Is loving you a mistake? DiRa SS pt2-pg9

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VARUNI2014

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Posted: 7 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: jasminerahul
Thanks ur lovely comment.I know u r shocked to know how school students can get intimate n get pregnant.But though it's rare it happens.It really happened in some places mainly among hogh class schools(Got to know through some sources).But i don't know what happened to them later.In ye aashiqui series too such school pregnancy was shown.It was inspired by a real life incident.There the girl was given TC n she left the place with her parents.The real boy (His face was not shown,it was blurred)talked at the end of the episode that its been 10 yrs n still he loves her.He is waiting 4 her return.He tried to search 4 her in social networking sites.Bt there too he could'nt find her.He hopes that the girl watches this episode of their story n contacts him.Actually I hate school college physical intimacy.That's why I did'nt show how they got intimate in the past.Do u really want to see in what circumstance they did this mistake?hope u remember that u suggested Krissan 4 Tejeswi's sisters role.So I have chosen her only

yeah no need to write how they got intimate ..but when they r seperating u did it in 2 lines i.e the depth of their emotions and their pain was not written in detail ..please write in next updates on the depth of their relationship and how they miss each other

btw i agree this is not DiRa FB ..since u changed everything about DiRa except their names ..i.e age ..maturity of diya and innocence of diya at 18

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Jeel patel

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Posted: 7 years ago

#32

Awesome update

What diya is pregnant..

Very interesting story

Update soon

Thanks for PM

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Mansi

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Posted: 7 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: jasminerahul
Thanks ur lovely comment.I know u r shocked to know how school students can get intimate n get pregnant.But though it's rare it happens.It really happened in some places mainly among hogh class schools(Got to know through some sources).But i don't know what happened to them later.In ye aashiqui series too such school pregnancy was shown.It was inspired by a real life incident.There the girl was given TC n she left the place with her parents.The real boy (His face was not shown,it was blurred)talked at the end of the episode that its been 10 yrs n still he loves her.He is waiting 4 her return.He tried to search 4 her in social networking sites.Bt there too he could'nt find her.He hopes that the girl watches this episode of their story n contacts him.Actually I hate school college physical intimacy.That's why I did'nt show how they got intimate in the past.Do u really want to see in what circumstance they did this mistake?hope u remember that u suggested Krissan 4 Tejeswi's sisters role.So I have chosen her only

Ur welcomz😳Yeah exactly...Yeah I had read too but it mainly happens in small villages or small towns as because of poor education...But in city...I have seen that episode of aashiqui series but I don't remember much...Sometimes it's due to peer pressure too or for "FUN"...I hope u know what I mean...It's not their age to get intimate n all...Ohh...Yep it would be very helpful if u could show...Oh yeah I do remember that but since u didn't show her I was confused...Thanks for making Krissann Teju's sis as per my suggestion 😊

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Aarathi krishnan

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Posted: 7 years ago

#34

Different take on dira story...but nice

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Jasmine

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Posted: 7 years ago

#35

They r only school students.So there is no question about education,I'm shocked to know that it happens in small towns too.Bcz the cases I know happened among high class students.And my friend who came from a high class school told me how it happened in her school too.But there was no pregnancy.I don't know what makes them do it.In that age they think that theirs is true love n not crush.Maybe mistaking it 4 true love they r doing it.I still don't know.But when realize that its a mistake it becomes too late.That's what I am showing in this SS.Not only Aashiqui ..but in some movies too i saw it.They were also rich students.Actually I never thought of that scene as I did'nt want to show it.but since u insisted I will show it somehow.But not in detail.But i'm sure that it won't be convincing at all as school physical intimacy is not justified at all

Originally posted by: Vampire2468

Ur welcomz😳Yeah exactly...Yeah I had read too but it mainly happens in small villages or small towns as because of poor education...But in city...I have seen that episode of aashiqui series but I don't remember much...Sometimes it's due to peer pressure too or for "FUN"...I hope u know what I mean...It's not their age to get intimate n all...Ohh...Yep it would be very helpful if u could show...Oh yeah I do remember that but since u didn't show her I was confused...Thanks for making Krissann Teju's sis as per my suggestion 😊

Edited by jasminerahul - 7 years ago

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Jasmine

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Posted: 7 years ago

#36

Actually I did'nt write in detail as that was not the theme of the story.The main theme or what this SS is going to convey is entirely different.

Originally posted by: VARUNI2014

yeah no need to write how they got intimate ..but when they r seperating u did it in 2 lines i.e the depth of their emotions and their pain was not written in detail ..please write in next updates on the depth of their relationship and how they miss each other

btw i agree this is not DiRa FB ..since u changed everything about DiRa except their names ..i.e age ..maturity of diya and innocence of diya at 18

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VARUNI2014

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Posted: 7 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: jasminerahul
Actually I did'nt write in detail as that was not the theme of the story.The main theme or what this SS is going to convey is entirely different.

can u give me pespective as to what the main theme u want to convey through this SS

do u want to convey that bcos of their mistake i.e after 6 years though they dont want to be together they have to be together and slowly they start hating each other ??

yeah in rural places i saw these pregnancy things ..but in city life ..they have more idea of birth control and availability is also more ..so getting pregnant is rare ..since 12 th clss studentsin cities also know about morning aftre pills these days and medical stores also give them without any prescription

do rstan and diya stay in rural area or city ..according to u r SS??

