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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: simran20

naz...i love the idea of all the zee stars in the FF...keep it up...I love it...will wait for more.


thanks i got this idea from tiff!! dont worry u wont have to wait long
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Ann. party

sorry this one is short to really short but i had stuff to do

They arrive at the party, 20 min late

They run into the hall running into people and so on and so forth. they run up to mamta wishing her a happy anniversery. they talk for awhile all three of them until they hear a shrek.

they turn around and see janki right behind her

Janki- saloni vidya app duno
Saloni- yes, im staying with bani for awhile
Bani- yes because our maasi is gone and maasi only trusts saloni hehe
(janki started laughing)

Janki- saloni bani i will be right back
both- ok

Saloni and bani ask mamta to take them to akshay, mamta does and there they meet more of their friends

in the little group akshay was in was Vidya and Sagar, akshay, sarawathi, and kshitij. They all hug and saloni and vidya start talking while bani goes to find mr.walia.

Vidya and Saloni start walking and talking, until they run into Mr. walia and bani, who were arm in arm. saloni sees this and decides to make fun of them,

Saloni- oh foo aap dono yaha? i was looking for you forever, did u go somewhere special?!?
at this bani gave saloni a scary look Mr. walia was blushing and vidya was laughing really hard. Bani Ran after saloni. Saloni running away from bani not paying attention. runs straight into nahar and he catches her, as shes about to fall. the both look into each others eye and have an eyelocking moment. They both come back to their senses.

Saloni- thank you for catching me
Nahar- np
Saloni- i tought you moved away for studies
Nahar- oh yeah i completed them
Saloni- ohh, well thats good hows ur family
Nahar- there fine thanks and urs
saloni- there good

They were having a nice conversation, until bani ran up and pulled saloni away cause bani wanted her to meet raji, and mahi. After they all meet. it was time to cut the cake.

mamta and Akshay were deeply in love, and saloni couldnt wait to find someone where she could feel the same way. After that when most of everyone left and it was only the friends (aka group) left they all decided to hang out and watch a movie. the group involved- Saloni,bani, mamta, akshay, nahar, mr.walia, raji, mahi, sagar, vidya, saraswathi, and her husband, and Kajjal and dev+ preeti and her boyfriend, Vedika and Dhruv.

They were having alot of fun, it was really dark and preeti and her boyfriend, raj were away from everyone else. Saloni and bani and nahar and Mr.walia were all sitting together they were talking and etc.

Nahar wasent really paying attention to the movie but really to saloni. Everyone else was gone from the room. Each person was doing something different.


All of a sudden a bolt of lightning struck making saloni screech and hug nahar really tight....................


Read next episode to find out nahars reaction!!
Edited by naz_u54 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#13
great story and great idea to combine all the zee characters in one story 👏 👏 . keep it up. 👍🏼
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: ramas

great story and great idea to combine all the zee characters in one story 👏 👏 . keep it up. 👍🏼

I agree..very good idea to combine them...very exciting...will wait fot the next part.

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: simran20

I agree..very good idea to combine them...very exciting...will wait fot the next part.

agreed...you are doing wonderfull.....keep it going......

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: shali

agreed...you are doing wonderfull.....keep it going......


thanks guys!!!1😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
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meetings

Precap- saloni got scared of lightning and huged nahar




nahar was shocked, but happy he put his arm around her and hugged her tightly as her head was on his chest. Saloni felt really happy and wanted this moment to stay like this forever, nahar didnt want to let go. About couple min later saloni noticed what she was doing and moved away as nahar let go. she was blushing she apoligized to nahar and nahar also apoligized. Saloni and nahar noticed they were the only one watching the stupid movie so they decided to go out and find their friends.

it didnt take them that long to do so, they where there in a group talking. Saloni asked them why they left and didnt return. Sagar said because you were the only one actually paying attention to it. saloni gave him this funny face which made them all laugh. See sagar is like a big brother to saloni, he would never let anyone harm her, just like everyone else. After 10 min saloni noticed Bani and jai werent there, she asked everyone who as well didnt know. she left the room to go search for them. Nahar followed her saying it was dark.

