DIRA (FF) : HUME TUMSE PYAR KITNA..UPDATE 13 on PG 39

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Posted: 7 years ago

#91

Originally posted by: arulya

Aise gif se, to mera dil❤️ Mere seene se baahar hi nikal jaayega, Nags..
Thank u so much dear for this 😊
I dont know, why i like Vijay so much.. His STYLE.. His SWAG.. His ACTING..His SUPER se upar waale DANCE MOVES.. Nobody can match him..
Itna achcha to mujhe hindi movies ka koi hero nahin laga, jitna mujhe yeh laga..
Thank u once again for this 🤗

😆🤣

He is just awesome..too good ❤️ He is one of few actors whose movie we can watch with our family and children😳

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Jannat

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Posted: 7 years ago

#92

👏 👏 👏 👏

So Serial wala Confused Ratan's Soul Transferred into FF wala Diya 😆

Pyaara sa Romantic Sa Ratan Sa is trying to pacify his pyaari si Ziddi Wifey

Though he isnt less 😆

🤣 Sharing cot-cum-sofa 😳 🤣

❤️ he is jealous of pillow 😆 is that mean he wanted to be her Pillow😳 😆

Only Pillow 😆 u'll Never know Ratan Baby how many things will Be Lucky 😆

End of the Day Its Tie 4-4 😆

Ratan-Diya-yash bonding ❤️

Waiting for Next.

(Probably will be less Active or inactive till 6th July 😔 but will try to catch ur Updates ,otherwise hope Forum will remain open till I come back 😊 )

Edited by Sana_Jannat - 7 years ago

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jafg99

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Posted: 7 years ago

#93

Originally posted by: plmzaq
Wonderful update
Love it
Continue soon

Thanks plmzaq dear for liking the update😆😆

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jafg99

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Posted: 7 years ago

#94

Originally posted by: Sana_Jannat
👏 👏 👏 👏
So Serial wala Confused Ratan's Soul Transferred into FF wala Diya 😆

Pyaara sa Romantic Sa Ratan Sa is trying to pacify his pyaari si Ziddi Wifey
Though he isnt less 😆
🤣 Sharing cot-cum-sofa 😳 🤣

❤️ he is jealous of pillow 😆 is that mean he wanted to be her Pillow😳 😆

Only Pillow 😆 u'll Never know Ratan Baby how many things will Be Lucky 😆

End of the Day Its Tie 4-4 😆

Ratan-Diya-yash bonding ❤️

Waiting for Next.

(Probably will be less Active or inactive till 6th July 😔 but will try to catch ur Updates ,otherwise hope Forum will remain open till I come back 😊 )

Thanks Sana Dear for liking the update😊😊😊

There is some difference in type of confusion between This Diya and Serial wala Ratan. This Diya is in love with Ratan and she is aware of her feelings and her LOVE ❤️, whereas Serial wala Ratan was very confused about his feelings for Diya, he didnt know if its just frenship or its love.. 😕

Yes, here Ratan is jealous of that MOTA SA PILLOW, as that pillow is luckier that him. Diya hugs that pillow while sleeping, While Ratan has to restrict himself to the other extreme corner of the bed.😭😭 Poor Ratansaa..

Yash had always been very supportive to both Diya and Ratan 😃.. These three are just too good together..

And Be back soon,Sana jaan😊😊..U will be missed here...

We will be waiting for you..😊😊

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Carry

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Posted: 7 years ago

#95

Arulyaaa!😃😃😃

Jitni deir mien padhty rahy yeh update, utni deir tak meri shakal aisi rahy: 😃😳

I had a broaaad smile plastered on my face throughout. It was sooo sweet. I loved it absolutely. 😃👏👏

Bahuuut majoo aayo.. Itna sweet, itna pyara ff likhne ke liye dil se duayein nikal rahy hain tumare liye... 😆❤️ Kash cvs bhi kuch aisa dikhate... kher...

DiRa ke iss terha ke "match" se mujhe Judith McNaught ka aik novel yad aagya... Its name is Something Wonderful. In it also, the hero makes this kind of deal with the heroine... 😆😆 And when heroine tries to run away from the deal, he boldly tells her that she herself signed up to behave like his wife for 3 months... and the term WIFE means that she has to fulfil all her duties towards her husband..which means that she has to do sex with him too!😆😆 He twists the heroine's conditions and then ofcourse... after much persuation and love and intimacy from the husband's part, she finally concedes.. She was in love with him too...but she was angry at him... 😆 Anyway..it was a happy ending for both.

So now that i m reading your ff, i wont mind this kind of twists and tweaks in the deal from Ratan sa also!😉😉 Think about it Arulya... 😃 Ratan sa kia kia ker sakte hain... 😉😉 Mera khuraafati dimagh kafi aagay tak soch raha hai!😆

About your writing - Bro its awesome. Aisa lagta hai that i am reading a screenplay or script of a show... Its really beautiful how you make me feel everything the characters feel through your writing!👏 Thats great.. 👏👏

