Group Fanfic 'Pyar Huva Tumse' e.15 P 65 - Page 47

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Posted: 18 years ago

hello shali aunty😃
just read ur episode.... i have no words! NS scenes and dialogues were chooo cute😳.....shali, u made me blush ☺️
but ur leaving ur briju....awwww. i swear that brought tears to my eyes. thats cho sad😭😭 shali, im going to miss ur naughty scenes with brijesh...but this episode just proves that your a very sweet person and good at heart and that ur a true friend!
i am very lucky to have a u friend like you😳🤗

~Ashi

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: shali

thanks mamis.....

thank you very much....

I think for now I am out.... depens on the writers.... but me very glad that I left a impac....

u truly deserve these wonderful comments🤗... i hope ur charac stays, dunno what i will do without shali in the ff😭😭

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: ania_123

hi every one
i am new to this forum and i have been lately checking out the various fanfics

i really love this one and the one called 'saloni ki prem kahani' 👏

ramas i'm sorry dont really know who u are but i am very fond of ur writings

would like to receive a reply soon

-aanchal

hi aanchal...

welcome dear...

hope you will enjoy.....and keep reading cause you never know what the next writer has in store for us....

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: punjabi_kuri36

hello shali aunty😃
just read ur episode.... i have no words! NS scenes and dialogues were chooo cute😳.....shali, u made me blush ☺️
but ur leaving ur briju....awwww. i swear that brought tears to my eyes. thats cho sad😭😭 shali, im going to miss ur naughty scenes with brijesh...but this episode just proves that your a very sweet person and good at heart and that ur a true friend!
i am very lucky to have a u friend like you😳🤗

~Ashi

you little 🤬, uhm...devil..... yes I know mine devil....

😆I did a good job then.... making you blush😆....

sorry for making you cry..... but that is life.... gain something , lose something.....we cant get everything as we wish.....

yes sweety.... my to loved to make briju blush.😃..but we never gone know wich writer will bring back shali..... so we have to wait.😉...

thank you very much dear.... I am also very happy to have you as a friend🤗....

and yes.... this is my..... you have got that right😛.....

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: mamis

u truly deserve these wonderful comments🤗... i hope ur charac stays, dunno what i will do without shali in the ff😭😭

thanks hun.... love you 🤗.....

when ever briju will remember me or think about me ....he will find me at his side.... so dont worry..... maybe I will be back😉.😆....

and then maybe ...I will be a evil jiji...... wouldn't that be fun.....🤣

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: shali

thanks hun.... love you 🤗.....

when ever briju will remember me or think about me ....he will find me at his side.... so dont worry..... maybe I will be back😉.😆....

and then maybe ...I will be a evil jiji...... wouldn't that be fun.....🤣

wow, shali in an evil role?😈😆

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Posted: 18 years ago


Episode 14- a sacrafice to make

Brijesh was heartbroken didn't know what to do to obey his father or to listen to his heart. Shali was gone and Brijesh didn't have a reason to live.

1 week later

Brijesh and family were eating dinner. When the doorbell rang. Brijesh got the door and found nothing but a letter he picked it up and read……………………

To: Brijesh

From- Shali

Dear Brijesh,

I'm so sorry I walked away from you. I can't tell you where I am and this address is not mine. I maybe even leaving India. I have a request to make, and I need you to fulfill it. I want you to get married to Tara, and please don't disagree. Please listen to me. You would break my heart if you don't listen to me. I'll always be with you. I still love you, nothing will change that fact.

Yours truly,

Shali

Brijesh held the letter close to his heart and started to cry even harder.

Nahar- bhaisa

Brijesh wiped his tears

Brijesh- yes nahar

Nahar- what's in your hands

Brijesh- oh nothing. Nahar please leave me alone

Nahar- surely.

Nahar goes to his room and thinks about that piece of paper in Brijesh's hand andhe decides to go look for it.

As Nahar enters Brijesh's room he looks all over and then something caught his eye a piece of paper in his pillow case. Nahar grabs it and reads it. He decides he will try to complete shalis wish.

Nahar calls saloni and asks her to come to dinner with him. He tells saloni the plan and saloni agrees.

Nahar goes outside and finds Brijesh and asks him to go with him to dinner.

Brijesh- nahar im not in the mood.

Nahar- but u have to fulfill shalis wish.

Brijesh- nahar, how i'll I fall in love again?

Nahar- well I don't know only time will ease your pain. I told saloni to call Tara and she will be coming to dinner with us.

Brijesh doesn't agree at first but nahar convinces him.



RESTURAUNT

Nahar and Brijesh arrive waiting for saloni and Tara. Finally they arrive saloni walks to nahar and Tara walks to Brijesh they sit at separate seats.

Nahar- saloni you look so beautiful.

Saloni blushes and holds nahar hands.

Saloni- I hope they like each other.

Nahar kisses saloni's hands as she moves them away



OTHER SIDE OF RESTURAUNT

Brijesh and Tara order their food and start talking. They notice they have a lot in common. They laugh and talk and laugh and talk and eat.

Nahar and saloni watch them and smile. Nahar and saloni then get up to leave and go get Brijesh and Tara. But they didn't even finish their food.

Brijesh- ill drop Tara off when we are done.

Nahar- says ok hiding his smile. As soon as they get out they both burst in to laughter as their plan has succeeded and brijesh and tara started liking each other. They both thank each other.

So nahar and saloni leave to go. Nahar opens the car door for saloni as she gets in. nahar is driving her home as saloni puts her head on nahar shoulder. As they talk. Saloni is about to get out but nahar pulls her back and tells her she wont let her leave until she gives him a kiss. Saloni tries to get out but she has no choice and kisses his cheek. And runs out and smiles.

NAHARS HOME

Nahar waits for Brijesh to find out what happened it is already past midnight. Finally Brijesh walks in.

Nahar- where were you?

Brijesh- I was at the restaurant , then i dropped Tara home

Nahar- yeah ok and starts smiling.

Brijesh walks in his room, thinking about tara and then shali pops in his mind and he starts crying

Everyday Brijesh and tara go somewhere they start to like each other Brijesh falls in love with her as she falls In love with him.

3 days later ENGAGMENT DAY

Nahar and Brijesh where getting ready. As saloni and tara where getting ready.

Brijesh was happy but sad about shali. Nahar was to excited. Tara and saloni were nervous. Everyone is enjoying and laughing.



End of episode

The next writer will tell you about the engagment party.
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Posted: 18 years ago
nazia excellent story. 👏 loved it. 😊 My god you are getting better and better. 👏 👏 👍🏼
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: ramas

nazia excellent story. 👏 loved it. 😊 My god you are getting better and better. 👏 👏 👍🏼

thank you its all because of you that i am getting better

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: xmanisha

loved your story ! 😃

thank you

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