TAMANNA.....Finally Updated..Pg19 - Page 11

haaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa 😡 😡 😡 smritooooooooooooooo u said the update will b ready by tuesday n now it has extended to wednesday... i mean how unfair... 😭 now my surprise will also cum on wednesday... 😕

yaaaaaa congo for completing ur tammy century.. itni surprises milengi toh offcourse century toh ban hi jaayegi. guys i hav found devil ka new synonym - smriti. 😕 no1 wud hav tortured this much...

hey smritooo u know i saw a new restaurant named smriti. 😊 😃 abhi toh uska inaugration bhi nahi hua 😛 i'll make sure to pop-in in dat restaurant. 😛

Originally posted by: smritisashi

and yeah sidoooo moi is illllllllll fever bukhaar zukhaam sardy khaasi cheekh hea ache body ache stomach ache back ache neck ache everything ache..

awwwwww..... take care of urself. n get well real soon... [I hope ur finger is not cut.. datz y u feel pain wherever u touch... 😆

😆 😆 😆 even divya told me ki theres a resto named smriti in her town and she didn't hesitate one bit to add ki its a phateeechar resto meant only for bhikaris 😆 😆 😆

i hope this one turns out to be really ziake daar coz smriti looooooooooves ziakaaaa 😆

ahaaa yeahhhhhhhhhhhh smriti and devil definatly go hand in hand 😃 i soooooooo loveeeee tortures 😉

and waht did u say u wld delay my surprizeeeeeeeeeee meany i asked pahle surprise then update 😭 😭

yahan toh ganga ulty bah ri ha inted of me torturing u u guys r torturing me by hiding surprises 😭 😭

ja me kattaaaaaaaaaaa 😭 😭

spammingggggggggggggggggggggggg so that it moves to next pageeeeeeeeeee

hold your breath

update is finally here

phewwwwwwwwwwwww guess what i had completed the entire formating of this part and was just about to post it when the electricity went offfff and i lost my entire one hour ka mahnat....

anyways the much awaited update is finally here...😆..i was sooooooo loving torturing you guys but then i thought to save some of my torture tricks in the coming updates...😉..so here you go

but before that...you have to bear with my preliminory speach...😆😳

This ficiton is very important to me, it was my first advent into writing and i had started writing this like ages before, perhaps its been an year since i once again re-started it I had it all thought in my mind but i was scared to pen it down, the fic turns really emotional from this point on and i was scared ki kaheen i don't ruin it and turn the emotions into melodrama. That would have been the biggest insult to ashi yuvi because these are two people who have upholded reality like a hall of honour at every single phase of their life.In my mind i had even cried thinking about the fic and i had even visualized ashi yuvi displaying the emotions to perfection but its very difficult to pen those thoughts down in a suttle realistic ashi yuvi manner.

I am continuing this only and only and only because you guys so wanted it to be continued...😳...you all have been a huge huge morale support and motivaitonal spark for me to once again write this, thank you alll alll all of you for being such an inspiraiton and for adoring this ficiton to this great an extent....😳🤗 🤗...if i would be able to see this fic reach its end then its only and only cause of you guys...

please promise me that you guys would Honestly tell me in every stage of the fic from here on as to how i am progressing and you guys would warn me before hand when you fele i am going over the top, please guys i need this really need it cause if i ruin ashi yuvi ka characters then i won't ever be able to write naything on them again..so promise me you guys would be my critical evaluator and tell me not just the good points but the points which u were unable to digest being ay fans...

okie enough of bhashan now i won't bore you more...😆

every part of the fic from here on is a dedication to my besht friend nappy/ninny/kreacher whatever you wish to call her..☺️🤗🤗..who perhaps has loved this more than me myself and that too since an eternity..🤗...lovee you naaaaps..🤗..and to sidoooooooooo🤗🤗...i promised her that this would be her birthday gifttyy i know sid your this year birthday is around the corner now..😆. and this got a bit tooooo belated but sitll happy birthday🤗🤗...you know i lovee you loads 🤗🤗...

Part 8

Vrinda was waiting for Ashi impatiently….."Ashi kahaan ho tum".. she said in a panicky voice. She was trying her cell but there was no response form her end

Because Ashi was busy reminiscing about Maurya. She had a nostalgic smile on her face, she saw the numerous number of fights which she had have with yuvi and she thought... "thank bhaggu I still have those fights to hang on to, when these fights end I know it would be a symbol of my end too….". She saw the umpteenth number of pranks she had played on jumbo and all of her friends particularly her psycho, she woud always rejoice on that ground. She did not wanted this moment to end where she was safely back into the past, the good old care free days where life had somethng new to offer every minute, where life seemed so secure even amidst unsecurities......because her mum was always there to give her a hug in dark times and to ensure that the sun shone bright and warm just right above her head……

but before thoughts of her mother engulfed her she forced herself back to reality...

