2 b tory...13th part&next part..pg-43&44 - Page 2

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Posted: 20 years ago
#11
i am not really fond of the tia-aashi hatred part.i feel they'll become the best of friends when they become sisters.
fate, i think ur an excellent writer. 👏 👏 please continue.write something abt tia-ranvir as well.
by the way aashi becoming a lawyer is a totally sufi idea 😆
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Posted: 20 years ago
#12
continuing my first story......(page 1)
silently uv turned around and left......leaving the love of his life in d darkness....
he came to his room and opened the door...sid and nakool were not there...and the room was submerged in darkness....
on his bed was sittin a girl....staring out into the night...
uv:tory wat r u doing all alone in the darkness??
t:v often forget the beauty of the dark...dont u just love the night ???i did nt feel like switchin on the light...
she turns around and switches on the land
t:hello yuvraj...so wats on??
the sight of the girl took his breath away..like it did for so many boys...
beautiful stormy grey eyes ,long lashes,a perfect roman nose,lovely wavy hair....dramatic make up..perfect clothes....even though uv had known sitara for 12 years noe...still he cud not figure her out..she was such an enigma...in his entire life he had never met some one like her..she was unearthly perfect..sometimes she looked as if she was someones creation but uv knew that she was one of the most truest and most genuine person on earth.....it was not that she did not play pranks...her pranks were well known so was her unpredictableness....her mischiefs....but even in these things she was perfect...not even one of her plans went haywire...sometimes her perfection made uv sick it was as if she was nt human at all....he had never seen tory lose control..not tht she was a control freak...wen ppl were rude to her she cud be exetremely sarcastic yet her voice wud be drippin with sweetness....with a few words uv had seen she cud make the saddest person laugh and also the happiest person cry..she was so strong that uv often wondered wat the source of her strength was....
t:wat r u staring at yuvraj dev????
uv:i am just trying to look past that mask of urs...
t: cut it out uv....by the way wats up with u honey??anvesha ray bannerjee?????
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Posted: 20 years ago
#13
good work.........keep it going......i like ur two in one style.to say two stories side by side.
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Posted: 20 years ago
#14
Uv:I don't knoe really…..she was cryin
T:the anvesha ray was cryin…that's a lot to believe …..
Uv:cut the crap….i felt so bad I could nt even comfort her…..i wish….i really don't get ur plan….r u tryin to break us up or bring us bak together???
T:I knoe wat I am doin…..
Uv:and will u tell me wat that it is ???
T:u want me to play cupid and cupid gives no explanation……
Uv:stop talking in riddles and tell me flat…
T:u knoe tat my plans never fail then y r u so worried???
Uv: yes ofcourse u & ur perfection
T: and wat is rong with my perfection
Uv: everything…..y do u have to wear that mask of yours 24/7????one day it ll fall of …I am warnin u….
T:wat the fish r u talking abt???
Uv:hoe many guys asked u out today ??
T:wat??
Uv:how many??
T:6 or 7 ..y?
Uv:hoe many of them did u turn down????
T:wat??????all of them
Uv:see….look at urself….u never let any one get near u do u ????
T:wat do u want me to do???start datin any tom dick and harry…or perhaps change my boyfriends as many times I change my outfit????
Uv:I just want u to be urself…not act like some character out of some book
T:I really don't knoe wat ur tryin to say nor do I have the time to listen to your rubbish
sAying that she left the room…..
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Posted: 20 years ago
#15
shud i continue story 1 or shud i knoe write story 2 ?????
i mean which one do you ppl like better
by the way sitaara aka tory is not uv s gf and will never be....they r more like bro and sis...
also she is in class 11
and remix gang has gone upto class 12
arjun was expelled(i cant bear him so....)
also ranveer is the new prefect.....
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Posted: 20 years ago
#16
shud i continue story 1 or shud i knoe write story 2 ?????
i mean which one do you ppl like better
by the way sitaara aka tory is not uv s gf and will never be....they r more like bro and sis...
also she is in class 11
and remix gang has gone upto class 12
arjun was expelled(i cant bear him so....)
also ranveer is the new prefect.....
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Posted: 20 years ago
#17
That was gr8 fate 👏 👏.......I wouldn't mind a continuation......but then its ur choice 😛
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Posted: 20 years ago
#18
good going fate.....ur wish can continue with anything............we will n joy reading....
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Posted: 20 years ago
#19
anything would be good !!!!1

but if its not hectic would you mind continuiing both in separate topics !!! that would be great !!!!!!


man we have real good writers here !!!!! 👏
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Posted: 20 years ago
#20
on reachin her room she sank down on her bed....she lived alone in her room.....without any roomies...one of the perks of being the schools financers daughter....
her room was beautiful.....pale blue...lots of beautiful flowers in vases....a back street boyz poster..some music cd s...soft toys...everything spic and span....her room let to another small adjoining room.....tory got up and walked into the room...there was huge change...paints were strewn all over....the room was filled with paintings....of women ,men, ppl,of maurya....but the paintings were drastically diferent from the usual paintings one sees ....most were filled with pain or love....on the other side of the room books on drama were scattered....a violin was lying on d table and the uv guiter uv gave her was lying on the floor.....this was who tory was...a mad creative person who did nt follow any rules nor follow the norms of society...the room was the only clue to her real identity which she so clearly hid with that picture perfect mask of hers......no one in maurya or in the world had ever been to this room...if uv ever saw this room tory thought i think he wud have had a heart attack......she picked up her brush and slowly started painting her just started picture......

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