Few OS and FF: ***KABEER AND ANANYA---THE WAIT*** (COMPLETED)

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RNpoint1857

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Posted: 10 years ago

#141

Originally posted by: piamastani
Hiie!!!
Happy independence day...
Good going yaar...
Kabir kya read karne wala hai...eager to read the next part ...please update soon ...

😊 Will continue soon... Glad you are liking it. 😊

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-Prinky-

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Posted: 10 years ago

#142

Hi dear...Happy Independence Day

Update was nice...

What Kabir want to read...

Continue soon...

Thanks for pm 😊

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Sokool27

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Posted: 10 years ago

#143

Happy Independence Day to you too..😊

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shinyshajil

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Posted: 10 years ago

#144

Happy Independence day !!! Awesome update!!!

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heartbroken1

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Posted: 10 years ago

#145

happy independence day !!!! awesome story !!!!!

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Misha (Sumitra)

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Posted: 10 years ago

#146

Happy Independent day.

Read all you os and parts and I totally loved it.

Excited to read more.

Do PM me when you write next.

Love

Misha

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RNpoint1857

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Posted: 10 years ago

#147

Originally posted by: RNgirl
Happy Independent day.
Read all you os and parts and I totally loved it.
Excited to read more.
Do PM me when you write next.
Love
Misha

Please check the index and read my all other works too.😊

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LaviDovey

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Posted: 10 years ago

#148

read three parts in one go.
sorry for this late comment but you know tge reason.
all the parts were amazing and superb.
will comment a long one as soon as i'll be able to do so.
thnx for pm.
keep smiling.

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RNpoint1857

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Posted: 10 years ago

#149

Originally posted by: krazykaju
read three parts in one go.
sorry for this late comment but you know tge reason.
all the parts were amazing and superb.
will comment a long one as soon as i'll be able to do so.
thnx for pm.
keep smiling.

Your short comments are enough for me.😊 Although I told you, you don't have to comment at all. But here I m receiving a reply of 3 lines. Awesomeee 😡 by the way thank you so much.😊

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RNpoint1857

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Posted: 10 years ago

#150

PART 9:

Clearing his head he forces her to speak "Kya tumhe farak padhta

hai mere hurt hone se?" "Jab aapne kaha tha ki mujhe iss baat ki saza milegi ki main apke mana karne ke baad bhi akeli chali gayi thi, tab mujhe yahi darr lag raha tha, ki kahiin aap mujhse baat karna na band kar do. Jab apko dekha wahan tab darr laga yeh soch kar ki kya apne wo letter read kar lia hoga?" Then she pauses and with a hint of surprise in her voice she asks "Waise aapne mujhe bataya nahi ki aap wahan kaise pohnche?"

Smirking, Kabeer says "Tumhara letter milne ke baad main Khalid

ke cabin mein gaya aur usse kaha ki mujhe kuch zaruri kaam hai, mujhe leave chahiye. Fir KKN se nikal kar jab car ki taraf gaya toh socha ki ye jagah gadi le jane ke liye safe nahi hai to bus se wahan pohncha" "Aapne bus mein travel

kia?" she asks, astonished. He smiles. Then she whispers "Mere. Liye?" "Ji. Miss. Kashyap. Aapke. Liye" replies Kabeer. Again listening to the word 'Miss Kashyap' gets her grinding

her teeth. Catching her expression and realizing what blunder mistake he has occurred, he

says "I..." the smile, the laugh, the sorry, the mixture of everything, serves as an obstacle in letting him to complete his line.

Getting bold she moves towards him and says "ab apko kya saza milni chahiye Sir?" "Jo

tum dena chaho" he replies almost breathless. Suddenly, Ananya remembers, yet again that she is crossing her limits and feeling utterly shy, she gets back. The sudden resignation of Ananya, results into turning Kabeer's hand into fist, out of frustration, then he shakes his

head, closing his eyes. Then soon resumes to his normal self and resumes his reading.

On the other hand, as Ananya succeeds in clearing her mind, she feels victorious.

Edited by Sterolinelover - 10 years ago