Adjiraj's diary entry - Page 4

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Posted: 7 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: -MIMOSA-


Looked more like our realisation! 😆

It was fun Chicksoup! I loved this poetical conversation with you.


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Posted: 7 years ago
#32
Chick and M you ladies are so good at this. I'm glad I wrote this post, it brought out the hidden poets out of their corners 😆 😉

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Posted: 7 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: dey.bh

Its so nicely written. The language, the emotions, the feelings of not so rough and tough cop is simply amazing.Please keep updating it. I want to read his meeting with Baldev , Pujan also. One point where he shares his tragedy with Anami is that they both dont like their fathers and I dont mean Murari Pathak. I am talking about her biological father. Then the attack on Anami and his natural reaction to it, the court orders etc. You can take your time until new episodes are aired but please keep it updated.

I want to read about his relation to Dheeru.By tge way, the makers have forgot even Anami used to write. Where is her diary?I thought Baldev would find it out when he came across Vatsalya's diary.I thought he would also find the simarities that Satrupa and Gayatri have seen in Anami and Vatsalya but this guy is an epitome of stupidity and arrogance. At least Satrupa could find it.

If I ever write a diary of another person it would be of Pujan's. I love that man. It would be called comedy of errors,part 2.




Dey thanku for the kind words .I hope they explore more about Adhiraj's thoughts on Pujan and Baldev. Writing his thoughts on these people sounds interesting hopefully the writers would write it well. His tendency to take the gun to target Pujan,I thought that's the immature side of the officer that's causing him to do so but now I feel it's got to do with something related to the past.
Baldev 🥱 I have no expectations from that self centred I'm the victim character..forget Anami's diary he's not even a basic human being acting callous when she was missing.
You must write on Pujan 😃 I really want to know why he likes to dye his hair that particular colour and that kohl lined eyes 🤣
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Posted: 7 years ago
#34
This is beautiful. I'm at a loss of words for the first time. You conveyed Adhiraj's feelings, characteristics, traits, thoughts, everything so well. Loved it. 👏

If I get some time I might actually do a confrontational OS between him and Baldev sans Pujan where Baldev finally feels something for Anami. And then maybe continuations to that. Let's see.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#35
This is so nice Benna. Sorry I came a bit late as I was busy over weekend. I loved the way how his childhood shaped up the man he is. A child who wants to trust, a man who lost his innocence way too early in life, unable to listen to his heart. A man who always wants proofs, proofs for his belief.
But doesnt understand somethings are beyond proof. Just like when he didnt hear Anami when he took the phone, but his heart heard what she wanted to tell, he need to once in a while listen to that heart's whisper.
But then it will take a lot of time for him to do that. Add to that he is the CBI officer who is supposed to take nothing at face value.

A very well written piece 👏👏👏
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Posted: 7 years ago
#36
Better late than never. I finally reached this post. Great Dreamer. Exactly what Adhiraj is going through in his mind I am sure 😆

His heart was knotted in the attraction
Just the way her hair was

Her innocence and her connection to LM strained his heart
Just the way her hand was strained

He did relieve her of the pain
Learning from her actions

Will she relieve him of the pain
Learning from his actions

He reached a point
Of no more sorry. Not for what he feels.

Waiting for the point
Of her no more a child and can feel what he feels.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#37
Adhiraj, a man who has known suffering ,known struggle, known loss and has found his way out of their depths...How much can we ever know about the love and pain in another heart ? How much can we hope to understand those who have suffered deeper anguish , greater deprivation , and more crushing disappointments than we ourselves have known ? Thank you for exploring all this and giving us a beautiful insight into his character.👏

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Posted: 7 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: Athene

This is beautiful. I'm at a loss of words for the first time. You conveyed Adhiraj's feelings, characteristics, traits, thoughts, everything so well. Loved it.👏

If I get some time I might actually do a confrontational OS between him and Baldev sans Pujan where Baldev finally feels something for Anami. And then maybe continuations to that. Let's see.



This is beautiful. I'm at a loss of words for the first time. Shreya coming from you that's a big thing, cause you're a fabulous writer yourself 😳 An OS between Adhiraj and Baldev that'll be good it'll atleast compensate for what's lacking in Baldev's actions in the show 😃
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Posted: 7 years ago
#39
Wow!! Nice post dear :D Adhiraj is really a sweet heart for me :) And you have captured all his feelings so well!!!

But very soon I am feeling he will face something tragic :'( just my gut feeling...What if RKC has a GoT syndrome ... After Vatsalya I am guessing we are on to more tragedy in this show ...
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Posted: 7 years ago
#40

Originally posted by: Dreamer-89



This is beautiful. I'm at a loss of words for the first time. Shreya coming from you that's a big thing, cause you're a fabulous writer yourself 😳 An OS between Adhiraj and Baldev that'll be good it'll atleast compensate for what's lacking in Baldev's actions in the show 😃



Oh you give me too much credit. 😳

I'm on it. Give it a few days. Hopefully something will be up by this weekend...if I get time between Diwali and year end (my company's YE is Oct 31st so it's crazy as most places are with YE).

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