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Jasmine

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Posted: 7 years ago

#38

yes...u guessed the theme right.but I'm not revealing much.u r right.In cities birth control is more.but still pregnancy happens sometimes.I have heard many such incidents which took place in cities.but still its rare.Since they are in school not everyone is aware of precautions too.Here Ratan Diya belong to city. First of all in school physical intimacy is rare.So such teenage pregnancy is rare in both cities n villages.
Shocking that these days even 12 std students take pills.I don't support physical intimacy n taking pills in small age.

Originally posted by: VARUNI2014

can u give me pespective as to what the main theme u want to convey through this SS

do u want to convey that bcos of their mistake i.e after 6 years though they dont want to be together they have to be together and slowly they start hating each other ??

yeah in rural places i saw these pregnancy things ..but in city life ..they have more idea of birth control and availability is also more ..so getting pregnant is rare ..since 12 th clss studentsin cities also know about morning aftre pills these days and medical stores also give them without any prescription

do rstan and diya stay in rural area or city ..according to u r SS??

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Mansi

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Posted: 7 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: jasminerahul
They r only school students.So there is no question about education,I'm shocked to know that it happens in small towns too.Bcz the cases I know happened among high class students.And my friend who came from a high class school told me how it happened in her school too.But there was no pregnancy.I don't know what makes them do it.In that age they think that theirs is true love n not crush.Maybe mistaking it 4 true love they r doing it.I still don't know.But when realize that its a mistake it becomes too late.That's what I am showing in this SS.Not only Aashiqui ..but in some movies too i saw it.They were also rich students.Actually I never thought of that scene as I did'nt want to show it.but since u insisted I will show it somehow.But not in detail.But i'm sure that it won't be convincing at all as school physical intimacy is not justified at all

No no u took me wrong...I know they are school children's but I am not talking about education...What I am talking about is "EDUCATION"...That's why I wrote I hope u understand what I mean...Yes it indeed happens there...Due to the wider information available on net n WRONG information it happens...Yes they take pills too...They think their crush to be their love which is where they make a big mistake...In all this whatever it is but a girl has to suffer n it leaves a scar in her life for lifetime...A boy doesn't have to...It's no big thing for him...Yes they have shown in movies too...I have seen it...But there the girl's parents never gave her importance n never spend time with her n she was lonely so didn't knew...They even eloped n the boy was given 2yrs in remand home as they were minor n the girl gave birth to a baby girl...I know but since u didn't gave the depth we can't feel it...I mean nowadays they do as a CHALLENGE, FOR FUN, OUT OF LOVE, PEER PRESSURE, BAD INFLUENCE, MISCONCEPTION n many more...It's ok if it won't be in detail but it would be really great if u could...I know it's not ur theme n u want to show a nice message which is relevant in ur SS...I really appreciate that...And I am with u on that 😊Sorry if I have hurted u...

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Jasmine

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Posted: 7 years ago

#40

Ok now i understood what u meant.Such education was given in our school too.Ours was convent school.So having affair was out of question though 2-3 girls had.But they didnt tell us anything about precautions.What they lectured from morning till evening was never let a boy touch us,bcz only girls suffer,boys just leave.They narrated many real life incidents as examples.thet was very helpful.In my opinion controlling pregnancy in cities n not controlling pregnancy in villages do not matter.My point is students should not cross the border in affairs.Getting pregnant or not is in God's hands whatever precautions they take.I am from a city.my mom is a doctor.many abortions do happen in the private hospital too..sadly most of the couples who come 4 abortion are married.Their reasons r fast pregnancy or they want only 1 child or 2 children.So whether they have education or whether they r in the city it happens.But this SS is not about pregnancy,but the consequences of school affair.

Since I am from a city I thought it happens only in cities.I'm shocked to know that in villages too it happens as I thought village students r conservative n traditional.

I'm not saying that all school affairs r time pass.Bcz I got surprised when many ppl I know married their school mates.Some marriages failed bcz of some other reason.But most of the school affairs r immature.

i really duno in what circumstance they cross their limits.but all I feel is taking pills n doing it 4 fun are done by spoilt kids.i hate such mentality.Not only school,I don't even support college students 4 doing this.

Yes,4 u I will show it briefly.Actually I did'nt show their school romance or their so called depth in relationship as its not the theme of this short story.this will only focus on the after effects n sufferings which the girls face.As i mentioned in the introduction it's inspired by a show which my cousin sister did.But I changed the story as the show was realistic n too depressing.Since its about DiRa I won't make my SS very realistic ,it will be filmy,yet not a sweet soft love story which I write usually.

I duno why u feel that u hurt me.4 that u did'nt tell me anything other than to show their past.

Originally posted by: Vampire2468

No no u took me wrong...I know they are school children's but I am not talking about education...What I am talking about is "EDUCATION"...That's why I wrote I hope u understand what I mean...Yes it indeed happens there...Due to the wider information available on net n WRONG information it happens...Yes they take pills too...They think their crush to be their love which is where they make a big mistake...In all this whatever it is but a girl has to suffer n it leaves a scar in her life for lifetime...A boy doesn't have to...It's no big thing for him...Yes they have shown in movies too...I have seen it...But there the girl's parents never gave her importance n never spend time with her n she was lonely so didn't knew...They even eloped n the boy was given 2yrs in remand home as they were minor n the girl gave birth to a baby girl...I know but since u didn't gave the depth we can't feel it...I mean nowadays they do as a CHALLENGE, FOR FUN, OUT OF LOVE, PEER PRESSURE, BAD INFLUENCE, MISCONCEPTION n many more...It's ok if it won't be in detail but it would be really great if u could...I know it's not ur theme n u want to show a nice message which is relevant in ur SS...I really appreciate that...And I am with u on that 😊Sorry if I have hurted u...

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