How to train your stupid Reporter:A KAYA SS(chap 4 updtd pg 31) - Page 15

omg...
this is so thrilling.
u should start writing for thriller shows. what a perfect suspense u are creating?
amazing.
now m damn excited to read further of this ff.
the plot is amazingly intresting.
try to update soon.
thank u so much for pm.

loved it... gripping update.. continue soon... and pls don't forget to pm me.. else I may miss your updates...

shreyu,

lovely update.
so the adventure starts.
why do I feel like either they are gonna kiss the heck out of each other or kill each other by the end of their detective work😆😆
but I know you are partial for the first one so we can eliminate the second option na😆😆

Ananya is average? Arey Ananya ji, U have a body and sharp features which I would die to have. And as usual a superb update. Kabir and his flirting

kabir know his effect on girls and he uses it carefully to take out his information

Originally posted by: SuperChillz1

Well done Shreya!

A gradual increase in thriller coefficient with a smooth build up of plot! 👏 I can so imagine Kabir using his excessively sweet skills of taking out information form women 😆 The update was amazing, but that slight tinge of KaYa, i missed it. Next chapter me hona chahiye 😉

ooho ! itni late response, although i know what caused u this 😳delay .

yaa next update would be kayalicious...that part is sure.
yaar i got gaali from my pati for sleeping late, giggling like a lunatic at my lappy, he asked who is on the other side ?? ur virtual bf ?? i said no but virtual bff...who wants a bf anyway, aap ho naa kaam bigad ney keliye.😆

Originally posted by: shreya_rc

ooho ! itni late response, although i know what caused u this 😳delay .

yaa next update would be kayalicious...that part is sure.
yaar i got gaali from my pati for sleeping late, giggling like a lunatic at my lappy, he asked who is on the other side ?? ur virtual bf ?? i said no but virtual bff...who wants a bf anyway, aap ho naa kaam bigad ney keliye.😆

aage ki baat toh sun...now he has become suspicious ki pakka koi naya bhoot chad gaye meri sar pe, he even tried to peep on my screen...ab tujhe toh pata hai my sigy would give it away in seconds, so i slammed shut the screen and pushed him away saying he is just overworked and needs to rest his brain !!

Originally posted by: Sagi.

"Miss kashyap, it is not the time for fangirling. I am not God. But i shall try my best..."

The best thing in this update according to me.

Kabir admitting it that Ananya fangirls him.

There is substance in your story. Something apart from fangirling and the heroine falling in the Hero's arms, and the proposal/marriage/childbirth.

Please update soon!

oh yeh, kabir knows she fangirls over him all the time.😆

about substance, yep i promise no syrupy sweet romance here, thoda substance hai, dont embarrass me thouth comparing with the pathaka u r delivering !! aap pehle updatekijiye. waiting eagerly for ur next chapter.