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Aazeen02

@Aazeen02

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Posted: 10 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: tina_1234
Aweww nice

Thanks Tina :-)

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Gourav

@Shubh007

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Posted: 10 years ago

#42

Awesome & Cute OS...👏

Just Love It...😊

Every Scene Is Mind-Blowing...👍🏼

Every Scene Was Portrait Beautifully...,...⭐️

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RajeshwariR

@RajeshwariR

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Posted: 10 years ago

#43

Aazeen, as usual beautiful writing.. I wish they had shown this in the show. u were very close to what actually happend like -
they both r in Kabir's cabin, now we dont know how they landed up der but using ur imagination now we know :)
Ananya says in the show ,how can we be 2gether wen I hv resigned. in ur story too, Ananya talks about it.
I wish kabir had shown the rejected letter in the show, bcoz 1st time when Ananya resigned Kabir had signed. his acceptance. now they suddenly changed the track saying Khalid signed it and Kabir convinces Khalid and Malvika to retain Ananya till her replacement is found.. which is actually nt so convincing fr me.

so pls keep up the gd work, u hv good instincts when it comes to KaYa😊

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Aazeen02

@Aazeen02

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Posted: 10 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: Shubh007
Awesome & Cute OS...👏

Just Love It...😊

Every Scene Is Mind-Blowing...👍🏼

Every Scene Was Portrait Beautifully...,...⭐️

Hey Shubh...

Thank u so much dear for all the lovely praises...

Means a lot to me...

Thanks again...😃

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Aazeen02

@Aazeen02

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Posted: 10 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: Gouri_Joshi
Sweet OS dear

Thanks Ranjini...😃

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Aazeen02

@Aazeen02

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Posted: 10 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: RajeshwariR
Aazeen, as usual beautiful writing.. I wish they had shown this in the show. u were very close to what actually happend like -
they both r in Kabir's cabin, now we dont know how they landed up der but using ur imagination now we know :)
Ananya says in the show ,how can we be 2gether wen I hv resigned. in ur story too, Ananya talks about it.
I wish kabir had shown the rejected letter in the show, bcoz 1st time when Ananya resigned Kabir had signed. his acceptance. now they suddenly changed the track saying Khalid signed it and Kabir convinces Khalid and Malvika to retain Ananya till her replacement is found.. which is actually nt so convincing fr me.

so pls keep up the gd work, u hv good instincts when it comes to KaYa😊

Hi Rajeshwari...

Hehehehe... I just attempt to write what I think could happen...

But to match to the calibre of the writers of the show, I still need to learn a lot!😃

Hehehehe... I hope they had shown it my way, how they reached in Kabir's cabin...😉

Ananya talking about resignation... Well if she hadn't, toh baat kaise banti...😛 She had to talk about that...😃

Haan, there Kabir saying it's in Khalid's hands, and not his, whereas, last time he himself had signed it on the resignation letter...

Well, I think, it was to create the drama it seems...

I shall continue writing...

My instincts... Well I think they have started matching already with the writer...

2 scenes from my SS- Marrying Miss Kashyap have already been used in the show...😆

The first time the scene written by me was used when Kabir comes to Ananya's mother to tell his past himself, inspite of both confessing their love... Same as my story... Ananya had agreed to marry him, inspite of her mother's denial... But Kabir went to Anita Ji and convinced her until she agrees, since he doesn't want the relation to be taken on the grounds of her denial, and just half hearted... SAME TO SAME...😆

The episode on 23rd July, the first scene, where Ananya walks in Kabir's cabin asking his permission to go early home, since she has some work, and Kabir inspite of knowing what it is asking details... Again... The first scene of the 1st chapter of Marrying Miss Kashyap... Ananya asked Kabir's permission to go home early, and he inspite of knowing that he is going to her home as the prospective groom, deliberately asking her details... SAME TO SAME...😆

Let's see, aur kitni soch milti hai...😆

Thanks for the reciew though! Loved it!