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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Mrumi

Dear Shiny..

i just don't know from where i have to start... when i have finished reading this update... i was motionless for nearly 10 min... *with both my palms on my mouth* OH God... you are genius.. you are not only genius.. you are indigenous.. i know.. i know.. this is not my dialogue.. i have stolen it from DDLJ..😛😛
but what should i do?? after reading this update my brain is not working... can not think anything but only about your update... it is nearly 2:15 am and now sleep is far away from me...

You know i was hell angry on you when i have read your favorite line
Picture Abhi Baki Hei Meri dost
after last lines..😡😡matlab aisa bhi koi karta hai...??? i was expecting something... you know.. WHAT...😉 and suddenly the end... not fair...😭😭😭

but chalo maf kiya..😃this update is best new year gift for me..

The thing which director couldn't do, you did it.. so Khurana can investigate without Kabir's help..😆😆😆He remembers that he is a Policeman.. i so wanted to see his Policegiri.. and you have written it in such a way that anyone could think that you are a police personnel or you see this type of interrogations daily..

Ananya's move was expected.. i knew already that Regina couldn't keep her mouth shut in front of 'Kabir's fiance..'

Shreya is good for nothing..👏👏.. ek kam usse thik se nahin hota..😉 but this time she did a good job.. very well Shreya.. kabhi kabhi bhulna achha hota hai..😛

and my dear Kabir.. if you really want to kill Shreya i am with you.. i am ready to join you as your partner in crime... but i think somewhere that the person behind the door is an unexpected but so wanted guest for you..😉😉 Right Shiny?? it's totally fine if i am wrong but i don't want to be wrong..

I am feeling sad that the end is near.. now it is my new habit to wait for Shiny's update..
i am going to miss it.. but i am so sure that this fiction will always be there in everyone's MEMORY... Oh no.. why am i saying this things now.. It is still on..😃😃

and don't say sorry dear.. writing 32 pages update is not an easy thing... actually hats off to you.. and one thing you will never ever be the reason of anyone's tears.. keep this thing in mind.. how could you think this stupid thing..😡

My specialmessageto Nijisha... thank you dear,, that was the best question which you have asked her..😉 sorry but i am little selfish.. please keep asking her questions..😆😆

Wish you both a very HAPPY NEW YEAR
stay blessed.. keep smiling..😊😊




Darling !!!

Aww that's so sweet of you!! I am smiling like crazy !!
* Laughs nervously * but that's my favourite favourite part !!
Aww thanks love!!
Ha ha ha !!! I always wanted Inspector Kurana to be an important part !! Becz Police is one profession that's so cool!!!! Lols !! Glad it didn't feel odd !!
Tight lipped!! Lols !!
Aww that's so sweet of you!!! Lols ya ... So don't worry !!! ( I console myself by saying that !! Lols)
Thankyou so much !! Aww... You touched my heart !!
My sis was laughing when she read ur note... She said she will keep asking!! Hugs from her side!!
Thankyou so much yar !! Love ya !!!
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: shinyshajil

Thankyou so much !! Well I would prefer to be tight liped 😉 😆 I am known to spill the beans !!


The Wait is always fruitful, the old saying.
It's indeed fruitful. Bang on dear.
So the hint was in Chapter 4 and it got clear for me after Chapter 7. You were tight lipped after that, should i dance.. no no you are more intelligent than me⭐️.
Got to see the feisty, fiery Ananya. Muskan first saw the difference and was intelligent enough to call Regina. Can visualise both Ananya's wrath Inspector Kurana's anger. Very strong write up.
Our hero is always hero : Anything for his love and hate.
But still scratching my head Ananya already inside the room heard a sound from behind... Kabir waiting for Shreya to open the door what is next

A Happy 2016 to you and your sister and also to the family.
For this FF 👏 ❤️

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Posted: 9 years ago
Better late than never *phew*
I am here 😎 Happy New Year Di and Di ki Di 🥳
So I read this update half at night under my blanket and half in the morning while going to school😆...
This chapter ... Was AwEsOme 👍🏼
Ahaa the headphones.. Shreya was listening to Ananya and Kabir's covo ... Thats the reason she was flusterd 😵...
This is such a good and planned FF ...Oh My God Di...👏
Shreya😡😡😡.. She gave money to Regina to do all the nataka 🤔...

