Full stp.yet no end-AY-shot-vanshi bday..

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Posted: 17 years ago
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heya frend heres ma ay one shot afetr ages this is only because of vanshi... vanshi i kept ma promsie and heres ur secodn gifty ma ay one shot...i am sorryy if its nt good just staretd riting 2day and completed in very less ime because as i ahd promsied i had rite but didnt had time b4 so i remmebred 2day and staretd riting dis just some tiem b4 in afetrnoon and finallly heres ur secodn gift i hope u like it atleast bit...because i rlei cn't cum 2 any conlcusion.....

FULL STOP YET NO END...

It's been quite few days they haven't been talking properly prolly because of the recent fight they had just on stupid issue. Others were totally unaware about it because they never showed the actual happening between them always pretended every where for any situation.

One day she was sitting in her room just trying to get cheer up and thinking ways how to now teach that physco a lesson. And there prolly as it was his mistake he was trying to create ways to say sorry to her which was indeed difficult for him. Sometimes she thought of putting rats in his room or sometimes she thought of bathing him with muddy water.😆She thinks of something and then that thought vanishes in no time. Maybe because she is just pretending to take the so called "badla" from him. The other place he was still thinking what he should do to say sorry and first of all how can he say sorry (even though he knew it was his mistake).😉

Actually it all happened that she was trying 2 organize some stuff and he in fun ruined everything then he realized it was for him only. Though they weren't dating yet everyone knows they indeed had feelings for each other and could nt open in front of everyone properly. She felt furious with this and wanted to take now revenge, we all know her how she is.

It was almost mid night, she was not able to sleep so she steeped out of her room silently and was going towards the shed when she saw him in the common room. She thought of now irritating him (how can she be normal if she is not up to anything)😆. She thought in this way she can also take her revenge.

She went towards him and said….

Aashi: OOOO!!! Aaj daddy's boy yaha akela baitha koi koi bada sa security guard nahi rakha apni protection ke liye. (She actually enacted like for koi bada security guard….) 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣

Yuvi: Aashi tum yaha….😳😳

Aashi: nahi mere ancestors ka bhoot hai yaha pe jo tumhe khane ka soch rahe hai chalo kaha fry karoo tujhe. 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣

Yuvi: Shut-up Aashi tumhe aur kuch naya nahi suja bolne ko…🤓🤓🤓

Aashi: meri marzi mein jo bolu mein jo karoo usse tumhe kya….

Yuvi: ahaaaa ya ya tumhe toh pakka ek ……ek …ek…(he could nt think further , obviously hamari aashi samne ho toh kaise soch sakhta hai yuvi ji)

Aashi: kya ek ek….tum haklate bhi ho who toh mujeh pata bhi nahi tha lagta hai kal abhi bulletin board pe lagana padega ke

"Koi bhi jo yuvi se baat karo please apne reply ke liye patience rakhna zaara yuvi ji ko time lagega reply dene mein"😆

And she laughs like helll in her totally wacky mood🤣

Yuvi: wacko tumhe kya chhaiye aadhi raat ko yeh sab discussion karne aayi ho yaha pe

(he gets really frustrated, ek toh yaha he was thinking about to sorry and now his wacko is trying 2 vanish that thought from his mind as she was actually upto taking revenge).

Aashi: hey bhaggu tumhe abhi pata chala ke mein tumhare sath discussion karne aayi hoon taaki tumharee inactivated brain ke neurons ko kuch energy mile mere pyarese neurons ke paas se aur tum bhi thode samajdar bano.😆

Now really was having real tuff time and he was like almost going to the highest level of frustration. 😡😡😡

Yuvi: wacko apna moo bandh rakhogi , mujhe tumhare saath raat ke is samaye baat karneka koi shauk nahi.

Aashi:awwwww daddy's boy dar gaya, physco daar gaye kya mujhse hahahhaha ….woh bhi raat hai isliye…..$#@$!@#!@#!#!@😆😆

Aashi was not stopping her talks she was on and on ……giving cute sweet gyans to physco that he is afraid and all. And our dear yuvi was like ab mein kya karooo like always.

