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dunno

@Mindbender

Sparkler

Posted: 16 years ago

#311

Originally posted by: wats-in-da-name

lol
am done with the king !

kyun? king ka bura sapna aaya thaa kya?😆....anyways....ur new id's weeeeeeeeeird!!!..it's pissin' me off like anything!!!🤢...why did u change it!!!!!!...why why why!!!!🤢

don't worry ,
you'll get used to it !

Originally posted by: PiyaBawri

You are welcome!! 😊

Ho sakta hai lekin it still sounds eekish..

lol !

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Ajnabee

@*Woh Ajnabee*

Stunner

Posted: 16 years ago

#312

What is this? Piya logged on from HOME? Is there mera jadoo? 😆

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Summer3

@Summer3

Trailblazer

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#313

Originally posted by: clodpolish

lol
am done with the king !

AWK or YUCK ? 😆😆

But new ID is CP. coming closer to CA ?😆😆😆

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Piya

@PiyaBawri

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#314

Originally posted by: *Woh Ajnabee*
What is this? Piya logged on from HOME? Is there mera jadoo? 😆

I wish babe but i'm still at work!! 😭

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dunno

@Mindbender

Sparkler

Posted: 16 years ago

#315

Originally posted by: Summer3

AWK or YUCK ? 😆😆

But new ID is CP. coming closer to CA ?😆😆😆

lol
i found AWK of no relevance !
simple answer !

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Piya

@PiyaBawri

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#316

👏

A wonderful piece of work. You have a good flowing style and definitely Bollywood has found a script writer. The above pic is I believe from the movie Casablanca, which I enjoyed very much.

Hope u have watched it .

Anyway you are a romantic at heart. The first guy suddenly appearing after a long while reminds me of a Salman movie where he gets rejected in the end. I cannot remember the movie though but I think was partly set in London. Keep up the good work.😊

Thanks Summer ji!! I appreciate all the kind words though I know it's nowhere as good. I am guilty of being a romantic at heart 😆.

The Salman movie was Hum Dil De Chuke Sanam in Italy.

I have seen casablanca and it's one of my all time favorite movies!! a great classic!

I wish i could write for the serials Gur watches all day and make them somewhat realistic!! 😆

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Piya

@PiyaBawri

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#317

Thanks Naz for liking my lame story! 😆

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Gursharan

@Gur.N.cool

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 16 years ago

#318

Piya don't worry, I wont close this thread. You can take all the time that you want.

Can I leave some questions for you, over the weekend. I promise they will be easy. 😳

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dunno

@Mindbender

Sparkler

Posted: 16 years ago

#319

Originally posted by: PiyaBawri

Quite engaging story actually !
The ending however didn't seem to do justice to the beginning !
I mean the beginning was so wonderful ! It was really awesome,but the ending well didn't go down so well in my mind. Nevermind though, its only my opinion !

Btw - why suddenly u started using present tense -
" I couldn't help but notice how lovingly my family is looking at me and how happy each of them seem. Vik smiling ear to ear, beaming proudly as he had just achieved the biggest goal in his life and then."

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Piya

@PiyaBawri

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#320

Originally posted by: gursharan
Piya don't worry, I wont close this thread. You can take all the time that you want.

Can I leave some questions for you, over the weekend. I promise they will be easy. 😳

Oye I dont come on during the weekends you know? abhi ek EASY sa set chodh sakte ho while i'm still at work *SIGH*