A slightly Mature DiRa OS- Kyunki Tum Hi Ho

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Posted: 7 years ago

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Originally posted by: plmzaq
Awesome os

Thank you soo much buddy... 😊😊

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pranurosid

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Originally posted by: Doc.love

AHHHA!!! Nancy! 😆😆 Meri charno ki dhool lene ki koi zarurat nahi hai.. Mien apna aashirwaad tumko de dety hun! 😉😆😆
Thank you soo much buddy for your beautiful comments. I am overwhelmed...honestly.. 😳 I am glad you were able to visualize everything...because yeh sab humko show mien tou dekhne ko milay ga nahi! 😛😉
You wanted an 18+ OS? Well I can write erotica...but I am not sure if you guys will like THAT stuff on DiRa or not... Because that kinda stuff can go reallly hot.. and DiRa are not exactly in that zone at the moment. kher i will weave a story around it but let me know if you think i should go with the hot stuff next time?

I'm always ready to read your writings jo bhi content ho😉

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Carry

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Posted: 7 years ago

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Originally posted by: pranurosid
Yaar main late ho gayi..Pehle pata hota toh I would have slept little late😉 By the way Ayesha you just killed it..Aap Mahaan ho!!! How can you manage it writing so beautifully so that we can imagine very word of your writing😳..Kudos to your writing and the way of expressing those emotions so naturally👏..waah aur kya tareef karun..Wo toh Surbhi and Sravu ne pehle se reserve karke rakhe tey😆 I can all say is waah Mazo aagayo😉

😆😆 Deir se ayi per sahi jagha ayi Pranu! 😉

Thank you soo much buddy for your comments.. I am glad you liked it...

Hahaha..haan Sravu and Surbhi ne pehle reserve ker lia tha.. Next time you make sure you do that too! 😉😆😆

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Originally posted by: Doc.love

😆😆 Deir se ayi per sahi jagha ayi Pranu! 😉
Thank you soo much buddy for your comments.. I am glad you liked it...
Hahaha..haan Sravu and Surbhi ne pehle reserve ker lia tha.. Next time you make sure you do that too! 😉😆😆

Zaroor karungi..Abhi se reserve kar lungi😉 Next OS/SS mein aur thoda romance chahiye..18+😛😆

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Carry

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Posted: 7 years ago

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Originally posted by: mrs_weasley
Amazing... And I understood the twilight reference... I'm a bit of a twilight hater tbh but here the way Ratan mouthed Edward's lines... it felt as if it suited him much more than it ever suited Edward Cullen himself... It was beautiful... The way you have portrayed Ratan in this is amazing... so much in common with Edward's agony yet so much better and beautiful... Very good... And the subtle sensuality was portrayed beautifully too...!!!!

Angel!!! My buddy! 😊 Thank you soo much for the review. Your words mean a lot to me... And I am glad you caught that reference... 😆

I love the Twilight Saga... and for some weird reason, I had a huge crush on Edward Cullen! 😆😆😆 My husband hatesss this saga...he absolutely hates EC...and he makes sure to call it TOILET instead of Twilight everytime I ever try to gush about it... 😆 Later on I ended up loving Christian Grey to the core...and my husband decided to give up on my twisted and kinky choice of male fiction characters! 😃😃 (Its great to see him get disgruntled..i tell you!😉)

Anyway... I didnt want Ratan to sound like EC waise... Ratan is Ratan yar.. hes our confused cutie gadha.. 😳❤️ My latest crush is on Ratan naa...

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mrs_weasley

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Posted: 7 years ago

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Originally posted by: Doc.love

Angel!!! My buddy! 😊 Thank you soo much for the review. Your words mean a lot to me... And I am glad you caught that reference... 😆
I love the Twilight Saga... and for some weird reason, I had a huge crush on Edward Cullen! 😆😆😆 My husband hatesss this saga...he absolutely hates EC...and he makes sure to call it TOILET instead of Twilight everytime I ever try to gush about it... 😆 Later on I ended up loving Christian Grey to the core...and my husband decided to give up on my twisted and kinky choice of male fiction characters! 😃😃 (Its great to see him get disgruntled..i tell you!😉)
Anyway... I didnt want Ratan to sound like EC waise... Ratan is Ratan yar.. hes our confused cutie gadha.. 😳❤️ My latest crush is on Ratan naa...

You are most welcome Ayesha!!! You have written a really great ff and deserve a lot of acknowledgment for the same... 😆

I had read Twilight when I was 14 and I had the biggest possible crush on Edward but then I came across Harry Potter and fell in love with Ron Weasley... (That explains my username mrs weasley as in my head I'm married to Ron... ❤️) But even I have a little crush on Ratan... 😆

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Carry

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Posted: 7 years ago

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Originally posted by: pranurosid

Zaroor karungi..Abhi se reserve kar lungi😉 Next OS/SS mein aur thoda romance chahiye..18+😛😆

Lol... Okay.. I will try to bring it on more hot and more sizzling next time.. hopefully! 😆😆

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Carry

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Posted: 7 years ago

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Originally posted by: mrs_weasley

You are most welcome Ayesha!!! You have written a really great ff and deserve a lot of acknowledgment for the same... 😆
I had read Twilight when I was 14 and I had the biggest possible crush on Edward but then I came across Harry Potter and fell in love with Ron Weasley... (That explains my username mrs weasley as in my head I'm married to Ron... ❤️) But even I have a little crush on Ratan... 😆

Hehehe.. Yes i caught your love for Ron.. I like him too...but not to this extent.. 😆😆 I like HP a lot too.. But for some weird reason, I have only watched the movies and have not read the books! 😕 Which is NOT alright because books are always better than their cinematic adaptations... Its in my to do list to grab HP books and READ them once...