Yuvi: wacko tumhe kya lagta hai Yuvraj Dev ko daar lagega hahahhaha, lekin mujhe abhi mood nahi hai tumhare saath discuss karne mein chahe jo bhi ho

Aashi: aakhir bata diya nah daddy's boy ho, aur yuvi itna toh mein tumhe janti hoon ke tum mujhse kitna darte ho …hhehehhehehhe

Yuvi: Aashi tumhe kya chhaiye raat ke is samaye pe….$%^$#%!@#!

Aashi got the chance she was now again thinking something and trying2 ignore what yuvi was saying….

😆

Yuvi: wacko tum kya sun rahi hoo….

Again she pretended and started walking here and there as if she is in deep deep thoughts (hehhehehhehee…) actually she was just irritating our dear daddy's boy. 😆

Then yuvi goes to aashi holds her tight and says…

Yuvi: tumhe kya sunai nahi de raha mein kabse bola ja rahoo….

Aww dat seems reli cutee ……😳

Aashi wasn't able 2 speak for sumtime dey actually were almost lost in each other's eyes when yuvi's stupid cell rung…..(stupid becoz rong time pe baja re….)

It was sid's call, he wanted 2 know where had yuvi gone at this point of time , yuvi told him he would be back in sometime.(y sid had 2 calll😡)

Aashi just got geared up back and just wanted to forget what happened in just last few minutes those eye contacts , yuvi holding aashi, etc….

But aisa ho sakhta tha….yet she started pretending again…

Again now both wud b back in action….yuvi abhi thoda fise josh aur hosh mein aaya(hosh I m nt sure bharosa nahi aashi ka jaadoo kabhi bhi chal sakhta hai hamare pyare yuvi pe…hehehhehe)…😆😆

He turns around and now talks bac 2 aashi….

Yuvi: tumhari problem kya hai har baar chapad chapad karti raheti ho, chup kabhi ho nahi sakhti taaki koi aur bhi kuch bol sake

(actually rite now he is doing chapad chapad..hehhehehehe)…..

Yuvi: ek toh yaha mein soch hi raha tha…..ke…

Hey bhagggu firse aashi interrupts and comments😆😆

Aashi: hey bhaggu tum sochte bhi ho kya…..mujeh bhaggu ne kabhi nahi bola, mujhe laga tumhare aur bimbo ke hisse ke brains bhi bhagggu ne mujhe de diye….ab bhaggguu jab aapne thode brains de diye hai zyada mat dena warna brains ko xplore karte karte who kahi apne hi untreated brain ki duniya mein kho na jaaye….. 🤣

Yuvi: aashiiiiiiiiiiiiii……………..(he screams very loudly)….kya tum kisiko apni baat bhi puri karne nahi de sakhti….kabse dekh raha hoon ke jabse tum yaha aayi tabse bas apna hi sab kuch bole ja rahi ho….mujhe laga ke mujhe tumhe sorry bolna chahiya but acha hua meine nahi bola….tum nah…😕

Aashi: mein kya …..waise bhi kisko chhaiye tumhari sorry….waise bhi mein tumhe ab nahi chodungi…..

Yuvi: kyun mera murder plan kiya hai kya….waise bhi tum kar kya sakhti ho…

Aashi: xcuse me ….actually yeh sentence tumhe tumhare liye bolna chhaiye …aur murder hhahahahahah kuch aisa hi samaj lo….😆😆

Yuvi: himmat hai toh bolkar dikhao….(heman ......😆)

Aashi: Daar gaye kya…..ya ya mein bolungi baadmien tum apne daddy ke paas jaooge aur bolonge…."daddy daddy who aashi hai nah ….blah blah…%^%^&%$&$%^&"…. (in typical childish tone she says…..)🤣

Yuvi: aashi ……..(in furious mood)😡😡

He was moving towards her….and finally caught her hold tightly again and was abt to say something ….just then they hear some footsteps…so yuvi leaves aashi back again ….and both hides under the pool table….

Wowwww they luked so cute close by close that too under pool table awesome nah ……😳

They could not figure out still who was it…and finally fell asleep under the table only….aashi head on yuvi shoulder unknowingly…..

That seems romantic moment wooow…😳

When would aashi and yuvi stop fighting …..i really wish they never because these fights only get them more closer rather then dat lovey-dovey love.

