Dhai Akshar Prem Ke- update pg 18 - Page 14

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: gaurifan

Tiaaaaaaa.. this part of DAPK was really rocking ..very sweet.. very natural... and please yaar do post more frequently..



haha, everytime u say DAPK hehe..i just burst out in giggles...its sounds so funny to me heheh. anyways, chalo. I am writing update at the moment... hopefully i can post tonight...

i'm quarantine for the chickens ...(for those of u who dont get my idiotic ways of renaming things..LOL..chickens are the chicken pox...i just rather called it "the chickens" LOL)

so..with absolutely nothing to do..and only a PC for entertainment..alli can think abt doing is writing...

who's up for an update tonight?
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Posted: 17 years ago
omg..wow...been AGES!! hahaha i'm gonna write an update for those who r still interested.
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Posted: 17 years ago
yes tiff that would be me..lol
after years of begging you to continue
hehe 😆

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Posted: 17 years ago

Yes, finally please update soon! can't wait to find out what's gonna happen next😳

i love the way you write a person can just imagine it all!👏

Edited by kernal - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: kernal

Yes, finally please update soon! can't wait to find out what's gonna happen next😳

i love the way you write a person can just imagine it all!👏


I quote that. waiting for the next sizzling episode.
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Posted: 17 years ago
^^ hahahha u guys are too sweet. lol! lemme start writing..it'll be short and maybe terrible for a new years return..but...forgive me..my aunty just ended up in the hospital and she might have to undergo minor surgery tonight....so...yeah i'm gonna start writing now, hopefully update will be up by tonight/tmrw :)
kernal thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
i hope you aunt gets better
please update whenever you like
TiaMaria93 thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
Okay guys..here it is..very short...very pointless but with little masala! cant be an update without masala na? Before i had accidentally deleted my writing file..so i lost the orignial update..and i could tell u..the orig. update had LOTS more but i'm just in a mood today...soooo..i hope u enjoy this little update for all of u who encourage my writing and thanks again for al ur sweet words as well :)


Getting bored, both decided to take a walk and explore the hotel. On passing one of the older workers of the hotel, he mentioned that the garden + pool on the top decking was absolutely stunning, made specially for young couples and only VIP guests like themselves had access to it. Both nodded uncomfortably at the man and proceeded, but curiosity got the better of them and they decided to go check it out. Due to the awful weather, the elevators got jammed and so they had to use the staircase….looking up at the never ending stairwells, they braced themselves for an extremely silent and awkward 20 minutes ahead.
On the last leg of the staircase, without warning, Saloni slipped on the edge of the step, unbalancing and tipping backwards into the arms of an unsuspecting Nahar. Caught in another fix, neither could react instantly. Unable to help himself, he looked over he revealed body in his arms. The spontaneity of the fall has caused her pallu to fly up and get tangled around Nahar's arms, revealing her flat stomach and rapidly rising and falling chest, much to his pleasure and her displeasure. Slowly, his free hand was magically making it's way up to cradle the side of her face, pulling her upwards just enough for him to lower his head comfortably to plant a kiss on her seductive lips.
Caught in the spell of the moment, she found her eyelids closing, her face heating up, her pulse and heart beat galloping and shivers running up and down her spine.
"BAM!" the door to the right of the stairs flew open, a peon rushing out hastily. As fast as the door had opened, they had sprung apart, as if brandished by a hot rod. Clenching his fists and stuffing it in his pants pockets, he looked up at the peon, who stood flushed before the swinging door. Saloni hastily twitched her pallu back into proper place, rubbing her palms against the cloth.
*clears throat* "Saab? Aap Mr Nahar Singh hain kyaa?" asked the peon. Nahar nodded slowly at the man, trying very hard not to express the thoughts of strangling the disturber.
*nervously* "Uh ji, aapki driver ne bulaya. Usne kaha tha ki aapki gaadi tayyar hai. The rain eased a little and he said it's best to leave now, otherwise lord alone knows how long you will be stuck here. He is waiting downstairs. Aur haan! Room service has already taken care of your clothes and packaged it, however there may be you other personal items in the room. Do hurry," and with that the little man fled from the awkward scene. Grumbling a little, they made their way back down the numerous flights of stairs, Saloni being extra careful and extra quiet, while Nahar cast sidelong glances at her confused face as the flashbacks of what had almost occurred played in his head.
Since neither had anything extra on them, they knew there was nothing left in the room, so they headed directly down and out to the front. Nahar lodged out of the hotel, receiving warm greetings from the lady behind the desk, returning her warmth with gracious looks of approval as well, but only too see if Saloni was paying any attention, and what would her reaction be.
"Ego of a peacock" He swore he heard her mutter that while flicking her hair. Spinning slightly, giving a big fake smile to the girl as she turned to greet her, she stomped out of the lobby and into the waiting vehicle, not giving the driver a chance to open the door for her. This made both men chuckle silently to themselves, as Nahar joined his fuming princess and allowed themselves to be driven off towards their respective homes.

Edited by TiaMaria93 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
Awesome Tia....very cute update. Hope your aunt is feeling much better now.
Edited by ~Simz~ - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
hahah.tifff that was great cant wait for the next episode
do post sooooooooooooon
😃

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