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Posted: 17 years ago
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noooooooooooo noooooooooo i havnt giv me link giv me link nwwwwwwwwwwww 😃 😃

and rebel i saw the siggy request u made for this ficcy in payal ka shooop ooo god am soo excited nowwww 😳 😳 btw u insisted on keeping ay together in that sig do u want a pic where ay r together?? we can giv u loads 😆 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Finaly a ay fic yeppie !! 😃 😳
sounds interesting
plzzz dooooo cont eager waitin for it ... 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
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wow its coooll yaar....liked d intro a lot...waitin for the rest of the story!! 😳 😳 😉
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hmmm.... interesting!!!! Waise thank you! Isiliye kyunki you made Ashi like me. I Don't Believe In Love Either! But, filhaal I'm loving the concept! Continue soon!

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: smritisashi

noooooooooooo noooooooooo i havnt giv me link giv me link nwwwwwwwwwwww 😃 😃

and rebel i saw the siggy request u made for this ficcy in payal ka shooop ooo god am soo excited nowwww 😳 😳 btw u insisted on keeping ay together in that sig do u want a pic where ay r together?? we can giv u loads 😆 😳

No actually i wanted those pics..so i requested that..but anyways thanx.... if i ever wanted a pic of AY together I think I know that I could ask you guys

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hey this sounds reall interesting!!!Cant wait 4 the rest of d story1!!!Btw was the movie Boyz???Coz characters n d story n all sound similar....cant wait to read the fic!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: evilseye

Hey this sounds reall interesting!!!Cant wait 4 the rest of d story1!!!Btw was the movie Boyz???Coz characters n d story n all sound similar....cant wait to read the fic!!!

Yes it is boys😊😊😊

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Posted: 17 years ago
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yippieeeeeeee yahooo another ay fic!!! hey hey hey plz continue soon!! i really liked the chracterz! so plz! 😳 😳 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: rockingrebel

Yes it is boys😊😊😊


Oh gr888!!Then it shud make 4 an interesting read!!Do start it soon!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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PART 1

A boy is walkin an then he sees a girl and goes to her.

Boy(showing her a paper)-Can you tell me this address?

Girl-hmmmmm....go left and there youll find a shop and from there take the first right and I think this house is somewhere there.

Boy-Do you know that a smart guy called Yuvraj stays there.

Girl-No,sorry

Boy-You should know ..because its me and thats my house!

Girl-(angrily)whatever.

The boy is our heroYuvi

He then joins his other friends Kunal,Sid,Yudi and Ranveer.At a place like this which is there hangout place.

Ranveer-Hey Yudi,nice dress where did you buy it.

Yudi-Ya rite..so that you go buy the dress and girls fall for you.

Sid-Really?You think so..girls will not for a stupid dress but a good sense of humour and one-liners impress girls.

Kunal-And that will work?????The only thing that will work for girls is talent.

Ranveer-Talent is not enough whats more important is a good body

Yuvi-You guys are crazy...you dont have to do all that..all you need to do is to act as if you arent intrested in girls.

Kunal-If you do that they wont notice us.

Ranveer-Ok! fine but where do we go now?

Yudi-New Age Girls college

Sid-dont you remeber the last time you were beaten up by those girls.

Yudi-WHATEVER

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On the other side of the city outside one of the most popular colleges in Delhi a group of girls are walking.When a boy approaches one of the girls.

Boy-Hey are you Seema's sister?

Girl(whispers to her friends)-Seema?(then understandin that the guy is flirting with her)-Yeah your right I am Seema's sister.

Boy-Yeah..Seema told me about her beautiful sister..but i must say you are far more beautiful then she said.Anyways I am Ruhan.How about a cup of coffe?

Girl-Sure(to her friends)Girls...Coffee?

Girls-Sure

Then we see that the girl is Anvesha aka Ashi

They all go the the coffe shop and order lots of food.The bill comes up to 5000 rupees and Ashi is about to remove the money from her bag when Ruhan places his hand on hers and asks her not to..as it his treat.He then goes to the manager.

Ruhan-Im falling short of 500rupees and I forgot my cell..can I please make a call?

Manager-thats ok sir..you can come back and pay the money.

Ruhan-thanks

Manager-But please leave your watch

Ruhan gives the watch and turns back to see the table empty....and ses Ashi and her friends going.

Ashi-Bye Ruhan..dont worry Ill tell Seema that you are a nice guy.

Shyla-Ruhan..whats the time?

Ruhan-(looking at the girls laugh at him)Shit(curses Ashi)

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Ashi is walking back home with her friends Tia and Vrinda

Vrinda-That guy wont leave you.

Ashi-He started it and I played along.

Tia-Yeah ...but be careful..he wont leave you.

Ashi-Well I can try some of the Karate that I learnt at school on him.

They are walking past the 5 boys.who start singing various songs.

Ashi-God..these people are another headache.

Tia-I swear!!!!

Yuvi tries to impress Ashi takes a cycle and tries to do tricks on it and trips and falls down at their feet.The girls just laugh and walk past.

Ashi-Did you see the way he asked us for our blessing?

Vrinda-Thats what is called Man prooses and God disposes.

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Yuvi-Hey Ranveer did you notice she laughed when she saw me?

Ranveer-Yeah the whole colony laughed at you.

Sid-Hey Yuvi...give us a treat

Yuvi-What for?

Kunal-She laughed right?Thats why.

Yudi-Yup...so our todays sponsorer is Yuvi

Yuvi-fine

Edited by rockingrebel - 17 years ago

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