Thanks for the input. I think that there are a lot of nuances in relationship that SP can utilize however they keep on focussing on venom, malice and bad people. Also, they underdevelop a lot of other characters who end up just revolving round Saloni. I have developed some more tracks and the updates are in blue. Hope you will enjoy it. Nahar and Saloni watch Munnabhai Lage Raho and is inspired by the movie and Ghandigiri. Yug tries his best to create a rift between Nahar & Saloni but his plans always fails flat. Nahar and Saloni outsmart him always. Once, Saloni was driving and sees a old lady hurt in an accident. She takes the woman to the hospital. The woman needs blood and she donates her blood. Eventually, she finds out that the woman is suffering has HIV. Both Nahar and Saloni take the woman to US (or somewhere) for treatment.
At home, everyone including Yug is worried about Nahar and Saloni missing. Nahar and Saloni finally comes back with the woman. Yug is shocked since the woman is no one else but his mother. The mystery man gets desperate and asks Yug to kidnap Saloni and kill her. Yug kills Saloni.
Narpat & family as usual barges into Brijesh's house and scolds everyone. It is surprising they have so many issues at their house that they cannot control and wants Brijesh to control everything! One day Kaveri goes to see Kunjan and finds her own father sweeping the floors in Kunjan's house. She eventually finds out that her father had lost a big gamble to Kunjan and Kunjan had made him his servant. At Kaveri's dad home, her sister-in-law is doing the same sorts of things that she did with her in-laws.
(What goes around comes around ! - Come on, we need to keep the old adages around otherwise newer generations will not believe them).
An NRI friend of Narpat wants to open and India branch and makes Narpat the MD of the India branch. (This will stop his whinning. It is really irritating!)
There are many organizations that help bahus from bad in-laws but no organization to help in-laws from bad bahus (kaveri type), so Manoo bhabhi starts a "Bahu To Kabhi Saas Hogi" organization to help such in-laws and bring the senses back into bad bahus. Subra gets more of the bad treatment from Kunjan and Padma. She goes to a hospital and signs paper to donate her eyes to Samar.
Piya enters Mrs. India competition and wons the Mrs. India title. She gets film offers and with permission from Sridhar (her husband) and her mother in law, she starts working in films. She becomes successful in films. Dheer hears about HIV disease that had infected the woman (Yug's mother). He goes to the doctor and discusses about HIV/AIDS. As doctor, is informing about the symptoms and the causes, Dheer starts feeling all the symptoms and remembers all he has done that could cause HIV/AIDS. This could be very funny.
Dheer does not go for the test. He thinks if he does not go for the test, there is 50% chance that he may not have it. But if he goes for the test, he may have 100% confirmation that he has. So not doing a test is better. He asks doctor how long such a person can live and the doctor tells 6 months to five years. The Doctor says its not the length but the quality of life is important. Dheer at that point decides to make his life more meaningful. He can't think of anything else but becomes a writer writing novels. He writes as Veer instead of Dheer to be anonymous. He becomes a famous writer. His attitude towards Aditi and Ishaan changes a lot. He starts loving them more but is afraid of going closer to them. Although he never has HIV/AIDS, just the fear makes him a good person. Ekta Kapoor in an interview says she gets inspiration for her serial reading Veer's novels. She arranges a function to felicitate him and that's when everyone comes to know about Dheer.
As Piya becomes successful, Sridhar becomes jealous of her success and also the late shootings and outdoor shootings stresses their relationship. Sridhar warns Piya of bad people in film industry but Piya having lived in US believes that sexual harrasement is a thing of the past and even though Sridhar is educated, he is nothing but usual MCP. They have frequent arguments and finally decide to divorce each other. Yug realizes humanity and he then works to expose the mystery man. The mystery man turns out to be Kakisa's son trying to take revenge. Yug then gets Saloni (He had hidden her to expose the mystery man)
As Piya and Sridhar are separated, Piya finds she is pregnant. Nahar-Saloni try to unite Piya and Sridhar but fail. Piya sees the bad side of film industry with people's attitude changing towards her since she is single. She remembers Sridhar's warning and misses him a lot. On the other hand, Sridhar's friend, Srikanth is upset with his wife and informs Sridhar how his wife treats him. Sridhar remembers all the wonderful things and care that Piya took of him and his mother even while she was working. He too misses Piya.
Saloni learns that she is pregnant. Kaveri now is against Kunjan but her past hinders her progress. Kunjan buys the house that Karan lived in and gets hold of the diary that Karan maintained in which are the details of his and Kaveri's plan. Kunjan also gets hold of the milkman that Kaveri had used in the poison case and comes to know all the details of Kaveri. Kaveri is in trouble and has no option but to go to Saloni for help and confesses everything. Saloni as usual helps her and plans how to deal with Kunjan.
One day Saloni calls up Sridhar and says Nahar has an accident and needs blood. Since Sridhar is O+, he can donate the blood and asks him to come to room 18 of the hospital. When Sridhar arrives, he finds Piya on the bed with just delieved baby. Both turn their faces away and as Sridhar is about to leave, the baby starts crying. Sridhar moves towards the baby and holds the baby in his hand. He finds that the baby has eyes and nose similar to him. (It is great with newborns all their features can match with anyone elses feature). Piya mentions that when they separated, She became half (2-1=1/2) At this Sridhar stops her and says not only her, he also was half and if they unit they will be three (1+1=3). They reconcile and Piya decides to act only in dramas in local theatres so that she can pursue her career and take care of the family. God punishes Kaveri by making Kaveri incapable of being a mother. She wants to be a mother and longs for it. Shubra commits sucide tired of in-laws and donates her eyes to Samar and her kid to Kaveri-Samar.
Saloni-Kaveri finds out that Kunjan had cheated Kaveri's father and also Saloni receives the sucide letter that Shubra had mailed to her before dying. Based on this police catch Kunjan and Padma and put them in jail for fraud an harrasement. Kunjan and Padma are "Chakki picing & picing" in Jail.
Saloni gives birth to twin boys. We will call them S1 & S2 (to save some typing). She give S1 to tara.
Now that whoever can, must, need to have kids have them, we leap the story by 20 years.
S1 turns out to be a spoiled boy with love from Brijesh and Tara. He believes in Wine, Women and Money and would do anything for that. S2 on the other hand is more serious, matured and intelligent and nice.
One day, S1 gets into fight with someone near the college. The goon is trying to kill S1 with a knife at which point S2 comes along and gets killed.
Saloni is broken on losing her son. In a broken and depressed state, she starts showing her mamta for S1. S1 plays with Saloni's mamta, eyeing on the money of Nahar-Saloni. Tara gets insecured about losing S1 since she thinks that Saloni will claim him back. There is a rift between Tara and Saloni. Edited by Saukin - 18 years ago
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