Yayy !!!!🥳Khurana and Ananya both found out that Shreya is the culprit
Kabirr let me help u to kill the 🤬 Shreya ...
Did Shreya shift kabir somewhere else ?
I have no freakin idea
But whatever Shreya is really intelligent in ur FF (not complimenting)
Nooo...Ab isse bhi end karreho 🥺.. ok no probs u will write something else na *devilish smile*

Di ki di 😆thanks for giving such an awesome idea to di😎
*hug*

Happy New Year once again ... Aapki har iccha poori ho and may u write many stories in the coming years *issme bhi mera faida😃*

Chalo bye ...
Thanks for the PM
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: sutapabanerjee


The Wait is always fruitful, the old saying.
It's indeed fruitful. Bang on dear.
So the hint was in Chapter 4 and it got clear for me after Chapter 7. You were tight lipped after that, should i dance.. no no you are more intelligent than me⭐️.
Got to see the feisty, fiery Ananya. Muskan first saw the difference and was intelligent enough to call Regina. Can visualise both Ananya's wrath Inspector Kurana's anger. Very strong write up.
Our hero is always hero : Anything for his love and hate.
But still scratching my head Ananya already inside the room heard a sound from behind... Kabir waiting for Shreya to open the door what is next

A Happy 2016 to you and your sister and also to the family.
For this FF👏❤️

Aww !! Yes I remember when you had pointed it out !! But I just couldn't comment on it .. Owing to the fact that it will be revealed a bit later !!
Thankyou so much .. Glad u liked the way the story moved !!
Tight lipped again !! * Grins *
Thankyou love !!
Hugs !!
Edited by shinyshajil - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: FangirlForever

Better late than never *phew*

I am here😎Happy New Year Di and Di ki Di🥳
So I read this update half at night under my blanket and half in the morning while going to school😆...
This chapter ... Was AwEsOme👍🏼
Ahaa the headphones.. Shreya was listening to Ananya and Kabir's covo ... Thats the reason she was flusterd😵...
This is such a good and planned FF ...Oh My God Di...👏
Shreya😡😡😡.. She gave money to Regina to do all the nataka🤔...

Yayy !!!!🥳Khurana and Ananya both found out that Shreya is the culprit
Kabirr let me help u to kill the🤬Shreya ...
Did Shreya shift kabir somewhere else ?
I have no freakin idea
But whatever Shreya is really intelligent in ur FF (not complimenting)
Nooo...Ab isse bhi end karreho🥺.. ok no probs u will write something else na *devilish smile*

Di ki di 😆thanks for giving such an awesome idea to di😎
*hug*

Happy New Year once again ... Aapki har iccha poori ho and may u write many stories in the coming years *issme bhi mera faida😃*

Chalo bye ...
Thanks for the PM


Aww you aren't late choti!! 😊
Thankyou love !! Yes.. She was listening to the same convo.. Oh how bad would she have felt when the love birds were romancing!! Lols !!
😳 😳 Ya love planned everthing ... And especially I planned the ending first !! Lols !!
Ha ha ha the lady has some brains !!
Sure love .. Will surely write once I get an idea !!

My sis sent u a big load of kisses!!
Aww thankyou so much love !! Lols sure baby doll!!
See ya !!
Edited by shinyshajil - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: shinyshajil

Aww !! Yes I remember when you had pointed it out !! But I just couldn't comment on it .. Owing to the fact that it will be revealed a bit later !!
Thankyou so much .. Glad u liked the way the story moved !!
Tight lipped again !! * Grins *
Thankyou love !!
Hugs !!


I pray so that your author mind is on full flow and your thumb and finger be healthy enough to give us a fantastic update very soon as this suspense is too much.
Loved your romactic naughty wala fiction and also in awe of this.
Hugs.
All the best.
Happy writing.😊😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
Just loved it ...👏 👏
Awesome writing..👍🏼
Continue soon..😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey Shiny...
I m so so so sorry...for not commenting on last two updates...

coming to the story...m speechless...seriously don't have words...to praise you girl...it was mind blowing !!!!
so the picture is clear now...
but you stop at that point...& I can't wait to read more...plz continue soonish...

Happy New year to you too dear...!!!!!



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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: sutapabanerjee


I pray so that your author mind is on full flow and your thumb and finger be healthy enough to give us a fantastic update very soon as this suspense is too much.
Loved your romactic naughty wala fiction and also in awe of this.
Hugs.
All the best.
Happy writing.😊😛

Aww thankyou love !! Ha ha ha.. I wish the same !! I am unwell , so in bed.. Will start the next update once I feel a bit better !!
Hugs and kisses !!
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Diksha_1991

Just loved it ...👏👏

Awesome writing..👍🏼
Continue soon..😳

Thankyou diksha!!

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