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Posted: 13 years ago
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HI 😃 to everyone i felt very bored so i thought of make a fry with INSA 😆 in which some spicy events are added , iam serving u😛 so let me know how this went 😃 and if there is any favor to be added pls do inform me yaar ... pls dont hesitate this 😊 this is about the situation were INSA have planned to separate 😭 but how they both are joining with the true love expressed btw INSA is wrote in this topic⭐️

MATHUR'S HOME:
It is the last night that both INSA sharing single room in the mathur's house ...the 6 months they both spent is vanished like a minute.. it's already late but saachiji is hardly trying to get some sleep but she couldnt . she just turned towards indu and can see that he is asleep . but she couldnt able to close her eyes she is thinking about tomorrow the day which is going to change her life... she is rewinding the day when she see indu as a gunda ,he proposed her,the day he kidnapped and tied a mangalsutra , sughaa raat but she couldnt able to think about the lovable days they both spent ... she said "WHY GOD HAD MADE ME TO SWIRL IN THIS SITUATION,WHY INDU MET ME AND MARRIED ME BUT AS SOON AS TALAK IS ALSO GOING TO HAPPEN "she said to herself why this always happens to her only pls god dont make a situation worse than this she is praying and in the mean time crying ... after a while later she slept and this time indu wake up .. he is just turning in the side of saachiji and talking in mind voice "SAACHIJI I AM REALLY SORRY I JUST TURNED UR LIFE TO HELL ,I DONT KNOW HOW AM GOING TO LIVE WITHOUT U BUT INDEED I HAVE TO FOR UR SAKE " after so much silence he just continued that "SAACHIJI I REALLY LOVE U THAN ANYTHING"
Then he just give his enchanting smile towards saachiji ...

COURT:
JUDGE MADAM asked whether u both have decided about ur life and wat do u think she asked .. without any hesitation indu got up and said "MADAM I JUST WANT TALAK I DONT WANT TO LIVE WITH SAACHIJI ,I DONT WANT TO REMEMBER MY MARRIAGE ,I JUST WANT TO QUIT" he then sit cold heartedly that is damn sure... after making sure of his statement he didnt turn towards saachiji may be he is not able to face her instead ...this time saachiji stood up and she is having the echo of the words given by indu that he dont want to remember marriage life😭 but after hearing this statement she is very reluctant and said "S MADAM I TOO WANT TO QUIT" after making sure of her statement indu thought to himself i am sure u il make such statement saachiji...

MATHUR'S HOUSE:
saachiji is thinking about the words given by indu in the court she is really heart broken ... indu along with his frnds entered mathur's house ..they were knocking the door of INSA room but now it is only saachiji's room ,when saachiji opened she dont know that could be indu, she is staring indu in a way" why did u say those words in court" but she is not having guts to ask him furthermore ... indu without talking any words to saachiji he informed his frnds to pack his things ... but saachiji went outside and standing near the balcony without knowing wat is happening inside her room.😭 after some hours when indu is ready to vacate the room he just overviewed and thought that from today onwards i il not be here with my saachiji in this room with a tear in his eyes which are about to fall but before it could fall he just wiped ... now he searched his { love} saachiji and he called her "SAACHIJI CAN U COME INSIDE I NEED TO TALK TO U "but without any response from the opposite side he just went close to her and repeat the dialogue in the same tone this time also no response ,when he is about to touch her wife shoulder to make her turn he is really stuck and remind that he is not her hubby anymore,saachiji realized there is someone at her back she turned so that she can face indu in his eyes but indu started speaking to her"SAACHIJI AM REALLY SORRY FOR WAT I HAVE DONE TO U IN THIS PAST DAYS ,I NOW ONLY REALIZED THAT AM NOT UR PATHI IN ANY SENSE ,I MADE U CRY A LOT FOR MY SAKE ,I IL NOT BE IN BENERAS ANYMORE ,PLS FORGET THE THINGS HAPPENED BTW US I DONT WANT TO SAY THIS"he paused for a min and continued" BUT U SHOULD MARRY SOMEONE WHO IL TAKE CARE OF U,WHO IS ALWAYS TRUSTWORTHY FOR U ,THANK U SAACHIJI FOR ALL THE GOOD THINGS " and when he is about to move he said "ALL THE BEzT SAACHIJI FOR UR NEW LIFE" he went outside her room not only her room but also HER LIFE ... saachiji is stunned to hear these words from induuu she just cried a lot without knowing the reason .. she thought its all dream then she is madly having the memories of induuu{ the time spent with him} ... now only she realized that she is madly loving induu 😉 and dont want to miss him in her life anymore... after sometime she thought of the word said by indu that he il not be in beneras .. it stucked her mind and went outside the balcony to see were indu is ... but its too late there is no sign of indu and his frnds...



TO BE CONTINUED...

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Rashmi04 thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Too good dear..

Waiting for the next part. 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow lovely amud..

Lovely nhi just awesome...thanku for writing.

Aisa laga jaise mai sanchi hun.

Ye FF h kya...aur tumne mere FF ko padha ya nhi.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Very nice. Hope you update soon!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Aww that's lovely! Thank you!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Rashmi04

Too good dear..

Waiting for the next part. 😊

thank u yaar 😊 surely yaar thanks for ur support😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: sonali.singh

wow lovely amud..

Lovely nhi just awesome...thanku for writing.

Aisa laga jaise mai sanchi hun.

Ye FF h kya...aur tumne mere FF ko padha ya nhi.


thanx sona 😊 i just read ur FF ONLY half and the power cut karega 😃 but that half is really sizzling yaar it made me to read continuously 😊 that too mere pyari indu ka decision to leave his love saachiji is awesome 😊 and the love which is hidden in saachiji 😆 all get together and u served me my fav fruit salad yaar😉 so swweett 😆 when am writting this i just opened ur FF only and am reading it now😊 so the remaining il be commented in ur FF ITSELF dr ...😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
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amud i want to say that since it is a FF so u must change the topic of your thread to a FF with a awesome title...tb sbki nazar jayegi...because phle to mai bhi smjh nhi payi thi...baad me pta chala ki ye FF h...and it is so nice.

Wow sunday par to blast mil gaya...2-2 FF...YOURS AND FAISA.

I m overjoiyed after reading them...please serve us with the next part soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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it should be called blockbuster sundays.. haha😆😉 got to read two short stories and ff..🥳

really superb work amud... keep writing.. waiting for your next part

really loved it totally ... aage kya hoga.. waiting waiting waiting...😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: butterbear

Aww that's lovely! Thank you!

thanks yaar 😊 i should say that u r a good writer too i had read ur articles also 😃 so pls give us more treat with ur style dipped in it😃

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