and start laughing.
Tara: Lagta hai ke meri Nahar ko ab aur intezaar nahin hota hai...
Nahar: ( he smiles and blushes) Bhabisa aap bhi naa...woh Saloni aur uski parivaar bhi mandhir aayenga to mein iseliye soch raha tha ke...
Tara: Achcha to aise baath hai...ab mein samjhi...ke meri Nahar ko kyon itni jhaldi hai
Bhabo enter also the room and told them that it?s the time to leave...Nahar was the first one who stands up and leaves the room...Brijesh and bhabo follows him to the car. Tara goes to the house temple and take some aarti samaan...after that she called Aditi.
Tara: Aditi...Aditi...tum tayaar hoon...? Jhaldi karo warna late ho jaayenga...aur Nahar ka haal aur bhura haga.
Aditi: Mein tayaar hoon bhabisa...( she enter the livingroom and help Tara to take all the stuff)
Tara ask Aditi where Dheer is...Aditi tell her that there was a really important meeting. Tara looked at Aditi and knew that there was more..but before she could ask her anything they heard Nahar?s voice from the car that they must leave now...so she didn?t ask Aditi anything and they left.
At Saloni's house
Saloni was in her room...she was standing a whole hour for a wardrobe but couldn?t choose a nice saree or salwaar kameez. For the engagement party she had the saree of Tara gave her..but she does not know what she must wear now when they will go to the mandhir. Shubra entered the room and saw that her sister was standing for the wardrobe. She was a little bit scared because she thought that Saloni will start about what yesterday happend but Saloni was so happy today that when she saw Shubra she took her arms and ask her what she must wear.
Some minutes later Ambika and Hema maussi called Saloni...they had to leave now else they will be late. Shubra and Saloni came downstairs and Narpat and Ambika couldn?t stop looking at their daughter. Hema maussi went to Saloni and takes aarti of her...after that she gave Saloni her blessing.
At the mandhir
Nahar and his family arrived first at the mandhir...bhabo, Tara and Aditi gave the pandit all the samaan and help him to order all the stuffs on their own place. Nahar?s eyes was searching the whole time for Saloni and Brijesh had notice that...he told his younger brother that they will come soon.
After ten minutes Saloni and her family also arrived at the mandhir...Nahar and his family stands up and Nahar was looking for Saloni. First Narpat and Ambika gets out of the car and than Hema maussi.
Nahar: ( he talk in himself) Arre yaar...jhaldi karo naa. Meri Saloni kahan pe hai...
Shubra also gets out of the car and than finally he saw Saloni...he couldn?t believe his eyes...she was looking so beautiful. She was wearing a beautiful yellow with pink saree with curly hair. Nahar keeps looking at Saloni while his family goes to Saloni and her her family and meet each other. Saloni walks on the stairs of the madhir and look at Nahar... he give her a wink and she blushes.
Nahar and his family are sitting oppostite of Saloni and her family...the pandit start the pooja. During the whole pooja Nahar and Saloni looked at each other...they were thinking about all the moments that they spend together. When the pooja was finish the pandit gave Nahar and Saloni his blessings
Bhabo tell Ambika and Hema maussi that they have to go home...because after three hours the party will begin. In the meanwhile Nahar tries to flirt with Saloni...he took her to the back garden of the mandhir.
Saloni: Kya kar rahi hoon...? Sab log kya sochenga hamaare bhare mein...?
Nahar: Kya sochenga..? Tum meri honewale patni hoon...
Saloni: Sahi kaha tumne..honewale patni...iska matlab ise waqt tum?
Nahar: Bas...kuch math kehna. Waqt zyaada nahin hai...mujhe abhi jaana hai kyon ki ghar mein abhi bahot zaara kham bhaki hai aur sab mera intezaar kar raha hai...mein tumhe sirf yeh kehna chahata tha ke tum ise saree mein bahot khoobsurat lagti hoon
Saloni: Achcha lekhin yeh to tum mujhe har baath kehti hoon...Tum shayad yeh bas yuhi kehti hoon...choro naa...tum jaaon kyon ki mujhe tumhaara yeh har roz ke baathein nahin sunna hai
She just want to walk away when he pulled her close to him..he touched her face with his hand and give her a kiss of her forehead. He had come closer to her ear and he whispered in her ear...
