Release Me!!!- SS

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Posted: 10 years ago
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I am not sure how long this story will be. Most likely an SS.

Release Me

"I look around me and know I am never alone,
For you are my shadow.
I hear my heart beat and know I am never alone,
For you are the rhythm in my beating heart.
All is see is you.
All I hear is you.
All I feel is you.
You own me,
Body and soul.
Release me,
So that I can come to you.
RELEASE ME!"

Kabir Sharma


Release Me!!!

Index

Prologue - page 1


Disclaimer:

All credit goes to the creatives of the show. I am just tweaking their creation with my imagination. :)

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Manyata5 thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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You have got me hooked already!
Beautiful lines..
Continue soon cause i m waiting impatiently
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Prologue

Present Day

Sitting in his tiny cell, Kabir Sharma smiles as he stares out into the dark sky through a small window. The prison warden, Sailesh Mehra walks up to his cell for their routine coffee. Over the years he had formed a fatherly bond with this particular prisoner.
Hearing the warden's foot steps nearing his cell, he turns to greet him. It was a nightly ritual that had some how been established over the ten long years.

Sailesh frowns slightly as he hands Kabir his cup of coffee, stating softly, "I don't think I have ever seen you this happy, content." Kabir grins, nodding, he says, "true. You haven't."


Saddened, Sailesh asks, "why are you looking forward to death?"

Smiling, Kabir asks, "have you ever been in love?" Sailesh nods. Kabir continues, "how would it feel knowing that every breathe you take, is a constant reminder that you can never be together."

Placing his hand on his heart, Kabir adds, "every heart beat is a reminder of how her forehead rested on your chest as she gasped for her last breath."

Raising his arms, he looks at them, adding, "every time you hold something, you are reminded that you were unable to hold her, help her as she bled to death."

Closing his eyes, he imagines their last moment... Both on their knees, hands tied behind, inches apart, facing each other.



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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awsum storyline!
Very well written!
Update soon! 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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nice concept. plz update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Fuzz!!! I am already hooked to this story!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Amazing Concept
INtresting...😊

Continue soon

And PM me
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Sounds interesting ...looking forward vto read more 😊 😃
Have been silent reader of ur RagNa ffs 😊 😊 ...they had been wonderful... are u still continuing them 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Amazing story ! Please continue soon 😊
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Originally posted by: Manyata5

You have got me hooked already!

Beautiful lines..
Continue soon cause i m waiting impatiently


Thank you. :)
Will try to update soon.

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