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Posted: 7 years ago
#11
beautiful updates dear
loved it very much
so DiRa has got feelings for each other which they are unknown
please do continue soon

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Love your parts 1 and 2
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Nags-

Awesome!👏👏I am eagerly waiting for the next part,😉 please continue😳


Thank you for liking it, I will be posting the next and last part shortly! Stay tuned!
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: kusharberry

beautiful updates dear

loved it very much
so DiRa has got feelings for each other which they are unknown
please do continue soon


Thank you so much!
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Part 3/3 let me know how was it! Thanks in advance!

It was time for the campfire
Anita: I have a idea let's play truth or dare
Rohan: bakwas idea
Tina: no let's play it will be fun ( Tina had a plan that somehow playing this game she will get close with Ratan)
Rahul: Woww for the first time Tina agreed with something know we have to play

Anita: let's start with Dia
Dia: areyy me... No I don't want to play you guys go ahead
Tina: yeah that's right she is a old and does not want to play with us
Ratan: Tina, Dia could pass as your younger sister so don't talk about age
Dia was getting up to leave when Ratan held her hand: Dia please play with us
Dia: okay
Rohan whistled: what chemistry you guys have
Everyone smiles and Dia felt shy... She felt warm form the inside and did not know what it was
Anita: okay so Dia tell me, truth or dare... Ohh perfect you choose truth know tell me when did you realize you were in love with Ratan...
Dia laughed: you didn't even let me choose
Anita: it's okay... You have have tell us
Dia: it was his annoying nature
Ratan: my what? Please you would always lecture me Ratan-Sa don't do this Ratan-Sa don't do that
Dia laughed: I would lecture because you needed it
Ratan laughed: very funny Dia
Anita: omg you guys are soo in love, I want a relationship like that!
Tina: enough guys... My turn, and I take a dare
Rahul: hmm what do we make you do
Tina: not you I will do a dare only for Ratan
Ratan: okay how about you stay quiet for the rest of the night
Everyone started laughing and Tina got mad
Dia: stop guys, Tina why don't you dance... On any song you like

Tina thought finally her plan will work and she put on the song baby doll main sona ki and started dancing very seductively and went near Ratan and got him to dance with her, Ratan was feeling awkward but he didn't know how to stop her, there bodies were literally touching and know it was Dia's turn on getting mad, after watching them for a good 2mins which felt like a eternity she got up and changed the song to dil de Gallan
And walked up to Ratan and pushed Tina to side
Dia held her hand out and asked: may I
Ratan smiled: off course
Ratan and Dia started slow dancing on the song and it was magically Ratan spinned are around and she came right into his chest she loved the way he smelled it was intoxicating for her
Dia and Ratan shared a eye lock
When finally Ratan spoke softly: I like the jealous Dia
Dia: the jealous Dia?
Ratan: yes you couldn't see me dancing with another girl
Dia looked away: not true I was just wanted to dance as well
Ratan smiled: sure you did
Ratan kissed her check: thank you for always saving me, wheater it be my relatives or crazy girls dancing with me
Dia smiled: but it seemed like you enjoyed it alot
Ratan: not at all, I kept on looking at you and wanting you to come and save me
The song was at its last verse
And Dia and Ratan were mesmerized in each others eyes
Finally the song finished and broke out of the trance that they were in
Anita: omg you guys are soo made for one another
Rohan and Rahul hugged Ratan
Rahul: honestly saying I thought you must have hated your life here especially being raised in London and we came here so we could tell you to move back with us, but seeing here like with Dia Bhabhi makes me wana stay back here as well
Ratan hugged him again

Ratan's friend had left back for London
Dia had changed back in her clothes
Ratan came to the room
Tonight was Ratans turn on sleeping on the bed, and Dia was laying on the sofa

Ratan couldn't he kept on thinking about the events of today "I can't believe Dia changed her attire for me, that was such a sweet gesture for me, and my friends loved Dia... Expect for Tina but who cares about her, Dia did so much running around today for me, she should not sleep on the sofa"

Ratan picked her up in his arms and softly laid her on the bed, and Ratan laid beside her and they both fell sleep

In the morning they woke up cuddled together, Dia resting her head on his chest and Ratan had his arm around Dia

Dia got nervous and quickly tried to get up but Ratan held her down

Ratan in a sleepy voice: Dia let me sleep na
Dia: how did I come here
Ratan: you sleep walked here
Dia: Ratan-Sa
Ratan: I picked you up and bought you here, you look uncomfortable on the sofa
Dia: likan hum asey kasey sou raha hain

Dia finally got and sat on the bed and so did Ratan

Ratan: Dia I have been thinking last night, I want to give our marriage a chance, I think we can really make it work
Dia looked away from him and Ratan picked his hand up to move the hair strands from her face
Ratan: tell me Dia.. If you don't want this I promise I will never bring this up again
Dia gave a shy smile: yes I want to try to give us a chance as well
Ratan: prefect so let's start with our physical relationship
Ratan started laughing seeing the shock and horror on Dia's face
Dia: Ratan-Sa...
And Dia run out of the bed to the bathroom

Ratan still laughed: I think we will make a great couple!

There finally the last part, do comment and if anyone has any other ideas let me know and maybe I will write out it! Thank you for all the love
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Loved both 2 and 3rd parts
If possible do continue ur works!!
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Posted: 7 years ago
#17
Wow, very nice. Keep continue.👍🏼
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Posted: 7 years ago
#18
wow beautiful update
please do continue it😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
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This is beautiful update u should put more parts it is amazing continue with more stories of dira
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Shafoo

This is beautiful update u should put more parts it is amazing continue with more stories of dira


Thank you for liking I will write on different story about them

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