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Posted: 19 years ago
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😊shirley nice going ok really very good believe me .

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Posted: 19 years ago
#12
Really good Shirley...keep it up and plz continue
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Posted: 19 years ago
#13
brilliant....gr8 part 👏 😃 ....write soon 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
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wow!!!!! great!!!!! awesome!!!!! 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Episode 2

(a dream: Over there in Shanti-Niketan, Manasvi is conducting the pooja, behind her are standing ansh, damini, karan-nandini, and bhoomi(k & n's daughter) and her frends are running around, tulsi and mihir r there 2)

(suddenly manasvi hears a alarm-like sound out of nowhere, manasvi wakes up, as it was a dream)

manasvi: oh, sapne sapne kabh hue aapne (looks at the calender).....7th September.......7TH SEPTEMBER!!!! OMG!!! MY FIRST DAY AT SCHOOL!!!

(she quickly showers and gets dressed in a light peachy churidaar, wid matching bangles)

manasvi: where r my earrings....damini!!!......where..... oh there they are!!!

(manasvi quickly comes down, bhoomi and her frends r running around)

manasvi: hey bacho, kiya khaal hai?
tulsi: some breakfast, beta?
manasvi: no mamma, i'm late 4 scool

(manasvi picks up her scool bag and books and leaves 4 scool, and both suraj-manasvi r rushing 4 scool)

suraj: i'm so late!!
manasvi: i'm so late, yaar!!
suraj: the teacher is going 2 murder me!!
manasvi: the teacher is so going 2 kill me!!

(both r coming towards each other but suraj is bothered about his hair and looks, and manasvi is putting her papers 2gether, and both bump into each other, manasvi drops her folders, and suraj turns around 2 c the person, but manasvi turns 2 pick the folders up, a maple leaf comes and lands on suraj)

suraj: i'm sorry (to manasvi).....i'm just sorry, i was late 4 scool
manasvi (still luking down): it's ok
suraj: can i help u there?
manasvi: no its ok i can manage (gets up and the wind blows so she puts her hand in front of her face)

(she slowly removes her hand away...suraj is astonished...both stare at each other and the song plays: Voh milay thai, yun milay thai, dekhne bas unhe waqt bhi rukh gaya, voh pyaar tha chunay kise eik pal ke liye asmaan jhuk gaya...)

(The bell rings)

Both (shout):registration!!

(suraj-manasvi start running manasvi gets left behind a bit)

Suraj: idher ao...(stops and holds her hand and they run to class together) 😉

(both run into class, still holding hands)

Teacher: acha...well luv birds agar aap ney dekha nahin tho bell jaa chuki hai.
Manasvi: ji nahin miss aisi koi baat nahin hai...hum luv birds nahin hai.
Suraj: 😒 haan miss aisi koi baat nahin hai.
Teacher: Acha phir kya vajha hai ke tum dono eik saath late aye ho aur voh bhi haath pakarthay huay.
Suraj: miss in ki koi galthi nahin hai...meri vajha sey yeh late hogayi. Main hi in sey takraya tha.
Manasvi: (turns and looks at him)
Teacher: okay manasvi u may go and sit down, suraj tum scool ke baadh mujhe yehi milne ana, phir discuss kar lenge tumhari sazaa.
Suraj: ji.

(Suraj goes and sits down next to manasvi, suraj corrects his looks...brushing his hand through his hair...a girl winks at him)

Suraj: 😎 wow jadoo ka asar ho raha hai.
manasvi: suniye...thanks ke aap ne miss ko kuch nahin bataya, par aap ney aisa kyun kiya?
Suraj: mujhse dekha nahin jayega ke koi eik maasoom si larki pe eik gandha ilzaam lagaye. kya aap mujhse dosti karogi?
manasvi: sure kyun nahin, m manasvi aur aap?
Suraj: suraj, nice meeting you manasvi
manasvi: same here.

Teacher: well next weeks main aap sab ko eik project dhoongi aur us ke sare details...(bell rings)....class dismissed.

To be continued...

Precap: some boys misbehave with manasvi and suraj sees them and goes up to them and starts a fight.

Howz dat ppl?
Please do give comments.
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Posted: 19 years ago
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hey good one..... 👏 👏 👏 ..i like that.......bas aagae dont write like ....woh mile the bicharne k liye....plzzzzz like kavaia anjali they'll end up marrying different pople.....plzzzz......dont put ekta concept......too much of tension will spoil such good story.....
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Posted: 19 years ago
#17
i wont put too much tension and i wont make them marry different ppl, mastang, dont worry 😊 😊 and besides i'm trying 2 make it different frm ekta's i'm just using her song, but not her concept 😉 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Episode 3

(Class is dismissed)

(Manasvi walks out of the classroom with suraj and they begin to talk)

Manasvi: hey, as a thank you can i treat u 2 sum lunch.
Suraj: haan, sure let's go now.
manasvi: no tum yehi mera wait karo and i will b rite bak, i just need to go and give this to Mr Basu.
suraj: ok sure, main yehi tumhara wait karoonga.

(manasvi gives the papers to Mr Basu and while returning clashes with sum guys in the corridor-inside a building where no one else is)

Guy 1: Hi aap ka naam kya hai?
Guy 2: Are yaar naam ko choro yeh batao tumhara koi boyfriend hai kya?
manasvi: dekhiye, mera pecha chor dhe...varna acha nahin hoga.
Guy 3: kyun kya kar logi tum?

(One of the guys come close to manasvi, manasvi kicks him in the stomach and runs off)

Guy 1: Oi, us larki ko pakro...
Mansavi: 😭 SURAJ!!
Guy 2: bhaag ke jayegi kahan?

(manasvi runs out of the building into the public and Suraj is standing far away waiting for her...she can see him but he can't see her as he is standing with his back to her)

manasvi: SURAJ!! SURAJ!! SURAAAAAAAAAAAJ!! 😭

(manasvi runs upto suraj and grabs onto him tightly...and he turns around)

suraj: manasvi, kya hua....heey, tum ro kyun rehi ho?
manasvi: suraj mujhe bachao

(the guys come upto suraj-manasvi and confront them)

To Be Continued...

Precap:
Suraj: Oi, kya problem hai tumhe...agar mardh ka bacha hai tho aa...aa aur larr mujhse!!
( manasvi is bandaging his wounds as suraj is hurt)

Howz dat ppl?
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Posted: 19 years ago
#19
good yaar.....plzz write it soon.....cant u give give 2 episodes ... 😭 ...i can't wait....
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Posted: 19 years ago
#20
that was great and its funny
plz write soon

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