AY JUNGLE SAFARI ( LAST PART POSTED) - Page 13

haahaa guys wrng person to ask am d one who wld continue dis fic aage.... 😛so d fics is in my command 😛

neways i hav posted the last part guys...u hav to tell me hw it is..am waiting for al ur wonderful comments.... 😃

Originally posted by: smritisashi

haah guys wrng person to ask am d one who wld continue dis fic aage.... 😛so d fics is in my command 😛

Lol smriti... than write the next part

Ashi was happily shocked! All she wanted to do was to snatch him close to her and kiss him hard. She very eagerly went forward but suddenly she heard something...something from the past "uv tumse pyaar nahi karta ashi… ye sab sirf ek bet tha" Ashi's excited hands stopped in the air and instead of love a feeling of despair took over her as she recalled that one day where she had lost all control over her life. All that pain and agony seem so real so new.

It's so said that time is the biggest healer but then why couldn't time seal this wound of hers forever? Bhaggu had witnessed all her struggles of collecting the shambles of her broken heart and moving on in life. She had tried all possible things from hatred to ignorance… from mare friendship to finding another love but alas all she could do was strengthen this one feeling even more every single day. Why was it so difficult to get over rejections and why was it so painful to accept that the one love which you thought was yours was actually just a joke?

Different expressions crossed her face as she remembered the time she had spend with this man. She remembered the gate they had crossed to get into that park…she remembered d prank she had played to get him cross that gate… she remembered the unbearable amount of love and concern that was on his face when he saw her safe and secure…she even remembered telling herself that very moment that 'Wow ashi finally u have found someone who would really be sad if u get hurt, who would love u even if u no longer are there,' and with this thought she had surrendered to the kiss which had sealed their bond with a sacred promise but nah!

A tear trickled from her eyes and she was jolted back into reality...naaah...nothing was real about those glorious days where she had felt cherished...infect even today after so many days she felt humiliated because all she was to him was a silly bet as cheap as some CD's...yaa from outside Anvesha Baneerji Ray stands tall and strong but from within she does not even has the guts to look at him directly in the eye coz somehow she still feels he's mocking at her that 'look wacko I made a fool of u… look even u couldn't resist my charm.'

Now the tears where flowing without any fear or embarrassment...uv saw them and he knew her answer right there. He knew she loved him and they were meant to be together but he even knew that he had not faced enough punishment yet for that one bet he made. His heart and her bhaggu knew that each and every emotion he went through that time was as real as his music but there was no way he could tell her that...was there? He had never realized what love was…all he knew about love was hot chicks who drooled over him. Some for his looks and some for his money but there was this one weirdo whom he thought he hated… who had loved the man yuvraj dev and not the spoilt daddy's boy. She had come as a god's gift to him who had unknowingly changed his life. She had given him the power to dream and to love but he like a fool had betrayed her heart which she had given to him with so much of love and trust. He knew she would come back but he didn't want her to come back with any feelings of regret or distrust. He wanted her to be proud of the fact that she was in love with him…that she did no mistakes in leaving her heart, by his side…that she was d most beautiful girl in the world for him and each and every cell in his body loved her as passionately as it loved his guitar.

He saw her struggling with her mind and her heart and he could not bear to see her agony he decided to put an end to it, "Wacko! Forget it...it was just a joke…I love you and will always love u coz u are one of my best friends ever" ashi smiled through her tears. She saw the reality of his love in his eyes...she saw the pain he was going through right at this very moment but still he let her go...coz sometimes if u really love someone from within then u won't hesitate in letting them go...and that's what he did...

THE END.......

AWSOME!!!!!! YAYYYYYYYY!!!! First to reply!!!!!! That was rocking!!! But what's this man? Tumne fic end kardi??? Now start a new one. I loved this fic man!!!! Rocking part!

awwwwwwwwwwwwwww,awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee 😳 luv u,luv u 😳

hey SMRITI, thankx a lot for this part....
greatly written !!!!!! 👏
I hope you'll enjoyed the jungle SAFARI !!!!!
not doing to well, up wid fever..isliye bada reply nahi post kar paoongi...hey bhaggguuu...waiting for tomorrow 9:30 man... 😉

Originally posted by: divyaashimix

hey SMRITI, thankx a lot for this part....
greatly written !!!!!! 👏
I hope you'll enjoyed the jungle SAFARI !!!!!
not doing to well, up wid fever..isliye bada reply nahi post kar paoongi...hey bhaggguuu...waiting for tomorrow 9:30 man... 😉

thaanx DIVYA i hope u liked it and ma realy sorry to not hav shwn u bt i thought it was ok neways take care deary and get wel soon

awesome part dear 😳

awesume part !!! loved it totally

hey friends...
I'm really thankful to all of you for liking my JUNGLE SAFARI...............
this was acctually my very first FIC 😛 😛 😛
and I'm glad that I was able to make you'll laugh wid sum of my lines....
I wanna thank an IDIOTIC female for writing the romantic parts 😆
thankx SIMI....and sum of deserving expressions for you... 😡
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as I'm a complete nonsense in case of ROMANCE !!!!
I'll be soon coming up wid the next fic....
and a new unusual concept to tickle your funny boneagain !!! 😃