I really don't know how to end the story …so here I give a stop as a story which doesn't have an end and obviously Ay stuff could never end…

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uys i reallly don't know how dis one shot is ...bhot hi jaldi jaldi mein likha and in less timeee ...if u want 2 critisie u can ....

luv ash

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usharafuddin thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
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awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww maaaaaaaaannnnnnnnnn!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 😳 😳 😳 😳 luuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuubed it!!!! aww aww awwwwww......... it's shoooooo shoooooooooooo cuuuuuuteeeeeeee............... 😳 butterflies gng on in tummy... 😳 awwwwwww........ 😳 me gng n gng on n on awwwing.. aww aww awwwwwwwwww........... keep up writting more!!!!!! d luv 2 read!!!! 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
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awwwwwwwww hibs u actuallly liked it i had xpecetd no1 wud even liked as i rote in so jaldi jaldi wthout even thinking wat i m riting ...and i maself hafent erad dis ....wud rea dnow lolzz aftr u told its gud 😆 😆 😆 thxn alott i m so thnkful 2 u dat u atelast liekd it

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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey ash its so cute n funny!!! n ashi as usual ashi's dialoguesss>> dat bulletin board one abt yuvi!!!!! lolzzzzzzzz 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 really liked it! 😊 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: devilz_here

hey ash its so cute n funny!!! n ashi as usual ashi's dialoguesss>> dat bulletin board one abt yuvi!!!!! lolzzzzzzzz 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 really liked it! 😊 😊

awww siddooo thnx alottt chaloo u all liked it dats more den enuf i was actuallly reli scared 2 post dis becoz .....i usuallly rite romantic kinda one shotss trying 2 write such kinda humour is was liek a first time kindaa ....i mean i do rite but nt fullly humour romantic element zyada hota hai thxn neways

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Ash it's rocking yaar!!!! Jaldi jaldi mein likha par still it's awsome man! Too good!

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Posted: 17 years ago
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omg omg omgggggggggggggggg ashhhhhhhhhhh 😳 😳 😳 i luuuuuuuuuuuuuvvvvvvvvvvdddddddddd it a loooootttt🤗 dis one shotttttt is jst da bsttttttt 👏 u r shoooooo sweetttt wwwwwoooooooooowwwwwwwwww!!!!!!!!!!it was sooooooo funny 😆 😆 😆 soooooooo roooooooomantic☺️ n mst imporatntly sooooooo ay 😳 styllll 😳 😳 😳 keep it up darlinnnnnnnnnnnnggggggg 😃 😃 😃 n all da very veryyyy bst for ur examssssssss 😉 😉 i still jst cant believe it it ws ritten in a hurryyyyyyy 😲😲😲luuuuuuuuuuuuuvvvvv u aaaaalllllllwayssssssssssss 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey!!! aashni di ... awesum oneshot..... i totally went into the situation while reading it..... very nice .....i luved the line... "hey bhaggu tumhe abhi pata chala ke mein tumhare sath discussion karne aayi hoon taaki tumharee inactivated brain ke neurons ko kuch energy mile mere pyarese neurons ke paas se aur tum bhi thode samajdar bano." so funny ... lolz .. this oneshot has cute scenes 😳 + comedy.... really had fun reading this.. aisa lag raha tha ki... all this is happening in front of me lolz..... its really a gud one.....anyways where do u get these awesumm ideas from ????😳
keep up the gud work and keep writing... oneshots... and never think we won't like it.... i luved it....


'Aashi just got geared up back and just wanted to forget what happened in just last few minutes those eye contacts , yuvi holding aashi, etc….'

my god u brought it out really nicely... hats off to u ......


i dunt think aapki ideas kabhi khatam hogi !!!!!!!! lolz.. u always have sumthing to rite.....


keep up the gud work!!!!!! 👏


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Posted: 17 years ago
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awwww...that was sooooooooooooooooooo cute!!!of course all ay fics r a pleasure to read...but jab tune likha hai toh kya baat hai ash!!!Awesome one!!Toooooo gud!!!!! 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: AshiYuvi4life

Ash it's rocking yaar!!!! Jaldi jaldi mein likha par still it's awsome man! Too good!

komz

thxn alott komall i m glad dat atleast u gave ur time 2 read maaaa dis one shot vic is obv nt so gud like otehr ritersss😳

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