So both saloni and nahar go to look for them. After searching the house. They decide to look in the garden. As they step in the garden they see jai and bani hugging each other looking passionatly in each others eye. Faces inching closer eyes closing............................... AHEM AHEM!!! **cough** (hehe)(sry jb fans) jai and bani let go of each other seeing saloni and nahar there. Saloni who was dying of laughter, nahar who was holding his laughter, looking at jai and bani's faces as it was red like a laser light, and bani glaring at saloni in a pi$$ed of type of way. Saloni said oops looks like i came in on the RIGHT time. So thats where u were, you know if you want privacy the garden is not the right place. And anyways you will be married in a couple months just wait!! Saloni now runs, as bani is chasing her. Saloni runs laughing and screaming as bani is also yelling at her. Saloni runs all the way to the group hiding behind sagar as sagar stops bani asking her what did saloni do? Saloni then came infront of sagar saying yes what did i do?? please tell me?? at this bani was about to kill saloni
banis replied ummm.... i.....actually..........no...........i...........ughhhh..... ......... SALONI IM GOING TO KILL YOU. saloni runs away from bani circling around the group leaving everyone clueless except for nahar and jai who reached there.


Circling and circling around the group. Bani pushes saloni who is about to fall but is saved in the man-ley hands of nahar ( yes i know im repeating lol). They have a eye-lock an he slowley brings her up. Bani watching this says in her head, saloni better fall in love with him, if i wasen't engaged to jai than he would be my second choice. Saloni once again thanks him for saving her and runs inside while the girls follow her, except for bani. Vidya ask saloni why bani was chasing her. Saloni starts laughing and tell them what bani and jai were doing the girls laugh and later on they will play a trick on her. they were talking about a plan when the boys come in, the girls stop talking and the boyz look confused, saloni looked at vidya who looked at vedika who looked at mamta who looked at preeti and so on and so on back to saloni. the boys watching this asked them waht was going on. preeti said we are making a plan.....i mean..........uhh.....wat did i mean.......haha.............uhhh...ummmmmm.uhhh.urgh. The girls gave her this face, saloni said what she means is that we were just... making a plan of when we are going to hang out next, were to meet up, and stuff like that. Sagar asked vidya who didnt like lying to her husband, saloni in her head saying screw the plan. vidya replied with .........saloni..............ju...st...told you. "right" said sagar, who wasent satisfied. Saloni asked where was bani?? She said she was going to find you guys, replied akshay. Saloni and all the girls excused their selves going to look for bani. They found bani crying out in the garden, the girls walked over there, but before they could jai came and asked bani whats wrong. the girls quickly hid. *sniff sniff* nothing... i (sobsob) was just missing mama and papa and auntie (wahhh), said bani. Bani aap bhi na, hum ha na tumhari saath. replied jai. Bani hugged him, saying that everyone is so lucky to have a perfect life unlike mine. Jai covered her mouth saying no you are special very special, because ur all mine. They girls who were hidden awwed and oohed, saloni smiled. Jai and bani's face inched closer and closer and closer and they kissed. Saloni and the girls decided to ruin the moment, saloni comes out with the girls saying i caught u guys again but this time not alone, us girls caught u red-handed AGAIN. jai who comes towards saloni saying salonijiii, why do u break wonderful moments. Saloni replied jaiji hehe i didnt break it i fixed it. Leaving everyone completly blank, saloni continued actually auntie told me to watch out for you two so well im following her orders. plus added vidya cant you wait till after marriage, bani's not leaving you and jai not leaving bani. Then preeti comes out with camera saying i will be sure to put this on your wedding slideshow. She then ran. Before jai or bani could get it from her. Saloni and the others followed preeti, bani was mad in a happy way. jai was embarassed, bani told jai she would talk to him later. The girls ran into the house where the others were at. Sagar told vidya that they have to leave and slowly by slowly everyone left. including saloni and bani.