About Twilight, I read the books first... then watched the movies. I am a fan of the books, not the movies...especially Eclipse.. I hated that movie in the entire saga... 😕

Ratan... You know initially I didnt like Rohit much... but later on i started liking him but then hes like a decade younger so i thought...Sharam kero ayesha! you are becoming a pedophile! 😆😆😆 Finally I said Khalli Valli... Go ahead dil! ❤️ and now I harbour only love for our bwoyi! ❤️ kia biceps...kia smile...kia hair... 😃😃😃

(Ref. Khalli Valli is an arabic term to say,Let it go or in desi terms, Dafa kero...bhaad mien daalo...Move on types... 😆 It has been sung as Khalli Balli in the famous song of Khilji in Padmavat.)

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Originally posted by: Doc.love

Hehehe.. Yes i caught your love for Ron.. I like him too...but not to this extent.. 😆😆 I like HP a lot too.. But for some weird reason, I have only watched the movies and have not read the books! 😕 Which is NOT alright because books are always better than their cinematic adaptations... Its in my to do list to grab HP books and READ them once...
About Twilight, I read the books first... then watched the movies. I am a fan of the books, not the movies...especially Eclipse.. I hated that movie in the entire saga... 😕
Ratan... You know initially I didnt like Rohit much... but later on i started liking him but then hes like a decade younger so i thought...Sharam kero ayesha! you are becoming a pedophile! 😆😆😆 Finally I said Khalli Valli... Go ahead dil! ❤️ and now I harbour only love for our bwoyi! ❤️ kia biceps...kia smile...kia hair... 😃😃😃

(Ref. Khalli Valli is an arabic term to say,Let it go or in desi terms, Dafa kero...bhaad mien daalo...Move on types... 😆 It has been sung as Khalli Balli in the famous song of Khilji in Padmavat.)

Oh don't miss the chance to read Harry Potter it's the best book series in the whole freaking world!!!! JKR is the queen!! The movies are good too but still not even half as good as the books... and even though Rupert Grint was bang on the movie Ron is not even 10% as great as book Ron... They've shown him very dumb in the movies so that Hermione seems much smarter... They gave away ALL his good strategies and dialogues and his good qualities to Hermione in the movies without realising that they killed the essence of his charachter... and that Hermione was badass enough without those extra add-on things that they gave her... (she's still my favourite female character in the fictional world ) He's awesome awesome awesome in the books!!!

And I understand how bad it is when someone judges books by their movies... Twilight books I find okay but I don't like the movies at all !!! Kristen Stewart sucked majorly... and has no acting skills whatsoever (even though I hated even book Bella... I was more inclined to like Rosalie for some reason)

About Ratan... It's so perfectly okay for you to like him even though he's younger than you since he's an adult and can make his on choice of consent... so it's definitely not paedophilia 😉😆(but I'm 18 so it's totally perfect even if I take him away from Diya as our age gap would be just 3 years...😉)

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Carry

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Oh don't miss the chance to read Harry Potter it's the best book series in the whole freaking world!!!! JKR is the queen!! The movies are good too but still not even half as good as the books... and even though Rupert Grint was bang on the movie Ron is not even 10% as great as book Ron... They've shown him very dumb in the movies so that Hermione seems much smarter... They gave away ALL his good strategies and dialogues and his good qualities to Hermione in the movies without realising that they killed the essence of his charachter... and that Hermione was badass enough without those extra add-on things that they gave her... (she's still my favourite female character in the fictional world ) He's awesome awesome awesome in the books!!!

And I understand how bad it is when someone judges books by their movies... Twilight books I find okay but I don't like the movies at all !!! Kristen Stewart sucked majorly... and has no acting skills whatsoever (even though I hated even book Bella... I was more inclined to like Rosalie for some reason)

About Ratan... It's so perfectly okay for you to like him even though he's younger than you since he's an adult and can make his on choice of consent... so it's definitely not paedophilia 😉😆(but I'm 18 so it's totally perfect even if I take him away from Diya as our age gap would be just 3 years...😉)

Okayyy! I will definitely grab HP books now.. I think i m not such a major fan of Ron because I have seen him in the movies only... and if they butchered his character, then for sure I have to find out the real guy in the books...

About Twilight.. Bella Swan was a weird person... but Kristen Stewart made her worse! 😕

I liked Rosalie too...but I loved Alice! ❤️ But bella who was the heroine was nowhere in my favorite's list... 😕 I found her very...i dont know..ambition less? 😕 The only thing she wanted from life was to become a vampire! Hadd hogai! 😛😃

Hahaha.. Its not the first time i fell for a guy much younger...b it it happens very rarely..so thts why i was chiding myself... I dont know if you watch Pakistani dramas...but there was a drama that got aired some months ago and was a massive hit all over.. its name is Yakeen Ka Safar. The hero, Dr.Asfandyar...my God!!!! that actor is 23 and I LOVEEE HIM ABSOLUTELY!!! ufff...such a major crush it was...i swear.. 😆😆😆 Do check him out if you get a chance. His name is Ahad Raza Mir...

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