under the moonlight pt 18 comp 11/9/2005 - Page 3

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Posted: 20 years ago
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no plzzzzzdo it for tia n ranveer too plssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss ssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss
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Posted: 20 years ago
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nakul and sid were laughing
"so hes gone with ashi and they have still not returned"
" go to sleep now and dream that we too have this chance"

winking at nakul sid went to sleep

the sun dawned as usual making its way about the sky

filling the atmosphere with its colours banishing the darkness of the night

yuvi waked up slowly

and ashi got up disturbed by his jerk

"oh god are we still here"
ashi said as she came to her senses
" now what will everybody think of me"
" first we gottA GET out of here " yuvi replied
" u knew i feel asleep why didnt u wake me up" said ashi in a foul mood
"i feel asleep too"
"good excuse"
"shhh " he put his finger over her mouth and stared into her eyes


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Posted: 20 years ago
#23
excellent work lalit 👏 👏 👏
please write something for tia & ranvir
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Posted: 20 years ago
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bye guys off for 3 days for a company conference in a 5 star hotel
bye somebody update till then will back only on tuesday
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Posted: 20 years ago
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lalit u really rock u r too good 👏
as far as my vote is concerned it will always be for ashi and yuvi 😛
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Posted: 20 years ago
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lalit seems like the rate at which u rite u should open a fan club soon.
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Posted: 20 years ago
#27
lalit.........god!! the opening lines,, they are awesome.... 😊 😊 ........no words to express 👏

my vote also definately stands for the wonderful and lovely couple.......ashi-yuvi 😃

have a nice trip lalit......but be back soon 😊
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Posted: 20 years ago
#28
hey why dont you write the ame fanfic for both tia and ranveer then your not making anyone upset
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Posted: 20 years ago
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lalit u shud do tia and ranveer 😭 😭

stiil this fan fic also rox
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Posted: 20 years ago
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am on an cybercafe
yesterday also tried to get through the stupid if cookies dont allow me to login at all


Part 4

Ashi looked up into his eyes,full of warmth and care.
His naughty eyes hyponitizing him in an instant.he made her feel like no one ever did. god when did someone become so important in my life.
yuvi drew ashi closer to him.
"Ashi" softly sai d yuvi.
"yes yuvi " still gazing in his dark eyes.
" Maurya high nahin jaana hain kya"? 😆
Ashi was back to earth.
wrapping his arms around Ashis neck
they made their way slowly towards school not knowing of the storm ahead.


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