tr-ay fanfic part 34 pg28 - Page 4

now waiting to know who the prson was in who's car she went...

part 13

i m sure u all will liek it and all r egaer to knoww in whose cara shi has sat

ashi: syco tum...
uv: ha wacko nbas yaha se pass ho raha tha is w u and ur mom...isliye mien roka lekin bahar niklne se phele tumne taxi samja kar baith gayi...
ashi: hey bhagggu....aapne mujhe is syco ki car mein hi bethaya..
uv: acha hua nah warna kisi aur ki car mein baithti aurw oh tumhe nikal dte..
ashi: shut up syco...

uv's hosue wa at a short distance froma shi's news paper agency

fnally dey recahed der.....

now tr scene

while in d car

dey both didnt knwo what to talk
den ranveer finally spoke...
ranveer: tia aapka aajka din kaisa raha...
tia: theek htha lekin bahut hi tiring tha ....tia ko bhi nahi pata tia kaise handle kar rahi hai yeh sab...tummhara kaisa tha...
ranveer: bas hamar bhi theek thak tha...haaaj ashi pooch rahi thi hume....
tia: kis baaremien...
ranveer: hamare baaremien...
tia blushes...
tia:toh tumne kay kaha...
ranveer; hmm..apko kya lagta hai...
tia; tia ko kasie pata...
ranveer: kuch nhai kaha bas abhi jayenge tab batyenge.....ashi hi toot padegi humare pass se jaane mein

dey also finally recah wen uv and ashi recahes...

tia got out of d car ranever was parking d car and uv was opening d door he was staying alone away form his family as he wanted 2 achieve his passion of music but he was in touch wth his family and ashi on otehr iside was getting restless

i dont thnk ne1 is interested in my fic so i geuss iw ud stop posting here for dis fanfic

i guess nobody is cared to read dis fanfic i geuss i wont pots next part for 13th aprt only one reply 😭

👏 great part,plz cont asap ash. 👏

Originally posted by: animateash

i guess nobody is cared to read dis fanfic i geuss i wont pots next part for 13th aprt only one reply 😭

ashhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh,r u nuts or wat??😡if u r stopping dis fic,i am not gonna talk wid u nemore😡

but i m getting hradly ne repleis nobocy is cared 2 reda my fanfci xcpet u 2 and saya even u have repleid so late ......but otherwise nobody is cared 2 2 read so wats d point of continuing

part 14

uv was trying 2 open the lock but pata nahi kcuh problem aa rahi thi
ashi as usal satrted her comments
ashi: hey bhaggu yeh kaisa insaan hai jisse apne ghar ka hi darwaza nahi kholna ata
tilld at tiem ranveer and tia also came der
ranveer: kya hua baan darwaza nahi khul raha
ashi: are thakur aur timbo tum dono finally aa gaye....
tia: pzlzz ashi ab toh timbo bulana band karo...
ashi: agar mein change nahi huyi toh timbo bulana bhi kasie change hoga
finally uv openend the door of his house
ashi: hey bhgaggu finally darwaza khula

dey all went in.....and sat down comfrotably...

ranveer: ashi ab bataiye hume kyun bulaya..
ashi: arey tahkur abhi toh aaye hai thodi der toh ruk jao..
ranveer: theek hai

awwww awesome part dear...nd who told u no one likes ur fic...i like ur fic a lot instead i loved each nd every part including this one...

Rocking part Ash. Ab jaldi se continue karo naa sweety. I'm dying yaar!!!! 😛

luv u hamesha hamesha hamesha,
Komal