Is loving you a mistake? DiRa SS pt2-pg9

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Gopika

@gopsss

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Posted: 7 years ago

#21

Totally new attempt👏... Different story line👏!!! Beautiful writing style!!!I loved it very much... Thanks for the PM... Don't forget me too inform n sorry for late.

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Mansi

@Vampire2468

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Posted: 7 years ago

#22

Beautiful start👏Diya's parents found her unconscious in her room n got shocked😲More shocking news DR gave of Diya being pregnant n her parents questioned her relationship with her friend Ratan😲Good they forgave her n their scene was emotional😭They went to meet Ratan's parents- Ahem n Gopi n told them everything...They blasted on Ratan😒Diya's parents then told it's Diya's mistake too n gave the solution of abortion😲Good GoHem disagreed that n said about DiRa marriage but as they are still in school it can't happenSo now they will shift to US n after 6 yrs will come back n marry Ratan...DiRa meeting for the last time was emotional😭Poor they 😒Her dad is worried for them but her mom assured him that their baby will bind them together😊But who's playing hr sis's role?I didn't got how they in this small age took their relationship to this level...I mean how this...Don't take me wrong but it's...I hope u understand that😊FB would also be great...Nice pics👍🏼

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Harshita Srivastava

@harshiidiv

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Posted: 7 years ago

#23

Very unique concept Di

Let's see what happened next

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Srivalli

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Posted: 7 years ago

#24

Nice start!!

Very different concept.

Thanks for d pm:)

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raksha

@cutieruhi

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+ 5

Posted: 7 years ago

#25

Nice updt

Cont soon

Thanks for pm

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

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Posted: 7 years ago

#26

thanks for the pm!

Diya is only 17 and pregnant!! Ratan is only 15

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floral

@floral

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Posted: 7 years ago

#27

awesome update

love it very much

plzzz do continue soon

thanks for the pm dear😊

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jafg99

@jafg99

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Posted: 7 years ago

#28

Thanks for pm.

A totally different story of Diya and Ratan.. A totally different scenario.. Smaller age gap.. younger and next gen Diya and Ratan..

I hope u wont mind if i suggest u something as a reader/ as an IF member. We havent got to know more about Diya and Ratan and their love, in first update.. u must have planned to show it, in upcoming updates, m sure.. plz try to keep some qualities of Diya and Ratan similar as shown in RLHN/PPK... just to have the connect with RLHN/PPK.. it may b difficult as its a totally different scenario.. And RLHN story ended with Diya's pregnancy and here story starts with Diya's pregnancy..

Here Diya and ratan are quite fast and furiously in love, i guess... it will be good to know-wat will happen next..

I know it takes lot of efforts to structure a story and its scens and then write them down.. 👍🏼 for putting pictures as well..

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Jasmine

@jasminerahul

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Posted: 7 years ago

#29

Thanks ur lovely comment.I know u r shocked to know how school students can get intimate n get pregnant.But though it's rare it happens.It really happened in some places mainly among hogh class schools(Got to know through some sources).But i don't know what happened to them later.In ye aashiqui series too such school pregnancy was shown.It was inspired by a real life incident.There the girl was given TC n she left the place with her parents.The real boy (His face was not shown,it was blurred)talked at the end of the episode that its been 10 yrs n still he loves her.He is waiting 4 her return.He tried to search 4 her in social networking sites.Bt there too he could'nt find her.He hopes that the girl watches this episode of their story n contacts him.Actually I hate school college physical intimacy.That's why I did'nt show how they got intimate in the past.Do u really want to see in what circumstance they did this mistake?hope u remember that u suggested Krissan 4 Tejeswi's sisters role.So I have chosen her only

Originally posted by: Vampire2468
Beautiful start👏Diya's parents found her unconscious in her room n got shocked😲More shocking news DR gave of Diya being pregnant n her parents questioned her relationship with her friend Ratan😲Good they forgave her n their scene was emotional😭They went to meet Ratan's parents- Ahem n Gopi n told them everything...They blasted on Ratan😒Diya's parents then told it's Diya's mistake too n gave the solution of abortion😲Good GoHem disagreed that n said about DiRa marriage but as they are still in school it can't happenSo now they will shift to US n after 6 yrs will come back n marry Ratan...DiRa meeting for the last time was emotional😭Poor they 😒Her dad is worried for them but her mom assured him that their baby will bind them together😊But who's playing hr sis's role?I didn't got how they in this small age took their relationship to this level...I mean how this...Don't take me wrong but it's...I hope u understand that😊FB would also be great...Nice pics👍🏼

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Jasmine

@jasminerahul

Trailblazer

+ 11

Posted: 7 years ago

#30

Thanks a lot 4 such a nice comment.u mean u want to see DiRa fb.Right?I will show FB scenes in btw.But I may not be able to show the whole FB .Actually I don't know how far I can keep DiRa as same as in the show RLHN.Bcz this is entirely a different story n as of now here Diya is not mature n intelligent like the Diya of the show.But in the future episodes you will see a different Diya and Ratan.Yes,DiRa were fast in love.They were wrong n they should know the consequences of the mistake they did

Originally posted by: arulya
Thanks for pm.

A totally different story of Diya and Ratan.. A totally different scenario.. Smaller age gap.. younger and next gen Diya and Ratan..

I hope u wont mind if i suggest u something as a reader/ as an IF member. We havent got to know more about Diya and Ratan and their love, in first update.. u must have planned to show it, in upcoming updates, m sure.. plz try to keep some qualities of Diya and Ratan similar as shown in RLHN/PPK... just to have the connect with RLHN/PPK.. it may b difficult as its a totally different scenario.. And RLHN story ended with Diya's pregnancy and here story starts with Diya's pregnancy..

Here Diya and ratan are quite fast and furiously in love, i guess... it will be good to know-wat will happen next..

I know it takes lot of efforts to structure a story and its scens and then write them down.. 👍🏼 for putting pictures as well..

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