The next day they got ready and went out to resturaunt where they would be meeting the gang- which includes people from party. Saloni wanted to impress nahar so s he no longer wanted to be plain jane, she wanted to be hot, and attrractive to nahar.

Bani was shocked to see what saloni was wearing but she told her she looked very nice and she meant it. When they reached there they found the gang, and nahar (who is also in the "gang"). Bani and saloni reached the table. Everyone looked at saloni who told her she looked beautiful. Saloni starred at nahar because he didnt say anything. Saloni sat right across from nahar. Jai winked at bani, and bani blushed sagar was starring deeply into vidyas eyes. Saloni and nahar just starred blankly in the air.

Finally the silence broke when a waiter came asking waht they would like , they ordered there food and they started talking. They all enjoyed and wanted to hang out again sometime.

Bani was going out with jai, and vidya and sagar were leaving home. So saloni said she will take cab, and she left as well as nahar who left in his own car.

A couple days later, saloni was walking back from somewhere, it started to rain really bad. Saloni was all wet. All of a sudden a car pulls up behind her and nahar comes out. nahar says- saloni waht happened saloni told him she was walking home, but it started raining on her.
He made her sit in the car, so he can drive her home. Nahar turned the key, but the car wouldnt start

nahar- d@mn
Saloni- nahar try it again
(Nahar kept trying but it wouldnt work)
Nahar- stay here i see whats wrong

Nahar was outside for quite awhile
Saloni gets out of the car asking him did you fix it.
he replied with no no luck at all. Saloni asks him to call sagar or someone so they can pick us up as she left her cell phone at home. Nahar tried calling but no service. then he saw a small looking abandened house at the corner of his eye.

Nahar- saloni come on i found something
Saloni nods her head following him


It was really dark by then, and they could barely see where they were walking.
Saloni tripped on something causeing her to scream a little. Nahar ran up to her

nahar- saloni are you all right
saloni- yea im ok
nahar helped her up and she started walking with his hands around her shoulder when they reached the
abandend house witch was a one room house and they found a dresser and some sheets.

A couple min later salonis leg was feeling a little better

Nahar opened the dresser to find some clothes,

Nahar- saloni
Saloni- ji
Nahar- i found some clothes that we could wear
Saloni- umm ok, but this is one room house where are we going to change
nahar- oh shit i forgot ummm ill go out when u change and then you will go out when i change
Saloni- Stupid, if i change and then go out and wait for u to change than my new clothes are going to get wet
Nahar- well then i turn around when u change and you will turn around when i change

Saloni didnt agree to this but she was freezing she grabbed a blank shalwaar kameez and a extra duppata and tied the duppata around nahars eyes than she turned him around she went on the other side of the room behind the dresser and started changing when she finished changing she, took off the duppata around nahars eye and tied it around hers, than nahar finished changing. we they both were done changing saloni set out some sheets on seperate sides of the room she layed down on the sheets oppisite side of where she set up nahars.

Saloni- nahar can u try calling bani or someone they might be worried

Nahar nodded and grabbed his phone and he tried to dial but no signal or when someone picked up, it would disconnect.


Back at home bani is worrying, she decided to call jai,

Jai- hello
Bani- hello did saloni call you
Jai- no why?
Bani- shes not home and she should've been about 2 hours ago
Jai- try calling her
Bani-SHE DOSENT HAVE HER CELL PHONE
Jai- bani calm down, i will call sagar and ask him


.................. sorry for the long wait for the short episode i know its not that good so im sorry!

Now for Your point

this is were i ask you guys what you want to happen next

so write down what you want to happen next.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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where is everyone was it that bad?? 😕
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: naz_u54

where is everyone was it that bad?? 😕

nazia it is great don't worry. i started reading then i have to go. But I am back and finished it just now.

it is great. wow 👏 I like this friendship between the characters. Sagar saloni's brother that is great.

Edited by ramas - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: ramas

nazia it is great don't worry. i started reading then i have to go. But I am back and finished it just now.

it is great. wow 👏 I like this friendship between the characters. Sagar saloni's brother that is great.


thanks di but look like no one else enjoyed

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