2 b tory...13th part&next part..pg-43&44

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She could not stop crying. The tears were falling fast …..all she wanted was to die…..take a knife and cut her veins…but she would nt do it coz she was not coward

Why? Why?me ?why do I have to be so unlucky in love…..first sahil ..then..o my god it still so difficult to say his name….and now aditya.

I am such an idiot…y did I believe him???a scheming journalist that is wat he is…sting operation….i never thought I wud ever face such a situation……he never loved me…all he wanted was a story….wat goes on in an actress's home ……hoe she brings up her daughter …..wat ever happened to my morals ???my values ???? I was so obsessed in trying to hurt the guy I love so much that I forgot my self and walked rite into aditya 's trap….now wat do I do ??? I gave aditya the story he wanted ….y did I go to ladakh with him and act so foolishly????y?y?y?within few days it will be all over the papers …..my moms image will be tarnished just becoz of me..

I wish I could talk to some one.i wish I could just run to uv and just cy on his arm…I wish he wud hold me…kiss me …he wud take all my fears away…he wud have done something….but now I cant go to him for help can I ?????after the way I behaved????

Besides there is someone else now in uv's life….and even though I hate myself for saying this but I cant help but like her….she is so beautiful….so full of life…I ve seen it…wenever she enters a room it just lights up as if a strayed ray of sunlight

has just entered….she is not like those timbos….i ve seen her stand up for not only her friends but whosoever is unjustly accused….she helps everyone…..she even had the guts to stand up to latte….she does nt even hate me…..she knew that me and uv were in love yet she is so sweet to me ..wen she saw me down she even tried to cheer me up….i cant understand her……I want to hate her but I cnt…. No one can help but fall in love with her….so I don't blame uv……but I wish that he wud come back to me….

Wat she cud not c was that her sweetheart was standing behind the pillar looking at her with tear filled eyes….

God I love this girl so much…I just wanna hold her ….seeing her cry just breaks my heart…..i want to ask her wat the problems and then solve it …..but I knoe I should stop my self other wise wat ever sitaara has planned will go down the drain….thank god story is back otherwise I don't wat I wud have done without aashi in my life….sitaara always makes everything right …

dis is my first fan fic.....i hope u ppl like it

give ur comment and then i ll continue....

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Posted: 20 years ago
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great start but its too obvious the plot
sorry dont mind
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Posted: 20 years ago
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very nice ............plzz continue !
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Posted: 20 years ago
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gud....sooo wat happens next??? 😛
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Posted: 20 years ago
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cool ! it ws very nice .. shwepri ur avatar is very nice ..
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Posted: 20 years ago
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It was really very nice.......gr8 work......plz continue 😛
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Posted: 20 years ago
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ok i am in an exetremely happy mood so i thot i wud write something happy for a change......dis is something that may happen 3 years later in remix

as she watched her son fall of to sleep she could not help but get lost in her day dream...
3 years have passed since that day ... why am i on dis plane....y am i goin back to the place from where everything started....y am i goin bak to maurya???she looked up from her sleeping son's face and started looking for her husband....there he was working on his laptop....so fast and so seriously...he looked so adorable....she could sometimes not even believe the fact that uv could be so serious sometimes.....
she become lost again in her reverie...after 2 years...two dreadful years....y was she goin bak???she cud still remember distinctly that day as if it was just yesterday.....
she was standing in airport with uv.she knew the moment her mom wud hear that she had run away she wud come running to ashi to ask her to come back home...she knew her mother wud at the end of the day accept uv but...her mom never came....she kept on and on waiting but she did not come ...atlast they boarded the last flight and left for new york.....
wat they thot wud be a kool sufi adventure changed their entire outlook towards life...
at first it was all party...but then money became tight and then at the nth hour they took their life seriously and started working hard..they left their awesome apartment as the cud no longer afford the high rent and shifted to a tiny garage.....thinking about those aweful days of university wen she had to try so hard to get that law degree still brought tears to her eyes...the way uv had slogged through business school and then entered politics made her proud....those horrible days wen gettin food twice a day was considered a luxury ......and then wen she become pregnant.....uv had been dead against an abortion...so had she been...dis was the first time both of them had something that belonged totally them...hoe cud she just kill him???????those terrible nights she spend at the dirty government hospital....the moment wen she first so aryan-her son..he was so beautiful;so small;so helpless...the way uv had always made sure his son had something to eat ...the way uv had always let her win those races in which the winner wud get a extra can of food..the way they ended up sharing the food....the way they danced in the rain ...made love in the biter cold winter was still so fresh in her mind....the way her heart literally broke into peices wen she remembered the expensive clothes she wore and the hand me down clothes she had to give to aryan...her helplessness wen uv was so sick yet she cud do nothin abt it..
but then with time things became better...so much more better...their mansion had ben voted the world s 4 rt best home...
so after so many years y was she goin bak...she looked up again...she cud see a very attractive airhostess flirting outrageously with her husband…..first she used to mind the fact that uv was such a woman magnet but noe she did not coz she knew he loved her truly madly and deeply and she too loved him crazily….their love was above such petty things such as jealousy…..
the plane wud reach mumbai soon….she started to feel frustrated y am I here…for some stupid reunion….actually I am kind of curious..i want to knoe so many things …..whether aman amd vrinda got married…whether pri had finally lost wait..whether latte had reformed herself….whether mp and varun were happy…..one person she did nt want to face was tia….first she used to dislike tia…but now wat she felt for tia was pure hatred …it was tia who had taken her mom away from her…it was tia who had got her perfect family which left anvesha all alone….it was becoz of tia that her mom married that sumit ahuja….
God she hated he…..but noe she had to go bak…to prove to all those ppl who had laughed at her….had told her and uv that they wud be bak from us as soon as times became different…..those ppl who had told her and uv that they cud do nothing without their parents….
But noe everything was different …she was one of the best lawyers in the world and uv the youngest and most successful senator….they were called the most successful couple ever….they had achieved all this without anyone's help….suddenly she felt someone kiss her cheek….she looked up and found her self gazing into the handsome face of her husband…. " hey gorgeous ,we ll be in mumbai soon….are u ready…are u sure u want to do this…we can still go bak…u knoe??" "yes. I am ready and I am sure I wanna c maurya again"…and that's wat she said
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Posted: 20 years ago
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lovely fate..........u rite well......keep going 👏
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Posted: 20 years ago
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please ppl tell me hoe it is .....
😕 😊
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Posted: 20 years ago
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Its really nice fate.......I appreciate ur imagination.....coz I for one could never have imagined the two in such a situation.....gr8 work.....keep writing

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