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Posted: 19 years ago
Hai, everybody.....just wrote anthore epi...hope you all like it...( again my special thanks to raksha for helping me with my hindi.....)

What will happen to Nahar? Would he slip into coma?
How would Saloni react once she finds out seriousness of Nahar's injury?
What will happen to neel Shubhra's marriage since it is only 4 days away?




Meanwhile in the hospital Brijesh is talking to the doctor. Nahar ko hosh kab aayega ??? Kahena musqil hai lekin umeed mat harye….. Bhagwaan ki kripa se sab theek ho jayega.. lekin aapko saloni ko sach batana ho ga kyon ki ager nahar coma me chala gaya to who yeh sadmaa bardaast nahi kar paaygi... Brijesh: mujh mei himmat nahi hain ….Lekin aab kahate hain to……he can't speak anymore….



An hour later saloni and the rest are back in the hospital…Saloni ask Brijesh if everything is alright but brijesh said to Tara to take saloni to her room because is needs her rest….

Saloni: bhaisa aap kuch bataten kyon nahi….she start to cry…Tara holds saloni takes her to the room followed by Brijesh…. He shuts the door behind them and Saloni turns to him…

Saloni, nahar….nahar… ko. saloni: kya howa bhaisa ab kuch kahet nahi…ho? Saloni still crying walks toward Brijesh and grabs him by the collar…. And starts screaming….Bhaisa aap kuch batate kyon nahi?….tears are dripping over Brijesh's face and he tries to speak up but…..he is not able to talk.….



Saloni wants to go and meet the doctor but then Brijesh holds her back by the arm and says: Saloni, agar Nahar ko hosh nahi aaya to who coma me chal jayega…. Hearing this saloni turns pale and faints but before her head touch the floor Brijehs grabs her and lift her up and lays her down on the bed…..Tara runs out the room calling for a doctor… They came running to the room back…. After a check up the doctor decide to give Saloni a sleeping injection….



Next morning Saloni wakes up and sees tara sitting next to her…..Tara bhabhi nahar….saloni ….tum rest karo…. lekin nahar …saloni tries to get up and then Tara says: saloni tumhari tabyaat teek nahi …tum rest karo…Nahar ko hosh aageya …Saloni starts to cry and gets up from the bed ….saloni….maaine khaha rest kerneke liye . …

Saloni: . Bhabhi muctje unse milna hai.… and she starts walking to the door. Tara grabs her and helps her to Nahar's room….

There she sees Brijesh sitting beside Nahar, he is awake…Saloni sits beside nahar and cry's more….Nahar looks at her ….saloni: aap kaise hain …..tears are dripping one nahar chest . he put his left arm around her and holds her against him…tum kaise h?…maine pahela sawal kiya….aap kaise ho…mai theek hoon…Meri to jaan nikal gai thi ….aap ke bagair main to jee nahin sakti….Saloni cries more…. He holds tight against him his chest.....

Will holding her he looks down on saloni...Nahar: Kya main tumhare bagair rahe sakte hoon….tum to meri zindage hon … is dil ki dhadkan… har saas per tumhara naam lekha hain…to tumhe chodke mujeh kahaa jana hai…..



Tara and Brijesh looked at each other and smile and leave the room…..As they enter the hall, they see Ambika, narpat, neel and shubra coming. After given them the good news. They decided not to disturb them… and they all went home….



Two day's later nahar and saloni are discharge from the hospital and back home. Nahar still has to rest but saloni is feeling better …..



Still will neel and shubra marriage happen…..they next writer will tell you


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Posted: 19 years ago
great job shali. loved it. keep it up.
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Posted: 19 years ago
aww that as really great! 👏 great job, keep it up 👍🏼 😊 , yay naharz back 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
aye hai!! that was soo cute! great job shali!! 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
ramas, ruby and deepa.....

thank you very much....
love you all for suporting me ..... 🤗

shali
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Posted: 19 years ago
wow... never came to this thread before... I'm totally blown away!!! Congrats guys!!!! 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
wow... never came to this thread before... I'm totally blown away!!! Congrats guys!!!! 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
haila!!! I love it!! kya baat hai shali, tum to kamal ki writer nikli!!
"Will holding her he looks down on saloni...Nahar: Kya main tumhare bagair rahe sakte hoon….tum to meri zindage hon … is dil ki dhadkan… har saas per tumhara naam lekha hain…to tumhe chodke mujeh kahaa jana hai….. " I wish that part reflected in what was actually going on ....
so whose next?
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Posted: 19 years ago
Two day's later nahar and saloni are discharge from the hospital and back home. Nahar still has to rest but saloni is feeling better …..
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As they were told to go home, the happiness on saloni or nahar's face was like never before. They drove home in peace, everything looked perfect now. When they reached home, Saloni's heart was jumping with joy, but she said nothing. Slowly they took steps to the main door, Nahar walked with Saloni's support. He took the first step in and lights went out. Everybody in the house gave Nahar and Saloni a welcome back/get well soon party. After a while everyone went to their rooms for rest for the big day tomorrow.

In the morning everyone got ready. Saloni was wearing a pink lehnga with blue embroidery on it, long earrings, silver jewelry and high heels. She was the first one to go because she wanted to help her parents out.
Saloni's cell rang
Saloni- hello?!
- I love you.
She knew who it is. - I love you too, ok bye.

It rang again.
Saloni- jee?
Nahar- miss you
Saloni- me too. ok ab mein jaoun bye
3rd time
Saloni- ab kya hua? hungry?
Nahar- nahi woh..
Saloni got hugged from the back. It was Nahar with flowrs(red roses)
Saloni- why are you here? You are suppose to rest.
Nahar got a little lecture but just smiled to know that he had Saloni safely in his hands.


In the evening everyone started arriving. Shubra was wearing a red heavy worked lehnga with gold jewelery. As Neel arrived he was wearing a white sherwani with a copper color dupatta. They did hatmelap and their phere, Neel put mangalsutra and sindoor in her mang. As everybody said bye to Shubra and Neel, Saloni saw Nahar sitting in a corner starting at her.

Everything went well. Now everyone went home. In Saloni's room while she as taking clothes out to change.
Saloni- Jee?
Nahar Kuch nahi
Saloni- are you sure?
Nahar- Of course. Aap jo mere paas ho.
He hugged Saloni from the back and started kissing her. Everything seemed perfect to saloni now.

To be continued



Nahar and saloni has surprised honeymoon for Neel and Shubhra. The next writer will tell where they are going
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Posted: 19 years ago
I wanted to thank Raksha for her help 🤗 😊 so howz the eepisode *scared*, first time try 😳 hope you guysl ike it👍🏼

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