under the moonlight pt 18 comp 11/9/2005

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krismittal

@krismittal

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Posted: 20 years ago

#11

gr9 job lalit
well apart from others i ll want ranveer and tia
kyonki ranveer ki aankho main tia ke liye pyar ka vo sailab dikhta hai jo yuvi ki aakhon mein aashi ke liye nahi dikhta

lalit its my haevy request to u that please continue it with tia and ranveer and without misunderstanding or dispute B/w them.PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE

Edited by krismittal - 20 years ago

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esha

@Coolest Esha

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Posted: 20 years ago

#12

to good lalit
plz it should b ranveer
esha

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rikzik

@rikzik

Inactive

Posted: 20 years ago

#13

lalit romantic novels likhna shuru kar do.ur description is damn cute.yuvi and ashi anytime they r more romantic than tia ranveer acc to me 😳

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Nishi

@nishi

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 20 years ago

#14

i vote for yuvi and aashi

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foresight

@foresight

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 20 years ago

#15

nice start lalit....but me confused abt the "He" is the story too..is it ranveer or yuvi...
hope u write one tia-ranveer story for all of us too 😃

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lalit1

@lalit1

Dazzler

Posted: 20 years ago

#16

i got 7 votes ashi yuvi andd 3 for ranvir tia so
i will go for ashi yuvi

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lalit1

@lalit1

Dazzler

Posted: 20 years ago

#17

it was approaching midnight
and mp and vrinda were at their wits end
where was ashi
was the question topmost on their minds
vrinda" i am getting worried "
mp" i am too "
vrinda " ab kya karen "
mp" karna kya hain us yuvi ka sar fodna hain"
vrinda" are aise mat bolo koi problem ho gayi hogi"
mp "he mate vrindeshwari aap kabhi kisi ko bura maan sakti hain ya nahin"
vrinda " use chod aur bol ab karna kya hain"
mp " yuvi ke dosto ko pakdo aur unse poocho ki kahan gaye hain"
vrinda" itni raat ko"
mp" to kya subah uthaye ge unhe?"
vrinda " par main nahin jaa sakti "
mp " tujhe aana hain to aa"
vrinda " chal main bhi aati hoon "
vrinda and mp were tiptoeing their way to the boys hostel
but they were caught by Arjun

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Deeksha.

@2sweet4sweets

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 20 years ago

#18

Wow very nice!!!
Even i wud have voted for Yuvi- ashi

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ashi_mania

@ashi_mania

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 20 years ago

#19

the 2nd part was also gr8 Lalit.......u write beautifully 👏 👏 👏

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mads

@mads

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 20 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: anvesha rulz

Lalit I have no words to describe how good it is...........any word I use will not be enough to represent its true worth.....so just a huge round of applause for u 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

plz continue soon

I Agree....👏and coutless more....its just fabulous...d words used describe yuvi ashi perfectly and i'm very happy dat u chose to write dat....plz continue Lalit...

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