Hello One Man Army, you nailed it, I just loved your update...
Manav and his sarcasm well these two things I love in Manav the most, and Congratulation to Mr. Kabir Sharma, he finally escaped, I know it will sound so stupid but from last three comments I am saying this : I want to see my Angry, manipulative astute Kabir Sharma back and I hope I am going to see him in this avatar in upcoming updates...yes or no that depends on you but let me tell you one thing Shiny I am loving this story so much, completely different angle and top class writing these two things are just great about this FF...
And Shreya's bitchiness is increasing day by day, she is seriously very nasty villain in your story. Shreya lady please have some shame, how cheap will you be??? I mean she is really crazy, firstly she kidnapped Kabir and when he escapes she kidnapped Ananya, she should be a professional kidnapper instead of business head...kidnapping people this job suits her well and she has some experience in it too after all she kidnapped two persons firstly Kabir and now Ananya...
I hope I will see Kabir back in action soon, he has been very silent here from the beginning...now let me see how Kabir saves Ananya from Shreya or maybe some other twists you are planning to give us, you clever writer... either way I stay tuned here...I am eagerly waiting for your next update and thank you so much for your PM...
And the most important thing you don't need to feel guilty for anything I just love your way of presenting things and yes that bollywood style KaYa meeting sounds funny, I am glad that it didn't happen what you are writing now sounds much realistic and beautiful and keep up the good work...you are a smart writer darling and you know that...
Please update soon, I am eagerly waiting for the next part...sending lots of hugs and kisses on your way...love you shiny baby, muaahh...
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