Hamesha ki masum request.. Next update jaldi dena dost... 😳😳

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jafg99

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Posted: 7 years ago

#96

Originally posted by: Doc.love
Arulyaaa!😃😃😃
Jitni deir mien padhty rahy yeh update, utni deir tak meri shakal aisi rahy: 😃😳
I had a broaaad smile plastered on my face throughout. It was sooo sweet. I loved it absolutely. 😃👏👏
Bahuuut majoo aayo.. Itna sweet, itna pyara ff likhne ke liye dil se duayein nikal rahy hain tumare liye... 😆❤️ Kash cvs bhi kuch aisa dikhate... kher...
DiRa ke iss terha ke "match" se mujhe Judith McNaught ka aik novel yad aagya... Its name is Something Wonderful. In it also, the hero makes this kind of deal with the heroine... 😆😆 And when heroine tries to run away from the deal, he boldly tells her that she herself signed up to behave like his wife for 3 months... and the term WIFE means that she has to fulfil all her duties towards her husband..which means that she has to do sex with him too!😆😆 He twists the heroine's conditions and then ofcourse... after much persuation and love and intimacy from the husband's part, she finally concedes.. She was in love with him too...but she was angry at him... 😆 Anyway..it was a happy ending for both.
So now that i m reading your ff, i wont mind this kind of twists and tweaks in the deal from Ratan sa also!😉😉 Think about it Arulya... 😃 Ratan sa kia kia ker sakte hain... 😉😉 Mera khuraafati dimagh kafi aagay tak soch raha hai!😆
About your writing - Bro its awesome. Aisa lagta hai that i am reading a screenplay or script of a show... Its really beautiful how you make me feel everything the characters feel through your writing!👏 Thats great.. 👏👏
Hamesha ki masum request.. Next update jaldi dena dost... 😳😳

Tumhari yeh post padh kar mere face par bhi itni badi smile😃😃 aa gayi, dost...

M happy that u liked it😆😆 Praise from such a talented writer like u, means a lot..😊😊 mujhe dialogues likhne pasand hain, i find it little difficult to express without dialogues..

Rahi baat match ki, to mujhe humaare Ratan par pura bharosa hai ki woh hi match jeetegen 👍🏼.. Par Diya se jeetna itna aasaan nahin hoga..

I m not aware of that novel.. but it must b v good, like u said.. mujhe novel padhne mein bahut aalas aata hai.. M very lazy fellow.. Aaj tak zindagi mein, sirf ek novel hi padhi hai, woh bhi badi mushkil se, aur woh bhi sirf HALF.. i dont even remember its name😃

Coming back to ratan, yes woh bahut kuch kar sakta hai, par yahan diya usse kuch khaas karne ka mauka nahin dene waali.😆😆. He wil have to be careful while planning..😊 Dekhte hai ki uska dimaag bhi tumhaare jaisa hi khurafaati hai Ya nahin...😉😉

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VARUNI2014

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Posted: 7 years ago

#97

when is the next update arulya ..i got addicted 😊

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jafg99

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Posted: 7 years ago

#98

Originally posted by: VARUNI2014
when is the next update arulya ..i got addicted 😊

Ha ha.. Patience.. patience my Dear Vijaya.. 😆😆

I m still thinking about scenes and dialogues... And uske baad typing bhi hai.. 😕😕

But I will try to post it very soon, for you..😊😊

Edited by arulya - 7 years ago

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desiseriesfan

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Posted: 7 years ago

#99

Loved the update.

The most beautiful thing about these days is Rishta Likhenge Hum Naya had ended and now when I am siting and reading your FF I can actually rethink about the whole idea of odd-marriage in neutral sense.

I don't know if Ratan would actually fall in love with Diya like that in the serial if PPK would merge with RLHN but when I was reading that Ratan had accepted Diya as his wife and trying to do all the things , it felt to me that he is playing with Diya only because he wants her, beside him 24/7. If it is as wife than wife but at any cost he wants her. "Wanting someone at that extent " actually is very intense but is it "that" intense between Diya and Ratan?

Here I think the meaning of intense must be clear. According to serial, movies and novels intensity grows after Love. Intense love, can not be apart from each other, thats what intense .Right?

I am asking to the writer that is Ratan actually "that" much intensely in love with Diya or he was alone all this years, dreamt about her, believed her as wife thats why he thinks he is in love with Diya? I hope I could express what I am trying to say. I think I am also not sure what I am saying 😆 Cause earilier it felt to me that Ratan is clear about his feelings but now I dont't know why it appreed in my mind when he said "Diya, aap mere liye bahut special hai.. Aap mere liye sabse important hain..Diya, Thank you, thank you so much, for giving me this strong friendship, and this beautiful relationship, which I cud never find with anyone else.. Aapke bina, mujhe nahin pata main kya kayunga, jee paunga bhi ya nahin,main nahin jaanta. Main zindagi bhar aapka saath chaahta hun..Aur main jaanta hun ki, aap bhi yahain chahti hai.. Par iska ikraar nahin kar rahin hain.. " 😕

Diya is in love with Ratan, that is 100% clear. But Ratan ke bale main ... Arulya you don't need to answer my question directly if you will make some story about "this" in future update. 😃Even If there is no plan of this part you can ignore and write the way you want to.

Btw I am loving this takrar , point. (DRAW like Portugal and Spain Match, koi kisi se kam nahi)These are giving chill in these situations.

Agian, beautiful story. Addicted like Vijaya. 😃 Waiting for the next part eagerly ❤️

Edited by nancy505 - 7 years ago

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desiseriesfan

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Posted: 7 years ago

#100

Originally posted by: -Nags-
Wow...wow👏👏👏 as always supeer...se...upaar wala writing 😳🤗
I just loved it❤️ I love this version DiRa😳 A loving husband trying to pacify his stubborn wife❤️ Uff this Diya become confused soul like our serial wala RatanShe's juggling between her mind and heart...she wants to keep Ratan happy at the same time she wants to be rude with him 😆😛 Hope Dr. Ratan love treatment gets her out from her confused mode soon and back to loving mode❤️

^^^
For astonishing arulya🤗🤗