Dira SS:Ek Rishta likha tumne neya (update on Page 2)

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Posted: 7 years ago
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He opened the card slowly,

Diya
weds
Abhay

A drop of tear fell on the bold letters 'DIYA''. He closed it and looked out of the window. It has been a year but still their differences did not sort out as he still could not get the forgiveness from her. But it was not surprising, he had hurt her self-respect and being the strong woman she was she wouldn't let it go so easily. 'Strong'' that one word bought back so many memories. In front of his eyes he could see her swinging her sword like a true warrior, firing the gun at the wicked enemies and their strong bond, it was not love it was something more pure and different. How could she forgive him for tampering such a pure bond? but only if she knew his purpose behind all these.



'Dattahukum''
Ratan turned around to see his only friend in the house or as one could say in his life.
'Ap chal rahe hain na shaadi mein?'' he asked politely. Ratan kept the card on the table, gave him a smile and left the room.
Yash couldn't believe how much Ratan had changed in the last one year once the chatterbox now rarely spoke a word. The 21 year old boy who always used to look for adventure now hardly gets out of his room or office.

Kaash Ratan Sa hum ghari ki Sui ko piche le ja sakte aur sab kuch badaal patein tou shayad aj ap wohi purane Ratan Sa hote..



Part 2: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/145597334

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Posted: 7 years ago
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wow awesome SS
Please do continue soon
Edited by kusharberry - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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How can this be an OS?!
There is a question unanswered... Why did Ratan do it?
Please update soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Sorry guys it was a typo
Will update soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: ramisaaAli

Sorry guys it was a typo

Will update soon

😆 i was confused ki how is this an os.. waiting for update😃
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Yaar this is not fair, continue fast... waiting ...I really need the story to go something like this in the show😛
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Posted: 7 years ago
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So sorry for the delay guys, I was a bit busy with my exams and nowadays i am so diappointed with the cvs that i was not feeling like to write. But then i thought its my canvas so i shall paint it the way i like😉😉😉 so see if you guys like my painting sorrryy as in my writing😆 hope it will take you away from the current disheartening track. Enjoy and let me know how it is


~~~~Part 2~~~~~

Diya was sitting in front of the mirror surrounded by girls some were busy combing her long thick hair, some making her wear the bangles and some were doing her make-up. She was wearing a very pretty red lahenga.
'Diya bai sa ainey mein maat dekhiye ga aj tou aina bhi sharma jaiga apse...itni sundur lagrahi hain ap'' said one of the girls.
She looked at the mirror and found a numb and gloomy Diya looking back at her. She did not look this gloomy even at that time when HE threw her out of the house.
She closed her eyes and as she opened it, in the mirror she saw him standing behind her wearing that amazing mischievous smile on his face. And everything stopped! The noise,people,everything. She got up and walked towards him. The entire room got dark, the spotlight was on them only. She was standing at a one hand distance from him and looking directly into his eyes.

'Kyun ayen hai ap yaha??'' asked Diya
'Apne bulaya isiliye''
She smirked 'Ap kabse humari baat sunne laggeye?''
Ratan was silent
Diya turned around to walk away but Ratan held her hand 'Ruko''
She looked at him and freed her hand. 'Ruko? Aj ap kehrahe hain Ruko?? Us din kya hua Dattahukum jis din hum ap ke zindagi se chale ja rahe the uss din kyun nahi kaha apne hum mein ruk ne kiliye??'' she walked closer to him 'ya phir uss din jab sabke samne hum mein apki gharwalei beizzad kar rahe the uss din kyun apne unhe rukne kiliye nahi kaha?''
'apne isiliye nahi kaha dattahukum kyun ki...'' she stopped and inhaled...she knew the reason but couldn't let him know that she already knew why he behaved like that!
'Ap chale jaiye Dattahukum hum ap ke bare mein soch na bhi nahi chahte hain''
Ratan got very close to her 'agar soch na nahi chahti tou kyun apne shaadi ke din ap humare bare mein soch rahi ho?''
Diya turned around to go away when Ratan clutched her one arm and then clutched the other and slowly brought her close to him, so close that her back was now touching his chest. He glided his hand from her arm to her waist. When his cold hands touched her bare waist, chill ran down her spine. He brought his lips close to her ear, she could feel his breathe. Diya closed her eyes
'Kyunki Diya Ap humse pyaar karti hain''

Diya opened her eyes in shock and she was gasping.
'Kya hua Diya bai sa'' asked one of the girls. She looked in to the mirror there was no one around her, no one.
She got up and walked away. Soon she reached the empty hall room, the same room where she used to hide when she was a child. It was an abandoned room with thin white curtains. There was no furniture and the only sound in that room was the howling wind whoosh but then one other sound came to her ear. It was her own name called out by him.
She turned around and saw him.
And this time she knew it was not a hallucination.


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Posted: 7 years ago
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wow beautiful update
so did diya just realized she is in love with dada hukum
iam really waiting for face off
plzz do continue soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
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CVS need to see this thread and realise how beautiful Dira can be.
Unbelievable writing👏, waiting for the next writing. 😳

I really wish cvs show something like this in future😛
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Amazin do pm me when its updated

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