THE OTHER SIDE OF LOVE- mads,hellraiser - Page 6

its amazing mads 👏 👏 👏 👏...so don't u ever say u r discontinuing it

Originally posted by: mads

kya baat hai....wah wah fate....bhai behen saath mein aa gaye....apne homeland se...😉😉

😆 😆 😆 😆...that was tooooo koool

well i know the discontinuity bug has affected all the writers.but pls don't stop.continue ahead....

this part was good. 👏 👏

Thanx guys....for all the compliments😊....anyways...here's the next part....

Their economics professsor,Mr.Choudhary was mumbling some mumbo-jumbo nonsense....but Krish didnt give a damn about it....Why.....Why.....Why did I do It???was the only question raising in his mind....I never lose control....then why now.....wen I'm on my victory.......I've to talk to them today.......convince them dat it was a mistake....he still remembered vividly the looks of shock on their faces....

The look of shock on Yuvi's face had slowly turned into that of anger.....but he didnt care about dat studdy boy.....all he cared was dat his Ashi....his beloved Ashi looked extremely shocked....so shocked in fact that all ahe could mange was an extremely strtled"WHOA!!" meanwhile Yuvi yelled in anger"Hey you....wats the meaning of this.....speak up loser..." Hearing the phrase 'loser'Krish lost his patience.....but hthe good actor dat he was....he controled his emotions...."Sorry!!"he uttered quickly. "Duh-huh!!Wat do u mean by Sorry??"Ashi had finally regained her composure.

"Hey Krish....got a pen buddy...."

"Yeah sure.....take this..."

"Alrite....Krish Malhotra....tell the entire class wat I was saying just now...."said Mr.Choudhary in his usual tone.

"I dunno Sir...."

"See....you students dont want to study anything.... har waqt sirf mazzak karna acchi baat nahi hai.....how you all are going to manage ur careers.........."

But Krish wasnt paying any attention....

"Sorry...."Krish repeated. Yuvi was shaking with anger....so was Krish.....but he managed to keep his cool..."Well....we--er--we--er--we--"his mind raced as he began to think of some believable story....

"Look here....Loser.....I've not asked you to recite a nursery rhyme alrite?so....SPEAK UP!!"Yuvi nearly exploded.

"Well.....we were just playi---"Krish continued unperturbed.

"K guys....chill!!"said Ashi suddenly.She had undoubtedly mistaken his shaking for fear.....Yuvi can scare neone....she thought....poor guy...must be playing some dumb game......that's wat he's trying to say.....

"Ashi WHAT??!??"Yuvi now turned towards Ashi....

"I said Chill...."Ashi repeated."And You....(turning towardskrish)I know u r trying to say dat u were playing some dumb truth or dare game or watever it is I dont care.....but try dat again....and I'll make u incapable of speaking the TRUTH....got it??"

"Yes...yes...."Krish replied hurriedly and left....but he hadnt been able to sleep the whole nite...he had almost ruined it....but fortunately 4 him....Ashi had believed his lame story.....well why not....he thought.....dat's y i love her so much.....and he removed his cell and stared at her pic....

Trrrrring!!the bell rang and everyone left....i hav to go and convince them dat it was indeed a game....he thought and went in search of them....

Meanwhile in common room......

"I swear it man....the nerve of dat creep!!Ashi if u hadnt stopped me yesterday....I wud've murdered dat loser...."

"Great Yuvi....then we wud've romanced in the jail......but make sure you keep ur dio handy.....i heard dat place really stinks...Yuk!!"

"Its not funny Alrite....."

"Well it sure is......come on Yuvi he was just playing some dumb game....And neways...you scared him so much that he wont even dare to be 20 ft near me...."

"I dont believe it was a game.....He is a creep....a loser....a bas--"

"Thats enough now...."cut in Ashi"So many names....I cant believe you are so jelous...."

"Well of course I'm jelous sweet heart......who wont be wen some mad guy comes and kisses their girlfriend......."

"Well dat some mad guy said dat it was a game....so chill!"

"How can u be so sure....?

"Well....how can u not be so sure...?countered Ashi.

"That's it Ashi.....you just want it all......right!!!"said Yuvi standing up.

"Want what??Listen to me....Yuv--"Ashi tried to sort it out.

"No you listen....go enjoy Ashi....hav fun....I'm going......."and he left her alone in the common room.

Oh no...thought Ashi sadly....here we go again....

excellent mads 👏 👏 👏 👏

that was amazing..i dont know what else to say...it gets better n better 👏

...so krish actually got away..i guess ashi would think it was a game...i mean otherwise no one would dare to come close to her right...but yuvi misunderstading n all huh....a twist coming up???

awesome..by the way not bhai...uv is my fiance...we came on earth to live togeher......

awesome this was the best part so far
mads how dare u threaten to stop

simply awesome mads you describe their conversations really well

Hey Bhaggu!!meri fic pg 7 pe??itni insult main nahi seh sakti!!😆I really should update it......sorry guys...I was busy 4 two days....should post up the next part today itself.....