remix ... .FANFIC ..updated

hey!! guys here's a fanfic by me and its my first attempt....so please reply and temme hows it... if u dunt like it still reply lolz... 😆 😆 temme shuld i cont or not ..



(remix! remix! that was da only thing that every1 could hear after the performance)

sid:wow man! ull rocked. da whole audience is goin mad. but yeh concert agar un orphan bacho ko madad karne ke liye nahi hota toh ull would hv got such a lot of money.what a waste.

ashi:sid yeh waste nahi hai. remix humne banaya tha not just 4 money it is our life aur agar yeh life kissi ke kaam Aaa sakti hai toh y not aur agar tumhe itni problem hai toh u can leave.

(remix had made all da 4 very rich they reach maurya da next day they come 2 know that if da scholarship students do not pay rs 30000 in a week as donation they wont b allowed 2 sit 4 da xams every1 meets in da canteen.)

varun: yeh log itne saare paise kahaa se layenge dont they understand ki itne paise agar woh log de sakte toh woh log scholarship students kyun hote?

ranvee: yeh bahut galat hai banaa humeh kuch karna hoga.

meher: issme hum kya kar sakte hai woh scholarship students ki problem hai.

ashi: yeh sabki problem hai. hum jaakar jumbo se request karenge.

tia:ya we will do that lets go now.(they all go 2 jumbo)

jumbo: nahi nahi yeh nahi ho sakta yeh mera order nahi hai yeh trustees ka order hai.

ashi: lekin sir aap unse request toh kar sakte hai na.

jumbo: nahi i cannot do nythin ab tum log mera time waste mat karo.

ashi: agar aap aisa nahi karenge toh hum strike karenge.

jumbo: well than let me tell u miss ray agar aapne aisa kuch kiya toh ya toh aap rahegi ya toh remix.

ashi: sir this is injustice.

jumbo: woh tumhe jo lage lekin yeh hi mera final decision hai ull may go now.


critism WELCUMED...... 😳 😳

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hey nice fiction i liked start it started just from where it ended in remix and
perfect continuation from serial the way they help for orphan that was so sweet of then they can do anything for betterment of society but i couldnt understand if they just performed for orphan the way they did in remix

how come they became rich so fast you could have made them rich after some more shows in fiction i would have loved to see more concerts and performance by remix 😆 😳 and ranveer meher and all arent scholarship stuedent now

well for start its ausumn and has a remix spirit do continue soon will love to read it more 😉

Hey Snehal it's nice! One thing though, don't forget ki Ranveer aur Meher dono hi scholarship students the. Otherwise it's all cool! Continue soon!


Komz

Originally posted by: angel3142

hey nice fiction i liked start it started just from where it ended in remix and perfect continuation from serial the way they help for orphan that was so sweet of then they cando anythingfor betterment of societybut i couldnt understand if they just performed for orphan the way they didin remix how come they became rich so fast you could have made them rich after some more shows in fiction i would have loved to see more concerts and performance by remix 😆 😳 and ranveer meher and all arent scholarship stuedent now well for start its ausumn and has a remix spirit do continue soon will love to read it more 😉

hey thnz for ur coment
well its not their first perfomance they hav had many performances earlier n thts y they r rich now n so ranveer no longer a schorlarship student n tia is helping meher .....

u ll cum to know further ....how ranveer reacts tells them to hv patience...

Originally posted by: AshiYuvi4life

Hey Snehal it's nice! One thing though, don't forget ki Ranveer aur Meher dono hi scholarship students the. Otherwise it's all cool! Continue soon!

Komz

hey komal thnz a lot for coment
i m glad u liked it 😛 😃

n well the foursum r rich now coz of there concerts so ranveer doesnt need to depend on scholarship n for meher tias helping her .... 😃

PART 2

(every1 goes away all 4 meet in da shed in da night)

uv:anvesha tum kya paagal ho gayi thi u no tumhare iss paagalpan ke wajah se ull screw up remix too. so just stop ur nonsense.

tia: ya tumhare wajah se remix bhi danger main ho sakta tha.

ashi: you all r so selfish tum log ke samaj main nahi aata ki aaj remix jahan hai wahan remix ko inhi logon ne pahuchaya hai ,tum log main se mere saath kaun hai.
(no 1 agrees with her)

ashi: thakur tum bhi nahi how did u 4get ki kabhi tum bhi.......

ranveer:ashi aap ki baat sahi hai lekin humneh aisa kiya toh jumbo humeh exam ke liye nahi baithne denge apko bhi ashi.

ashi: aur un log ka kya jo waise bhi nahi baith paayenge.

ranveer: hum samaj sakte hai lekin isse remix ko bhi nuksaan hoga.

tia:ashi its very simple tumhare saath koi nahi hai you get dat n dont 4get ki tum akeli remix ke liye decide nahi kar sakti.

uv: thats absolutely right so wacho just stop it ok n lets practise.

ashi: no! agar tum log ko itni hi problem hai n ull think ki ill screw up remix toh i quit!

ranveer: ashi aap aisa mat kijiye. yeh aapki zeed hai.

uv: let her go ranveer remix uske bina bhi survive kar sakta hai.

ashi: fine then ab jabki main remix main nahi hu toh i dunt think ki main jo kar rahi hu usse remix ko koi problem honi chahiye.(she leaves)

ranveer: banaa yeh remix hum main se kissi ke bhi bina adhura hai.

tia: ranveer tia ko lagta hai ki ko woh punk wapis Aaa jayegi.

uv: yeh ranveer dude! jab jumbo ke strict punishment milegi toh miss ray will b back 2 square 1 chill dude she will b back.

ranveer: jitna hum ashi ko jaante hai humeh nahi lagta woh waapis ayegi.



hope u ll lyk it 😳

hey dis part is gud n really waitin to know what happens next what will remix do noe!

Originally posted by: picadally

hey dis part is gud n really waitin to know what happens next what will remix do noe!

thnz nattu 😃
i ll cont soon 😉