Nahar: Tum meri liye har rooz khoobsurat hoon...jab bhi mein tumhe dektha hoon mera hosh udh jaata hai. Meri dil zor se dhadak tha hai...aur mein bas tumhe dekhna chahata hoon. Mein tumhaari paas rehna chahata hoon aur waqt. Tumhaari liye yeh meri roz ke baathein hai lekhin meri liye yeh sab kuch hai.
Saloni was happy...he was so understanding and caring. She had hugged him and gave him a kiss on his neck. She told him that she was just joking...and gave him again a kiss...this time on his cheek. At the moment they heard Brijesh?s voice...and Nahar was thinking in himself...arre yaar yeh bhaisa bhi naa...Saloni looked at him and told him that they must leave now. He gave her quick a kiss on her lips and left from there
At Singh mansion
Everyone was arrived for the engagement party...it was a beautiful party. The whole house was decorated with white and pink roses...and candles because Saloni loves roses and candles.
Nahar was talking with some friends when he saw Saloni in the beautiful red/ pink saree with golden decorations that Tara had gave her. She had open hair and Nahar was just looking at her. Aditi and Tara also saw her and goes to her and take her to some familymembers..and introduce her to everyone. By every step of Saloni Nahar was looking at her...Saloni felt that someone was looking at her. She knew that it was Nahar..and give him quick a look. He smiled at her and she gave him a wink...and than finally Brijesh asked for everyone?s attentions. Nahar knew that now the moment has come.
Everyone claps..Narpat and Ambika take Saloni hand and gave it to Nahar. They looked in each other eyes and they were lost for a while in their own thoughts
'' Aankhon mein aankhein teri...bahoon mein baahein teri...mera na mujhmein kuch raha, hua kya...Baaton mein baatein teri? raatein saugatein teri kyun tera sab yeh ho gaya hua kya...Mein kahin bhi jaata hoon..tumse hi mil jaata hoon...Tumse hi..tumse hi. Shoor mein khamoshi hai todhi si behoshi hai...Tumse hi...tumse hi''
Aditi snaps with her finger and everyone smiles...Tara give Nahar the ring. He look at Saloni and push the ring around her finger. '' Aadha sa wada kabhi aahdein se zyaada kabhi...Jhee chaahein karlo ise tarah wafa ka...'' Everyone claps and than Ambika gives Saloni the ring. She take the ring and push the ring around Nahar's finger. '' Chodein na chootein kabhi todhein na toote kabhie...jho dhaaga tumse judh gaya wafa ka...'' Nahar and Saloni takes the blessings of everyone
Everyone was enjoying the party...and Nahar was waiting for a chance to meet Saloni alone. He saw that Tara went to the kitchen and Saloni wanted to help her. She was about to leave when Nahar had grabbed her hand and he took her outside to the garden.
Saloni: Kya kar raha hoon Nahar...?
Nahar: Mein tumhaari saath kuch waqt ghuzaarna chahata hoon...Ise khoobsurat raath mein main tumhaari saath kuch waqt akele ghuzarna chahata hoon
Saloni: Mujhe jaana hoga...Tara bhabi meri intezaar kar rahi hogi
Nahar: Choro naa...sab hai waha pe...Aaj mein bahot khush hoon Saloni. Aaj hamaari saghai hui hai...Ise dhin ka maine kitna intezaar kiya tha
Saloni hugged him and told him that she was also really happy...he gave her a kiss on her forehead and shared a very sweet moment together..He took her hands and they started to dance in the garden. ( they could hear the music from inside ).
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This part is special for my sweet Nazia Di because she has always support me with everything...so here it is Di and also because I want make her happy...and special at this time. Mein aapse bahot pyaar karti hoon...and you are really important for me !!!
It is also for my Raksha Di who really means a lot for me...
and also for a great true and caring friend..Judy...thanks for supporting me everytime.
In the next part there will be a big fight between Dheer and Aditi...also I will write something about Shubra's secret...and of course there will be some romantic moments between Nahar and Saloni 😳 😳 So don't miss it !!!
I will try to update this weekend...😊
Take care and keep smiling
Reena
Edited by jaanlover - 16 years ago

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