SP Fanfic: Dostana - part 12 on p17 {10.05.09} - Page 3

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Part 2
The next morning a beautiful lady walks in the Park Lane. She was looking at the beautiful apartments in the street. When she almost was at the end of the street she saw the apartment where she will be going to live.
She looked curious through the window and saw a young men in the kitchen. She took a deep breath and knocked on the door. Nahar made the door open and saw a beautiful lady. She was wearing a black trousers with a white blouse with golden buttons. She has a red scarf on her neck and open hair. She had light brown eyes framed by full eyelashes.
Nahar couldn't say anything for a while..she smiles and tell him that she is Saloni and she had called him last night. Nahar was back to his senses and gave her a hand. Nahar took Saloni to the livingroom and asked her if she wants anything to drink. She told him that she wanted a glass of water. He went to the kitchen and Saloni was looking around her...it was a beautiful livingroom.
Everything was white...the walls, the curtains, the floor and the sofa. They had placed some blue candles on the table and blue pillows on the sofa to bring some colour in the room. She walks to the terrace and she falls in love with the view... she was looking at the beach. The high waves and the glittering sand. Nahar had came also on the terrace with a glass of water. Saloni told him that the view is beautiful...he looked at her and told her that when he first came here to watch this apartment he felt in love with the beach and that's why he bought this apartment.
After some minutes they went inside and Nahar showed her the room. It was a nice room...just like the livingroom everything was white...with some golden and brown candles and pillows. Nahar told Saloni that if she wanted to change the room she can do it...she smiled and told him that she love the room just how it is .
They went back to the livingroom and Saloni told him that his wife had made this apartment so beautiful. Everything is so clean and tidy...everything has its own place. Nahar smiled and told her that he is not married..and that he is living here with his friend Neel. Saloni laughed and apologized...
Saloni: I thought that..because everything is so clean and tidy that...

Nahar: We..mens can also keep our house clean and tidy madame...( he laughs)

But let me tell you one thing...my friend Neel is very lazy and his room is a mess. So the whole credit goes to me.
Saloni: Hmm allright( laughs)...but where is your friend Neel...?
Nahar: He left early in the morning for his work.
After a while Saloni told him that she love the apartement and she want the room. Nahar was really happy to hear this...since Saloni came he had a feeling which he never felt before. Nahar took the contract and gave it to her. He told her that she could take it home with her and read it..and when she will come here with her stuff she can give it to him. Saloni smiled and told him that she trust him and signed the contract.
Edited by jaanlover - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#22
very nice episode! yor are great writer really......


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Posted: 16 years ago
#23
aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah!!!
i love this FF, it's soooo refreshing =D
can't wait for the next part diiii!
and btw, please make Saloni fall for Nahar ... you know na..
they're made for eachotherr =$=$
take care & post the next update soooonn!! =$=$
yours, manisha <3
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Reena,
The part is so good, I loved the way you described the house and the view. I found out today that you have a flair for interior designing judging by the description.
Can't wait for the next part...do continue soon.
Love,
Simz
P.S: Manu....i am jealous of your siggy....😭How can u have my sharukh on your siggy. 😭 Infact how can you carry your Jiju's photo with you???😛😉
Edited by ~Simz~ - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#25

Originally posted by: arpana_j

very nice episode! yor are great writer really......

Thank you so much dear...Your comments are always so warm and kind
You are such a wonderful person.
I will update really soon
With love
aapki dost Reena
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Posted: 16 years ago
#26

Originally posted by: xmanisha

aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah!!!

i love this FF, it's soooo refreshing =D
can't wait for the next part diiii!
and btw, please make Saloni fall for Nahar ... you know na..
they're made for eachotherr =$=$
take care & post the next update soooonn!! =$=$
yours, manisha <3

Manisha dear...thank you very much for your sweet comments
I'm so happy that you loved it. I wanted also a different story this time...so I'm happy that you also think that it's a refreshing stroy 😃
I will update really soon
Take care and keep smiling
Love you 🤗
aapki Reena di
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Posted: 16 years ago
#27

Originally posted by: jaanlover

Manisha dear...thank you very much for your sweet comments
I'm so happy that you loved it. I wanted also a different story this time...so I'm happy that you also think that it's a refreshing stroy 😃
I will update really soon
Take care and keep smiling
Love you 🤗
aapki Reena di

i'm going to ask a very naughty question di ..
when are you posting the next part? 😳😆
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Posted: 16 years ago
#28

Originally posted by: xmanisha

i'm going to ask a very naughty question di ..
when are you posting the next part? 😳😆

I think that I will update in the weekend...Maybe on friday 😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Great part, enjoy NS meeting, scenery description was very good.. Keep it up..

Look how far you have progress as a writer from 1 FF to 2 FF .
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: ~Simz~

Reena,

The part is so good, I loved the way you described the house and the view. I found out today that you have a flair for interior designing judging by the description.
Can't wait for the next part...do continue soon.
Love,
Simz

Thank you so much Simran di...Your comments are always so sweet. It really means a lot for me.
Yes di..I love to design the interior of a house...😳 😳 and I'm very happy that you loved it...😃
I will update really soon di
Love you very much
Aapki choti behan Reena

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