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well.. i dont knwo whether u guys will like it or not.. but its just a small effort to try out sumthg different....

i just thought wot if yuvi ranveer anvesha n tia had the chance to express their feeelings thru shayari or a small poem mebbe.. and i came up wid this..

in the present situation.. wer everyones heartbroken...

yuvi ... wen he says " usne kitni aasaani se keh diya ki main uske liye kuch nahi"

woh jo mera naseeb tha
wohi mujhe bhula gaya
nahi hai koi bhi yaar kisi ka yahan
yeh sabaq wo hume woh sikhla gaya

ranveer... wen he says" kyu tia ..kyu hum ek dusre ko dukh dete rehte hai"

kis liye mujhese berukhi ka dikhawa karte ho
yeh dikhawa hai to mere wajood ko mitta jaana
Tujhe lagta hai mujhe mohabbat nahi he tujhse to
mere pyaar ko azmane ke liye ek baar aa jaana...

AAshi.. wen she comes to know bout yuvi and the bet...

Kaanch ki tarah toot gaye khwaab woh saare
nadi ki tarrah aankhon se beh gaye...
Kitni bedardi se tor dia dil yeh mera
aur hum the ke muskura ke dard yeh seh gaye...
Mohabbat ki thi humne dil-o-jaan se tumse
aur dekh hum aaj ek tamasha banke reh gaye...!

Tia... wen ranveer returns the gift and she starts crying all alone..

kareeb tha to kaha hum ne sangdil bhi usse
hua hai door to lagta hai jaan-e-jaa woh shakhs
kar na sake hum wafa ek dusre se kabhi
fir kyu na lage mujhe bewafa wo shaks

hope u guys like it

excellent shayari 👏 👏 👏
did u make it up on ur own??

arey wah kya baath hain,main bhi likhoungi,even i know shayari

well here is one from me
THIS IS WHEN YUVI RECOGNISE HIS LOVE FOR AASHI

DIL JODNA THA USSE
MAGAR DIL USKA TOD DIYA
THAAMA HI THA HAAT USKA KI
USNE SAATH MERA CHOD DIYA
MOHABBAT BERUKHI MITATI HAI
MAGAR IS BERUKHI NE MOHABBAT KO MITA DIYA

thanks guys... m glad u guys liked it... :) yep shobha likhna .. :)

Originally posted by: krismittal

well here is one from me
THIS IS WHEN YUVI RECOGNISE HIS LOVE FOR AASHI

DIL JODNA THA USSE
MAGAR DIL USKA TOD DIYA
THAAMA HI THA HAAT USKA KI
USNE SAATH MERA CHOD DIYA
MOHABBAT BERUKHI MITATI HAI
MAGAR IS BERUKHI NE MOHABBAT KO MITA DIYA

👏 good one

u guys are too good . specially krismittal ..

Originally posted by: krismittal

well here is one from me
THIS IS WHEN YUVI RECOGNISE HIS LOVE FOR AASHI

DIL JODNA THA USSE
MAGAR DIL USKA TOD DIYA
THAAMA HI THA HAAT USKA KI
USNE SAATH MERA CHOD DIYA
MOHABBAT BERUKHI MITATI HAI
MAGAR IS BERUKHI NE MOHABBAT KO MITA DIYA

too good kris ............................post sum more 👏

thanks guys, but mine was nothing in comparision to nishita.

gr8 stuff both Nishita and Sunny 👏 👏 .......and Sunny I read 1 of urs in the star one forum too......it was something like..."bet to tha ek bahana........" plz post that one too if possible........u write really well