Kaya OS-Intezaar(part 6(last) -pg3)

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suparna sinha

@kritraj

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

okay so this is not gonna be so long (something like 6-7 parts).Here Kabir and Ananya both are university students and neither kabir has a past nor Ananya's father is dead.Basically it is not related to the show...so enjoy.😊

Part 1

She was feeling cold.The early spring wind was a bit piercing.She stamped hard.Under her feet was a layer of willow leaves(where they were studying there was a old willow tree) ,wet and slippery.She turned around again and examined the willow tree behind.Well,he was told to come and meet her under this willow with the thickest trunk and roughest bark.Why hadn't he turned up yet?

Mist was curling up from the pond.A little farther away,were bushes,teaching buildings-all were hazy and seemed to be floating an the mist.

"I too am floating in the mist," she said to herself absent-mindedly.

The incident had made her dizzy.It was yesterday,at noon, that she had received the letter.At the sight of the bold and unrestrained handwriting, she knew at once who had written it. They were from the same university, the same batch.And here was a letter. 'What's at the bottom of it?' She wondered.Sensing something significant,her heart beat faster.She into the bushes on the campus,and tore open the envelope.

Written on the snow-white writing paper were just two lines:

"Are you willing to be with me forever on the voyage?

Kindly send me your answer."

~Kabir~

She didn't quite understand at first.It wasn't until after she read it over and over again that she understood its meaning.Ananya lowered her head and blushed all over.What nonsense! She couldn't help feeling both angry and flattered.She was a bit confused.Oh,this fellow,the first bold boy t say such things to her.

😃Tbc...😊

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A Merry Christmas

Have a nice day

~Suparna 😊😊😊

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Part 3-Page 2

Part 4-Page 2

Part 5-Page 3

Part 6-Page 3

Edited by kritraj - 9 years ago

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Shreya

@annabethpercy

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Posted: 9 years ago

Nice concept!!Cant wait to read further😊
Continue soon😃
Lots of love n Merry Christmas to you
Shreya

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Zannat Akter

@Zannat18

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+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

Loved it 😳
Very excited for next part 😉
Merry Christmas to you too 😊

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cuteariya

@cuteariya

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

wow kaya 🤗
continue soon

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suparna sinha

@kritraj

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

Thank you for everyone's comments and here it goes chapter 2...

Part 2

'What to do?Yes or No? can it be such a simple matter?' Walking aimlessly through the bushes

Ananya plucked a leaf and rubbed it in her hands.

He was respectable but not amiable- all the other batch-mates shared this opinion about him.His sharp features and deep bass voice added to his dignity and strength.He was doing well in different subjects,

and was more capable than any other classmate while they were working together in the university.Yet

he was uncommunicative and eccentric.

They have been studying together for a year and a half,but seldom talked to each other.Their conversation had never exceeded five sentences.This term he had his seat shifted to behind hers,and that gave them a chance to talk a little more.The other day she had collected a bundle of grass stalks,

weaved them into cats and dogs and put them on her desk.He came in and stopped in front of her desk. "How interesting they are!" Kabir said,and cast her a cryptic glance with warm shining eyes.

After he returned to his own seat for a while,he murmured her name,asking for a cat.She complied,

and that was their first formal contact.After that they talked more frequently.He would ask her what she was going to read,and then borrow the book for her without being asked.While she was troubling over a maths problem all by herself,Kabir would throw a chit of paper with hints on it.

Whether she admitted or not there arose in her heart an obscure desire to see him.😳

😊Tbc😊

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sandy11WARIS

@sandy11WARIS

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

very nice story... would love to read more

very intresting...

plz update soon... eagerly waiting

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Moner_Radio

@Moner_Radio

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

college romance huh ? as i read the two updates, i got reminded of the song Pehla Nasha. update soon. KaYa looks adorable as college students 😃

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cuteariya

@cuteariya

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

Wow Kaya's college romance

That's gonna b interesting

Continue soon

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suparna sinha

@kritraj

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

so again thanks for all your comments and here goes the next part...😆

Part 3

She enjoyed watching him delving into books,performing mathematical calculations on the blackboard

doing chin-ups on a horizontal bar,or taking a stroll with his head lowered.Whatever Kabir was doing,

even a glance at his dim figure from behind would make her feel steady and sure.On the evening he went to take part in the Physics Competition,Ananya felt vacant.As a result,everything she did during the two self-teaching periods turned out to be a failure.She did study harder than before.Whenever she was going to give up,a voice would ring from within-

'He always gets good marks.He's a boy of strong will,but I'm poor.No I must catch up!'

She had no idea that he would write to her;moreover,so boldly and frankly.She was upset and couldn't decide what to do.Then the bell rang for the afternoon class.She entered the classroom with her head lowered,feeling instinctively that his expecting eyes were searching her face unsteadily.

After class,as he passed her,she happened to be raising her head.Their eyes met.As if dominated by some supernatural power,She told him against her will,that she would be waiting for him under the old willow tree by the pond at Five o'clock the next morning.Then she would give him an answer.

Ananya looked into the distance with uncertain eyes.The moon was loosing its light,the stars were becoming invisible,the day was drawing a pale wash of light in the lower sky to the east.

'Its time He came,' she thought.

Hoping to hear the familiar footsteps soon,for she was indeed tired.Tortured by the struggle between emotion and reason,Ananya had a sleepless night.

On the other had She'd rather not hear the familiar footsteps,because last night her decision had been to refuse him.She didn't know him very well, so how could she accept his proposal?Her heart urged her to say "Yes",but the voice of reason had it.She could survive the agony of losing him,but what if Kabir should suffer...?

She slowly broke of a willow branch and fondled the greenish leaves on it.

😊Tbc😊

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-Suparna