Extremely IMPORTANT!!!!!!!

Hema Hema Hema
The Guy from the south
The Guy with the right voice in his mouth
The Guy who dominated North, South, East, and West
The Guy we know who is the best
The Guy who can never lose
The Guy who wears the coolest shoes???
The Guy who can actually go beyond limits
The Guy who can really win it
The Guy has songs with a lot of feeling
The Guy who really knows how to sing
The Guy who we know is the best
The Guy who will pass this final test.

Please tell me how good it was. This is reallly important for me. Thanx.

1= WoW you suck

2= I didn't like it

3= Whatever..

4= i would give it a 40 / 100

5=kinda good

6= Pretty good

7=😃Needs some work

8= 😉 cool

9=😛 REally cool

10=👏 BEst thing ever!!!!!!!!!!!

OR make up your own, making 10 the best

Good effort..

But much more scope for improvement.

All d best

my personal opinion...good attempt...room for improvement...learn from scs07 😊

I saw ur post in a previos thread but dint want to comment as u might feel bad. But since ur asking for it, i dint like it. But it was quite funny. No need to be dissappointed. You can do much better. Being a Hema fan myself i surely liked ur spirit in supporting Hema.

Mangal May Ho Hema ki Jai Ho!!!

I have many more which i'll post some time after i get a lot of replies. O ya, i didn't feel bad, cuz it helped me. No matter what u guys say, i won't feel bad,I'll just feel that I need to improve it. 😃

I give you 10 points the song is great and Hema deserves all our support he is a singer and winner too.

Originally posted by: arkaghos

abosultely only a little difference

Hema Hema Hema
The Guy from the south
The Guy with the right voice in his mouth
The Guy who dominated North, South, East, and West
The Guy we know who is the best
The Guy who can never lose
The Guy who wears the coolest shoes???
The Guy who can actually go beyond limits
The Guy who can really win it
The Guy has songs with a lot of feeling
The Guy who really knows how to sing
The Guy who we know is the best
The Guy who would have passed this final test.
The Guy who had a golden chance to prove that he is diffrent from the rest.
The Guy who let go of the chance showing he ia another bird from the same nest.

niCE

The Guy who would have passed this final test.

WOULD HAVE??????????? MEANS HE DIDN'T?????????😕

Dil Chata Hain
Ke main Vinit ko out kardu
pur hum kyan kare?
Dil Chata Hain
Ke Debujit ko phir khabi nah gayain
pur hum kya kare?
Dil Chata Hain
Ke Hema ko highest votes mille
yo hum kar sakte hai 😃
Alag hain Hema ki voice
Kyon ke wo hain meri choice
Kyon Ki Hema is the WINNER
Kitne admi te?
Sirf ek, or wo hain Hema
Deewar jese kareh hain wo debujit,
Wo Deewar Hema to asani se tor denga
Music ne Ahsiqu Banaya Hema ko
Tumari pass talent Hain
or Vinit ke pass HR hain
Debujit ki pass acting hain
Ya agni pariksha to Hema asani se pass kare ga
Kyon Ki wo hain meri choice, or wo hain INDIA KI VOICE


That one was just random things that came out of my head, + i don't speak hindi as my primary language , so there might be some language errors. Hope you like this one.

OK i just re read it and i feel like a dumba**

😆 😆 u r pretty gud thers room for improvement though. i first poem sounded more like a rap 😉