Feedback Thread- Round 2 IF SRGMP 2008 - Page 3

Originally posted by: advil

rock&roll

You should improve your diction and open your mouth … especially for words like jaaneman, tarsenge..etc. it didn't pitch correctly. Get the A-kar right. The "huh" part should have been a little more softer. A little more playfulness should have been there as is there in the original song. However, a good try.

Thank u very much for the feedback Adi 😊..Am still working on the aakaar 😉.....Hope it will be better next time...😊

Originally posted by: advil

Barnalidi has sent in her feedback.... I am posting it on her behalf . So dear participants, please read on to know what she has to say.

First of a big thank u for the detailed feedback😊...I will certainly work on the aakaar of the song 😊

I cannot get the link to Tabu's song work

Please take it sportingly.

Alaap Gharana

Arun- Your voice is very soft but sometimes your pronounciation is not appropriate like when you say' main". Secondly sometimes some letters are inaudible like 'R in 'pyaar '. This song is so romantic ...that feel is somewhat missing .

Lavanya- You are little bit flat. You have to give proper attention to your sur.Some harkatein are missing Voice is very soft and i m sure just give little bit attention more towards your singing and you ll see improvement day by day . Sing it with feel .

Bandish

Coollama- Selection of song is very good but Sur yahaan wahaan gaye . Concentrate on sur.Dont give vibrations to your voice where not needed specially while ending the line. When you sang 'main hoon main hoon ' correct sur was missing .

Mini- I liked your singing but give attention to higher notes.

Suhana safar- Your voice is very soft melodious...but again you change the scale at some places in between ...specially very prominent in picking up the Antaras.

Tabu- You have to work hard . Sometimes you say words very fast . like 'Bekaraar' ' hote hote hote ' again you are too fast . Sur is completely missing with feel also

Jhankaar

kalpa- This is my favourite song but kalpa you have to work harder on higher notes. Dont give too many harkatein where not required like' Zameen ' Your voice is very sweet and melodious.😊

Rock and roll- sur are ok , sing with open mouth specially 'janeman'. sometimes i liked your playful singing.😊

Sara comb- Sara you have picked the song at very low scale. Is song ka maja to high scale mein hi hai. Don giri chodiye aur practise kariye ...senapati ka hukum hai.

Evilseye- Aapki awaaj mein kuch alag hi baat hai but always this does not suit to every song. Definately you have tried to give that tone to your voice but sometimes it is not required. Good attempt👍🏼

Sursangam

Mala- You have picked the song at low scale due to which that feel is lost.Only by singing few words in different tone does not bring the feel . I think you were not in a mood to sing that song that day ...otherwise good attempt and nice choice of song. Dont give unnecessary stress to words.like ' tum mere ho'

Kiti- Beautiful song ..beautiful pickup.but sometimes your voice seems to be cracky. Ending of the lines are not proper like in Deewana and Zamana . but i liked the quality of your voice. very well done 👍🏼 just give little more effort.

Naughty and nice -This song is purly indian . why this western touch???? This song should be sung in a very soft tone. You are somewhat flat somewhere.

Asseel- Your scale changed in Antara. feel is not there. Sur is also missing.

Best of luck all of you . 👍🏼 Good job. and thanks Adi for telling me .

Originally posted by: sim38

Best of luck all of you . 👍🏼 Good job. and thanks Adi for telling me .

Senapatiji.....🤗 Welcome!!!!and keep coming.Actually apne paltan ko bhi bhejiye to give feedback..😳

Originally posted by: advil

You listen to the clips and just post your opinion on what you hear. If you feel someone lacked in feel, say so.If someone played hiden seek with sur and scale say so😆. If you found a rendition good, mention so. Its simply what you feel afer hearing the songs.😳

Thank you.:-p 😳..Eh eh @ hide n seek with 'sur'..well...I think I'm not the most proper person to comment on 'sur' but apart from that I'll try and just share what I felt..

Alaap Gharana

Lava26:

Yours was one of my favorites, found it very good. Love your voice but the feel of the song was missing a bit, please work on it.

ArunSampath:

You're very good. A little more feel and some attention to diction would only help you.

Bandish Gharana

Coollama:

Good work.. The problem here is that it seemed like you were singing with your mouth half-close. If you work on it, there will be good days ahead of you for sure... :-)

Minirulez:

Nice attempt. A little work on your high notes is required. I also found your voice quivering a bit at places..

