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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: smritisashi

hehe...thaanx guys for all the appreciation...i had forgotten i was even writing a fic... 😃 ..neways wait up for a while exaams on soo cant continue abhi....but am suree u wld love d next part very much...so wait up for a little while....

Ok dear😊 Best of luck for exams👍🏼 Jab time mile tab cont kar dena😳 Waise tumhare exams kab khatam ho rahe hai?

Edited by sweetyvidya - 18 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#52
continue continue continue continue continue continue continue continue continue continue continue continue!!!
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itz so touching 😭 u r such an xcellent writer 👏 ! i'll go insane if u'll not post jaldi!(well truly speaking insane toh pehle se hi hoon but double insane ho jaungi!) 🤢 so plz continue asap!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
#53
OMGGGGGGGGG!!!!!!!!! toony u pagal larki y've ya stopped!!!!!!!!!!! i jus hav not a single perfect word 2 express how'm i feeling by reading it!!!! i suggest u 2 make a luv story book wid it.. it'll b d bestest story evaaaa!!! OMGGG right now right now cont.... hiba's order!! 😳


Edited by usharafuddin - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#54
heyy bhagguuuu sidraaa and heebsyyy thankooo soo much for liking this loong lost baba adaam ke zamane ka fic 😆 😳 its been almost an year since i discotinued it and am actually regretting that why why did this ficcy came to the first pagee nappy has been behind me and shes actually haressing me to continue ittt but am experaincing a total lack of motivation and enthusiasm and hence i am unable to continue it 😭 😭 if u guys and those who wish me to write this then plz be my inspirational force and give me sme incentives and push ons to write it 😆

anyways i have one part already written long long back but i hadn't posted it coz halshu ke exams aa gaye the and she was my official proof reader cum editor in chief 😳 🤗 but since nappy has gone all cranky relating to this fic she did the proof reading day before yesterday so am posting the next part for sidra and heebsyyyy 😳 🤗 hope u like it 😃 and after this one i dnt knw wen wld i update next coz i hav to write more and that wld happen only wen i wld be happyly motivated 😆 😉
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Posted: 17 years ago
#55

PART 6

Life slowly got back to its normal routine. Ashi was in mall waiting for Vrinda to join her for lunch…She was having some stomach problems since a week and had gone to maate the doctor. Vrinda had gone so hyper as she always did…but today she had called Ashi and told her she wanted to talk to her. So here was ashi waiting for her frnd impatiently.

Suddenly, her eyes fell over a tall well built man who was standing on d door and staring her. She couldn't remove her eyes off him and neither could she stop him from coming towards her. She was getting nervous and hastily she tried to get up and go somewhere else…but his voice stilled her…

"Ashi," he said. Hearing that voice, she turned to face him and it felt as if she were standing on a time machine and was thrown back in time…thrown back to maurya, where she had met him and where he had become one of her closest frnds. They both were staring at each other…unable to break away from the heavy load of memories…memories which were very special to be forgotten by words. A tear trickled through her face but she steadied herself…something told her that nothing had changed btwn them that he felt the same way for her as he did so long ago, tht he still was her…THAKUR…and she said in a weak voice, "hey thakur!" that one word said it all and all he could do is to envelope her in a bear hug as if repenting for the years of friendship they had lost…

Part 7

"So thakur…kaise hai aap?"

"Kaise dikh rahe hai hum aapko?"

"hmmmm…buddhe!! Hahaha…camels buddhe hone ke baad aur bhi cute lagte hai kyaa?"

"Ashiiii…Hey bhaggu!! Aap kab sudherangi??"

"Hahaha…jab tum real wale camel ban jaoge tab"

And they started giggling hysterically…forgetting that they were adults. All they remembered was Maurya…and the blissful days they had spend together. The time had changed and they had changed. Their lives had taken separate turns but one thing remained unchanged….and that was the bond they shared…even after so many years…they felt that they had never lost touch. Ranveer thought that finally he had found that one person again who knew him inside out and who would even today stand by him if need be; she was and she always would be his best friend. Tia was his love, his life but his frnd on whom he too had blind trust was only and only ashi. Ashi was sad…sad that life had cheated on her with so many things. She had lost people who meant so much to her but she thanked bhaggu that her friend was still hers…without any dust of time in between but she wondered…was her mum still hers…..???

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Posted: 17 years ago
#56
do leave your comments guys they are the only thing which keeps me going 😳 hoping that u wld like it 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
#57
omg omg omg!!! y weren't u continuing re???? itz sucha a touchy n so niceeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee story 👏 n u had discontinued it??? 😡 😡 hmmm not gud haa!! my xams r going to start n i'll not b able to concentrate on it!!! ur story will keep on skating in my head!!!😆 😆 😆 pushing out all the stupid info on chemistry n biology n blah blah blah!!! so plz if u want i shudn't fail in my exams n get big big andas do plz continue it asap!!!! m so xcited!!!!plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
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Posted: 17 years ago
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n u r posting so smally smally post?? 😡 !!! i want biggggggggyyyyyyyyyyy biggggggggyyyyyyyyy post next time!!! u can't go around fooling us ok ??? post the next part jaldi n biggggg one!!! ok???? well herez a huggy for u!!! 🤗 n u'll get one page full of hugs n love once u'll post the next part!!! 😛 donno how to make siggy to make u post jaldi jaldi 😆 😉
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Posted: 17 years ago
#59
getting excitng.. go on toons.. don stop in dis state.. 😡 aare inspiration kaise nehi milega??!! we'r here na?! go on....... 😃 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
#60
see i told u i read it
i shud be getting an award fr succesfully finding n reading dis fic 😳 **bows down**thanku thanku!!
its really touching ,,,,,its as if i can see it happening in frnt of me bt part fifth relly was tuching,it was just wt u cud expect frm ay ,no serius drama ,plain simple reality !
tooo goood smrits
n looks whoz talking!!
d person who was after sum1s life to cotinue sig making wen d person""lost inspiration""
now whoz gotta see tumse hee 😆
bt really awesum smriti🤗 👏

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