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Posted: 7 years ago
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I am not a writer.I am new to it..n more over English n Hindi are my 2nd n 3rd languages n I am not fluent in both..Hence this is probably going to be a mess..but I just felt like writing..N here it is..plzz be kind.

It happens between the Mirchi scene and the scene when Adhiraj comes back again to apologize.


Confused Soul

Adiraj turned n tossed in his bed in a vain attempt to sleep.But alas sleep is no were in sight.With each passing seconds he is getting more n more restless.That little Ganga kinariwali chori is affecting him way more than it is allowed.He knew she would feel betrayed but he was still hopeful that he can make her understand.But her reaction was way beyond he has expected.WHY?Does he affect her as much as she does to him?And that amir ma ki rajkumari doesnt even spare him a chance to explain.Who ever said women are a rare species got it right.Understanding a woman is a way more heculiar task than conquering Everest.And then here he is who is an absalute virgin when it comes to dealing with ladies.He was always a focused student.Since that day he witnessed his dad getting arrested for a crime he never committed,he had only one aim that is to become an CBI officer.He wanted to take revenge..he wanted to reveal the dark side of Lal Mahal to the whole world.He wanted justice to prevail.He wanted to bring justice to all the wronged common people.Like the law says he also believed even if thousand criminals escape no innocent should be punished.He was so determined to achieve his goal that he never allowed any distractions in his life.So what ever is happening with him nowadays is all new to him.He dnt know why she is affecting him so much.Why those tear filled eyes are killing him from inside.
He will sort out this mess he created..He will set everything right.He will not stop trying until she forgives.With this determination he goes to sleep.
10minutes later
He removed his blanket n switched on the light.no he can't wait till tomorrow.he will do it right now.But it's late night,its not appropriate to Meet her now,we can do it tomorrow,his mind tried to reason..But his heart was adamant.Nothing matters to him at this moment more than her forgiveness.And without any further thoughts he left.He isn't doing it for her sake anymore but for the sake of his own sanity.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Aww an awesome OS - truly smiled while reading it. This is probably the exact POV of Adhiraj - before it cuts to the scene shown in yesterday's episode. Him eating dinner, then shayad going for a walk - retiring for rest and driving over to Lal Mahal. Such a cutie he is ! 🤣

And hey ! - thoughts don't have languages ! We are all one big family and totally bond like fangirls over MiRaj 😆 - trust me you write in turkish - we probably would still get it.😕😆
This was such a perfect piece. Thank you ! - and please keep writing ! 🤗
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: ammu3

Aww an awesome OS - truly smiled while reading it. This is probably the exact POV of Adhiraj - before it cuts to the scene shown in yesterday's episode. Him eating dinner, then shayad going for a walk - retiring for rest and driving over to Lal Mahal. Such a cutie he is ! 🤣

And hey ! - thoughts don't have languages ! We are all one big family and totally bond like fangirls over MiRaj 😆 - trust me you write in turkish - we probably would still get it.😕😆
This was such a perfect piece. Thank you ! - and please keep writing ! 🤗

Thank you so much yar for the response..this one single response is enough for me to try again.
N ya u r ryt..just like love, fangirling also doesn't need any language.
I am so excited for today's episode.
Edited by TriShakti - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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To be honest I actually thought it was the posts people post here, analysing an episode and in that state itself I read your os. You have written the is quite aptly Adi 's view. After reading your os completely, and was about type I have the comment below only to realise it was an os. Sorry for late realization.
It's wonderful os is and I hope you also right the same situation in Anami's point of view.

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: ...Deeksha...

To be honest I actually thought it was the posts people post here, analysing an episode and in that state itself I read your os. You have written the is quite aptly Adi 's view. After reading your os completely, and was about type I have the comment below only to realise it was an os. Sorry for late realization.

It's wonderful os is and I hope you also right the same situation in Anami's point of view.

That's absolutely fine re..it's just a write up..my 2 cents on Adi's charctr..it was my imaginative mind trying to figure out Adhraj.. Adhiraj is perfect as the "Raj" of "MiRaj"..but his character as a whole need more attention..I felt if pov was ever shown in the show it will be something like this..I don't know how to categorize this piece of write up..so said it as an os
Thanks a lot for the comment.
Edited by TriShakti - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Awesome OS..I guess it's d first FF/OS on our show..good one

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