Suhanasafar:

Nice try, it could've been better. The song lacked consistency of scale through out its course..

Tabu:

It was o.k but working a bit harder will help you for sure..

Jhankar Gharana

Kalpa56:

Very sweet voice you've got. You were hastening through out the song a little. Take care of it..

Rock&roll:

Good effort. The song required a little more naughtiness, and you seemed to sing with mouth half-close. Please work on it.

Saara COMB:

You could've been much better. It seemed you didn't give the song your 100%..Best of luck.

Evilseye:

It was good. Still you could've made your rendition of the song more mischievous. A bit more regard for feel would've certainly helped you..

Sur Sangam Gharana

Mala:

Enjoyed your effort a lot. Had some more feel been there, it would've been better.

Kiti_g:

Liked your rendition. Found it nasal a couple of times only but apart from that, your voice is very pleasing to the ears.

Naughty_n_Nice

Nice try. A bit more of feel and mischief would've surely helped you..

Asseel:

You sang it in a sweet way but still I think you need to work much harder, dude....

Nice work, you all..👏 Best of luck to you guys..Loved checking all the audio clips..

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Hope I made some sense and didn't hurt anybody's feelings in the process…😳

-Sarah~

Originally posted by: advil

Senapatiji.....🤗 Welcome!!!!and keep coming.Actually apne paltan ko bhi bhejiye to give feedback..😳

Aapka hukum sir aankhon par😃

@ advil-
Minirulz:
The scale was a bit high for you. You struggled at high notes. Try adding a bit more feel. Good attempt.

thanks aditya for the feedback.will definitely improve my higher notes and try to add more feel.


@barnalidi-
Mini – another really good song and very well sung…..but Mini do work on your high notes. Technically very good….feel is also almost there. But the high notes at places is bit jarring and taking away the sweetness of the song.

thank you barnalidi for your detailed comments.will take note and try to improve specially the high notes.


@sim38
Mini- I liked your singing but give attention to higher notes.

thank you for your feedback.one thing is clear from all the feedback i got till now that i need to work on my high notes and will definitely do so.please listen to all future rounds and provide your feedback.


@simplyvivacious
Minirulez:
Nice attempt. A little work on your high notes is required. I also found your voice quivering a bit at places..

thanx for posting ur feeback.will work on high notes.I am not sure about the quivering part but will lsten to my song and try to figure out and improve.please do listen to all future rounds and give us your feedback.

Hi everyone. Below are my comments for what its worth.😳

Aalap Gharana:

Lava 26: One of my fav. songs and you sung it well. Just felt there was too much effort put on some of the words. Loved your voice also.

Arun: Very clear voice and nicely sung. Just the diction needs to be improved upon a little.

Bandish Gharana:

Coollama: Again very clear voice and well sung. I found when you were ending a line i.e. Jaan... there was effort put in and your voice was cracking a little. Otherwise great try.

Mini: Loved your voice and nice try. It felt that you were making too much effort at higher notes so work on it next time.

Suhanasafar: Your scale seemed to change so perhaps you can work on that as it breaks the flow in the song.

Tabu: Sorry the link is not working for me.

Jhankaar Gharana:

Kalpa56: Enjoyed the song except there was too much effort put on some of the words and it sounded strained.

Rock&Roll: Ani!!😃 One of my fav. songs and I loved your voice yaar and a great effort. Just that it felt like you were in a hurry and were reading from a book in front of ur teacher😆 and the feel was missing a tad bit. Now I go hide!!😆😉

Saara COMB: I enjoyed listening to you but the sur didnot feel right in some places.

Evilseye: Loved your voice. Loved your song choice. Well done.

Sur-Sangam Gharana:

mala-sss: Liked your voice and the harketein. But I found the song was slower than the original.

Kiti_g: Another of my fav. songs. You have good voice though you sounded a little raspy in a couple of places.

Naughty_n_nice: Very good effort Sam, nice voice and I love this song also. But somehow it felt different than the original song, maybe the diction of some words or sumthin.

Asseel: Your singing sound streaneous to me but good try. Better luck next time.

Originally posted by: Guardian Angel

Hi everyone. Below are my comments for what its worth.😳

Mini: Loved your voice and nice try. It felt that you were making too much effort at higher notes so work on it next time.

thank you for liking my song minali.yes i am going to work on my higher notes.see you at retro.😳