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Sri

@sridhsc

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Posted: 9 years ago

#701

Firstly thanks Raman & Zannat,

Amazing I must say, this should be bought by someone to make it a finite series.

Kabir negotiating for a kiss tells that someting had happend the night before, did Ananya give out her passion and kissed in her druken state? some clarity please.

What's coming next in line to negotiate for to keep sweeto in the house.

Nothing's wrong in losing control over ur emotions for ur wife, eventually ur going to fall in love with her someday. Hoping to see it happen soon.

I know ur punctual in ur updates but I am greedy. Zannat please update soon this once.

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drsm44

@drsm44

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Posted: 9 years ago

#702

Very nice update Zannat! Was waiting since long! Now again we have to wait!( for how long?) Like in the serial Reporters you also have a habit of leaving the story on a cliffhanger😉 n let our imagination go wild over the next few days , just thinking about...what next? Thanks for being so consistent inspite of ur studies👏 Plz...update sooner!

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0913155

@0913155

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Posted: 9 years ago

#703

Dhasuuu update loveddd it awesome superb amazing update plz cont soon thanks for pm😉

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ArthunaAlive

@ArthunaAlive

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Posted: 9 years ago

#704

And woweee !!!!! So very intense that I can feel the fumes coming out 😉 Great going Raman 👏 And do please update ASAP 😃

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KnowItAllSwot

@KnowItAllSwott

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Posted: 9 years ago

#705

God this update was amazing zannat...👏👏
& Raman DI hats off to you👍🏼 amazing story...
So kabir let the mystery of the night unfold to ananya😆😆
Poor girl...!! she was so tensed..😉
OH my god...!! another kiss☺️ I think they will surely set a new record of kissing when they even don't want to see each others face🤪 so kabir taught ananya what real kiss means😳
Go kabir go...!!! 😆 finally kabir got to know about the dogwaiting eagerly to know what's gonna happen next...!!! all in all loving the pace of the story..!!
continue soon & thanQ for the Pm dear...

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sutapabanerjee

@sutapabanerjee

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Posted: 9 years ago

#706

Rocking update.

Raman only deserves a big applaud.

Ananya doing stupid things has really become your nature! How come wearing a payal you can run away from HIM.

I bet Ananya nothing happened don't over stress your mind in this state the karoos is only teasing you.

Ogling lusting everything happening. I so loved their discussions conversations negotiations there end result is sooo thrilling as Mr. Sharma always loosing control.

Love sick puppy is now furious against the puppy and his Mommy dear but must say Sweetoo loves his Daddy too much.

Thanks Zannat for the PM but you missed me on the 7B reply under so much pressure to update. Take your time and update let the suspense hang.

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sonia_adelaide

@sonia_adelaide

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Posted: 9 years ago

#707

Love u zannat and Raman
U alive those characters so beautifully
Love led the way kabir is sinking likes helpless teen. 😭
Sweetu is another catalyst for this two crazy people's

I am sure kabir is going to get another beautiful penalty
for his expensive shoes from his beautiful life partner,

Ohh this the first time I am so happy to see a mess like this
Ananya is loving this negotiations I believe
She will make kabir crazy for saving sweetu I am dam sure
This time the negotiations should be more hot and crazy

Love u Raman
Keep writing
We r such a fan of urs
Hope when u will be a celebrity writer U will not forget us

Thanks for pm me
Update soon
Bye
Sonia 😛

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-Prinky-

@-Prinky-

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Posted: 9 years ago

#708

As always it was Awesome !!!!!

wo Negotiation part...ohh my...she was just driving him crazy...

but wo last me kya hua...now it was the HAD for Mr. Sharma...

so eager to read more...

plz come soon with next update...

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Purnima

@-purnima-

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Posted: 9 years ago

#709

Its kiss day & I am reading ...oops Mr Sharma is explaining what is a kiss 😳 😳 ... 😆😆 dat was a nice learning experience though lost focus 😳 😳

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Ok, focus back after a day 😆😆😆 lovely UD 😛😛

Mr. Sharma was having fun I guess, teasing his wife 😛😛😆 poor girl confused "kuch hua tha ya nahi" ... waise Mr. Sharma, Ananya ripped off your shirt ....& you dont seem to be minding it the least 😆😆😆...man seemed to have loving it, he cud have always taken back shirt with him 😆😆 but he didn't wanted to miss opportunity to tease his wife 😆😆😆 & must say ...quite a controlled man 😛😆

The name of game is "control"...it wud be interesting to see who looses it first 😛😆 ...& Kabir playing pool .must have been a sight ...

Waise, Mr. Sharma is this the way to negotiate? ...I doubt how long you will be able to control yourself 😛😆...even your wife 😆😆😆😆 waise Mrs. Sharma ...mujhe bhi naukri ki zarut hai 😆😆 can I apply too, Kabir 😛😆 7 ko employment di, ek aur sahi 😆😆😆😆 Mrs. Sharma will give another kiss 😆😆😆😆

& Sweetooo run for your life Baby 😳😳...come to me I will hide you 😆😆 let your mommy & daddy dear sort out 😆😆😆 coz can imagine Gussa+Kiss is on the way ...or may be time for some caveman romance.

By the way, Mr. Sharma...will gift you brand new shoes as a Vday gift, as many as pairs you ask 😛😆😆 Sweetooo ko maaf kardo 😛😆😆

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p.s.--wonderful effort from the writer ...& ofcourse putting in extra effort to post it here... 😃😃
Keep the updates coming 😃😃😃

Edited by -purnima- - 9 years ago