ashi yuvi in love(1st fi of mine)

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Sweety

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Posted: 18 years ago

#91

Hey that part was really good 👏 But sooooooooo short Anyway cont soon

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Ridima Aneja

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Posted: 18 years ago

#92

In da car
Ashi:Yuvi where r we going?
Yuvi:Have patience, thode time mein pata lag jaega.
Ashi:But thoda idea to do na(making an innocent face)
Yuvi:Ok! its a romantic place
Ashi:Thats so obveous
Yuvi:Ashi irritate mat karo , mujhe car chalane do.
Ashi:you mean main tumhe irritate karti hoon
Yuvi:Kabhi kabhi
Ashi:Mujhe tumhare saath kahi nahi jaana
Yuvi:Oops!tumne der kardi.We have already reached our destination.
Ashi looks around and is shocked
Ashi:Idhar to kuch bhi nahi hai
Yuvi:close ur eyes aur mere saath chalo
Ashi:Alright.
They walk
Yuvi:ab ruko and open ur eyes
Ashi:This is amazing.....
Yuvi took Ashi to a big hall.he had decorated it wid candles, and flowers every where.he had also arranged some slow music
Yuvi:ab pata chala main tumhe kyon nahi bata raha tha ki hum kahan ja rahien hain.
Ashi:Tumne yeh sab already plan kiya tha
Yuvi:haan.
Yuvi:Ab bahaut batein ho gayi , shall we dance?
Ashi:Let me think.
Yuvi:Ashi 😡
Ashi:Ok, yes
Now they r dancing
Yuvi:ashi do u luv me?
Ashi:No
Yuvi:Ashi mazak mat karo
Ashi:Afcourse yes.tum itne silly questions kyun pooch rahe ho
Yuvi:I'm scared , kahin tum muje chodkar to nahi chali jaogi
Ashi:Main tumhe chodkar kahin nahi jaungi. i promise
Yuvi:tum humesha mere paas rahogi?
Ashi:haan?
Coming close to her
Yuvi:lekin tum to mujhse itna door khadi ho
He came more closer to her and kisssed her on her lips
Ashi( blushed):Ab kuch khaien mujhe bhaut bhook lagi hai

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lubnahl

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Posted: 18 years ago

#93

coool part 👏 👏 👏 cont soon

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vanu

@vanu

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Posted: 18 years ago

#94

excellent......toooooo gud ......plzz continue soon.... 😳

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Humaira

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Posted: 18 years ago

#95

😃 U'VE AMAZED ME BY THIS COOL FIC I AM NEW TO REMIX FORUMS AND THIS IS AND IT S THE 1ST FIC I READ ITS JUS AWESUM ITS REALLY REALLY COOL AND I LUVED IT WHEN WILL U CONT I AM WAITING 4 IT ,I READ ALL THE 16 PARTS TOGETHER AND REALLY LUVED IT HOPE U CONT SOOOOOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 👍🏼

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Humaira

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Posted: 18 years ago

#96

WHEN WILL U CONT I AM WAITING EAGERLY FOR WHAT IS GOIN TO HAPPEN NEXT ,I LOVE UR FIC

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Sweety

@sweetyvidya

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Posted: 18 years ago

#97

Hey kitane der baad tune cont kiya 😡
Anyways the part was very nice 👏 Plzzz cont sooon dear 😊

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Humaira

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Posted: 18 years ago

#98

it's long u wrote when will u cont

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Sweety

@sweetyvidya

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Posted: 18 years ago

#99

Are yaar cont karne ka erada hai ya nahi? 😡 😡

Edited by sweetyvidya - 18 years ago

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Ridima Aneja

@Ridima

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Posted: 18 years ago

#100

So, ashi n yuvi return to uv's home
uv:toh kal maurya wapis jaana padega .... how boring
ashi:why? i,m toh dieing to meet all da frendz.
uv:ya but i've to attend miss sharma's class
ashi:maurya toh jaana hi padega aur ek aur cheez
uv:what?
ashi:next week remix ki performance hai remember?
uv:oh yes
ashi:so most of da time we have to rehearse
uv:ok babes ab tum so jao

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