OS: Dill De Gallan part 3/3 pg 3

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Heyy guys this is my frist post on rlhn but I have been a slient reader, I just love writing ff about the couples I adore but it has been a while since I have wrote something and by a while I mean it been a couple of years!
This is just the first part, but let me know if you want me to continue! Thank you!

Ratan and Dia have been married, Ratan came and saved Dia from last the humalition that Abhay had left her at the mandap, it had been a month and Dia and Ratan were "best friends" the shared a room but not a bed, they had come to a understanding that when never one of them would find "true love" they will divorce one another and till then they will pretend to be a couple!

Ratan was stressing over his friends coming London they had herd he got married and wanted to see his bride, even those Ratan liked the Indian dresses that Dia wore he wanted her to wear something western or else his friends would make fun of him and his choice. As everyone knew in London Ratan would marry a model with a outgoing personality and-- his thoughts were interrupted as soon as he saw Dia enter the room with her beautiful long wet hair, she was gorgeous
Dia: Ratan-Sa are you excited about your friends coming over?
Ratan: hmm
Dia: what does hmmm mean?
Ratan: Dia you will never understand me
And with that Ratan left the room
Dia thought to herself "yes it's true we will never understand one another"

Yash: Ratan-Sa are you okay you look so stressed
Ratan: Yash-bana would do I do my friends are coming over and when they will see Dia they will be shock
Yash made a face at Ratan
Ratan: nhai Yash I don't mean it that way I just mean that, everyone thought I would marry someone who wears dresses and is outgoing and can make conversation easily and--
Yash: Ratan-Sa your concerned about what Dia will wear infornt of your friends then just tell her
Ratan: are you crazy you remember when I told her about blue dress she got so mad
Yash laughed: Ratan-Sa your funny
Ratan: your laughing at my situation not funny
Ratan walked away
But he did not know Dia was in the corner listening to everything and she shed a tear "Ratan truly does not understand me, that time when he asked me to a wear a dress he was not my husband but just a friend and even tho right know we are friends he is my husband and I will do whatever I can do to make him happy.

Let me know if I should continue! sorry about any spelling g mistakes!
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Pagalpinky thumbnail
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Posted: 7 years ago
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It's great, please continue
Thanks
-Nags- thumbnail
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Superb👍🏼👏, do continue writing.
DiRa_Love thumbnail
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Firstly, Welcome to the forum🤗
And about ur work, it's awesome..plz do continue
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Even i expect the story to be on similar lines. It is like this title song https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QChA_ic9oy8 . Not sure whether they are using it or not.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sravani_Rao

Firstly, Welcome to the forum🤗

And about ur work, it's awesome..plz do continue


Thank youu 😊😊😛
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: jslakshmi

Even i expect the story to be on similar lines. It is like this title song https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QChA_ic9oy8 . Not sure whether they are using it or not.


Yes me too, but I can't wait so I started wriing ahaha 😛😛
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Nags-

Superb👍🏼👏, do continue writing.


Thank youu
Mina H thumbnail
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Thank for liking guys!! I feel like this part is really long... And maybe boring at parts... And also i know I said it will be 2 parts but I need one more promise!! So here is the part 2/3 enjoy and do comment!

It was lunch time and most of there relatives had left the house to give Ratan his personal space with his friends,
Finally the door bell rang and Ratan was excited to meet his friends, Rohan, Rahul, Tina and Anita

Ratan hugged everyone he was so glad they were here it had been awhile since he had meet them, it was always awkward meeting with Tina because he knew that she had feeling for him so they shared a awkward hug.

Everyone had settled in and they started asking where his bride was, Ratan started feeling anxious about calling Dia

Rohan: bro don't feel shy call your wife I am so excited to see how she looks like
Ratan thought to himself " know i will have to call her and she will come down in her lengha choli with her dupatta drape around her"
Rahul: bro why are you acting like the newly bride... Call her already
Ratan: Dia... Dia

Ratan couldn't beilieve what he was seeing... Dia was standing on the top of the staircase in dress that was upto her knees with a small scarf around her neck wearing high heals and talking on the phone and slowly started her way down the stairs

Ratan was stunned and Dia was already beautiful but seeing her like this Ratan was lost of words
Dia still talking on the phone in the English came infornt of Ratan and the guests she finally disconnected the phone and came and directly hugged Ratan and gave him a small kiss on his check
Dia: hello everyone, I am so glad you guys could and meet us

Dia wrapped her arm around Ratans arm
Ratan still couldn't speak he was confused as what was happening

Anita immediately loved Dia: Dia your so beautiful I can't believe you married this fool
Dia smiled: yes he is a fool... But my fool

Everyone laughed!
Dia: comes guys let me show you around
Tina was getting extremely jealous she wanted Dia's life with Ratan.

After showing then around the boys went on the dinning table and girls went in the kitchen

Rohan: bro Dia is so hott she does not look 30
Rahul: yeah bro I thought she would have had white hair and broken teeth but she is extremely hot
Ratan: stop saying hot you kameenas this is my wife your talking about
Ratan just realized how mad he getting on other guys calling her hot, and probably for the first time he called her his wife
Other side in the kitchen dia was being super sweet towards Tina and Anita but Tina was giving her atta attitude
Tina: I still can't believe Ratan married a 30 year old, he is so fun and outgoing, attractive, he could have had any girl he wanted too
Dia felt bad, she wanted to give her a peace of her mind but didn't, because she was Ratans guest, Dia ignored her and started talking with Anita only

It was lunch time and everyone ate their food and loved it
Rahul: so what do we do here for fun?
Tina: there is probably nothing to do here
Rohan: Tina please shut up, I told you guys not to bring her here
Ratan: there is alot to do here for fun, we can go clubbing
Anita: I don't want to go clubbing I have seen enough clubs in London I want to do something different here
Dia: we could have a fire outside
Anita: yes it will be like a campfire
Dia: prefect, so how about you guys rest for awhile and I will get everything set up
Everyone went to there rooms to rest and Dia was making the arrangements for tonight
When Ratan came and hugged Dia
Ratan: Dia thank you soo much, but how did you know?
Dia: I herd you talking with Yash
Ratan hugged her even tighter: I am sorry Dia
Dia: sorry... For what?
Ratan: I should have just told you
Dia: it's okay Ratan - Sa
Ratan broke the hug and held Dia by her shoulder: but you know what you look beautiful, like soo amazingly beautiful, my mouth had dropped when I saw you, you are probably the only girl I know who looks beautiful in traditional and western clothes you carry yourself so well" , Dia was extremely happy she didn't know wearing these type of clothes will make him soo happy, she felt shy maybe for the first time when a guy praised her and with that he gave another hug to Dia
Only to find out Tina was standing behind them

Ratan moved away: Tina what are you doing here?
Tina: umm I came... Look..ing for water
Tina hated the why he was praising Dia and was shocked
Dia: the kitchen is downstairs... Come I will show you
Ratan held her hand: shamu kaka (the maid) please take Tina to the kitchen and get her water
Tina got really mad and hated seeing them holding hands
Dia: Ratan-Sa does Tina... Like you?
Ratan: yes,what can I do I am just so good looking everyone wants to be with me
Dia: ohh please,.. And do you like Tina?
Ratan: no ways she is not my type
Dia got happy but wondered why is she getting happy...!

Tell me how was it!
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Awesome!👏👏I am eagerly waiting for the next part,😉 please continue😳

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