"Hey Bhaggu!!! 38 missed calls"

Ranveer.........."ahmm ahmmm!!!…yuvi ke hi honge wo aapke bina ek minute jo nahi rah sakte, shayad kissi ke saath ladne ka mann kar raha hoga…..sorry ashi humne aap dono ko judaaaaaa kar diyaaa". He teases her ine xactly the same manner he had done so many years ago. Ashi was taken aback, she was zapped at life and its strangeness.There indeed where somethings in life which were so strong that nothing at all could dissemble them they would stay put come what may... And Ashi, her eyes shining with pride for being a part of this beautyful bond, is all set to throw the iced tea on him but the vibration of her cell destroys her plan and then she remembered matee….."argh!! sorry sorry sorry sorryyy maatee main bilkul bhool gayi thi I was just..."

"Ashi" Vrinda says very seriously, "her cheez mazak nahi hoty ashi"

"Mate gussa kyun ho ri ho…sorry bola na abhi aa rahi hun...

"Ashiii" Vrinda says "I need you here with me immediatly" she tried to emphasize her urgent need to be with her to hold her....

Ashi was puturbed, somethng was wrong with her friend she gave ranveer a look that said "I would take this revenge later THAKUR" and rushed off. But she stopped at the gate and turned to give him a last wave, she had left her friend in the past and she was leaving him now with no certainity as to when she would shout out to him but she knew then that whenever they meet wherever they meet they would start off form this very point, she knew that their friendship would fill up all the gaps of time and space and they would always be together as if they had never said goodbye ever....

Ranveer smiled and waved back knowing it in his heart that with her it would never be a goodbye, she would laways be there in his life if not in person then as the fragrance of faith and trust. But this business tycoon was trying to solve an unfathomable mystery as to.."how come the cruel and shrewed and concieted life had managed to keep Ashi untainted? She was just the Same..."

Well the answer to this is just one...

Thats Anvesha for you all...Mad and Crazy a Little Insane but a Real Sweet Lady......

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hope you guys like it😳...are kya huaaaa?? pasand nahi aaya? ya kuch zada hi chotta tha??....😆☺️😈...are u like feleing ki the update was smaller than my bhashan itself..😈😈

remember its me smriti the devil... 😉...how cna i let u guys off the hook sooooooooooo easilyyy...??😆😈😈

well this was just half part of part eight but i got so tiered and frustrated while editing ki i thought to bifurcate it into two..😆..but the continuaiton is ready just needs to be formated..😆...and now begins my second doze of torture...😈😈😈..won't post till am pampered to the fullest...☺️

just kidding guys...you all have already done loads for moi..i would format it by tom or wed and post it till then enjoy this..😳

Wow..looks like im d first one!!
Anyway smriti ji....kya kahun aapke is fic ke baare mein...true it was wayyy too short...But then it was amazing too!!!U did absolute justice to Ashi Yuvi and their relation....Too gud!!! 👏
You know as a fic writer i can never never BEAR to write anything negative bout ashi n uv...As in i cant bear to have them both Juda n in sadness n pain...BUt pain is an inevitable part of life...like a necessary evil u know...n u potray it so well....I mean hats off yaar....
I thought it was perfect...Im a humour lovin person so usually i like hasi mazaak stuff....but this is one special fic which i cannot help but appreciate..Keep up the gud wrk..n u betta cont soon ok?? 😉 😊

m i dreaming?>????????????????????????????


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okieeee... smritoooooooooooooooooo first of all i love u...

secondly thanku so much for my gifty....😳 n thanku for the belated wishes...

the appreciation part i'll write afterwards coz dat can go lonnnnnnnnngggggggggggggg.... n there r guests in my house who willl b leavinggg any moment n m going to station too..... but m here for criticism..... after w8ing like hell for this part😡 u hav given suchha lambaaaa update dat m feeling like giving u a big huggyyyy😡😡😡 n u know this hugggy will b a totally different one😡

okieeee m shifting this shouting part also for next time... in a real hurryyyyy...

sorry(*infinite)... for aktually reserving this post....... love uuuuuuuuuuuuu loadzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

oh atlast loony ji continued but part was very small 😭 😭 😭 but but but i salute your effort although ur not well and having severe ache (head, back stomach and lots more ) you had written the part very nicely and that after along time 👏 . And i hope ki next pat will be posted by u very soon and u get well sooner
Please dont hold suspense for long aur jaldi reveal karna why vrinda called

YYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY id it soo small i wonder??? 😡