unlucky in love,new part,part 28,page 67 - Page 17

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what is it that tia and ranveer know about Ashi and Neal??

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Originally posted by: divya_92

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Originally posted by: sayanti_ashiuv

part-8

haan,haan,i said i am cuming,hey bhaggoo,hang on-said a very frustrated ashi

nd finally ashi opened d door nd after seeing d person at doorway,a evil smile lits up her face-oh,toh tum ho timbo😆waise ashi ko maloom tha timbo d bimbo ke alawa iitni hurry main aur kaun ho bhi sakti hai.........😉😆

oh,puhleese,u just shut up ashi,tia itni door se travel karke aa rahin hai,aur abhi tumhe sirf mazak ki pari hai😭😭-nd tia gave her a cold look

suddenly ranveer came there,nd seeing tia he hugged her😳-tia,finally aap aahi gayee,humne aapko kitna misss kiya😭

accha,tia ko to nahin lag rahan hai😉-tia also hugging ranveer😳

ahem ahem-ashi pretended 2 clear her throat-agar tum dono ka romance season khatam ho gaya hai,to andar chale??😉😉

nd both stopped hugging,embarrassed😕

nd after tia left,ranveer 2 ashi-ashi,aap bhi na,humari biwi ko thoda hug bhi nahin karne de rahin thi😕😡

ashi(smiling)-thakur,woh sab baad main kar lena,philhaal andar chale??😉😆

ranveer-chaliye

whatttttttttttttttttt??yuvi is here??ranveer,tum tia ke sath koi mazak to nahin kar rahen ho na..............-tia was surprised

nahin tia,sach😊-ranveer assured her😊

ummmmmmmmmm,ranveer

haan tia😛

ranveer,tia ko lagta hai ki hume undonoko milane ke liye kuch karna chahiye😛

haan tia,par kaise??yuvi is getting maried wid tania😡nd nd.............. wat abt neal???????????????

neal??????????ranveer,atleast hume to neal nd ashi ki bare main patta hai,we dun know abt tania,but tia is sure ki yuvi ashi ki elawa aur kisiki sath khush nahin rahega😳😛

haan tia..par kaise??

listen,tia has a plan...........................

nd acc 2 plan-

hallo,yuvi bana??

haan ranveer bro...............bolo

woh,bana................................

k,fine,8:30,rite??????????k,i will be there

okay tia-ranveer kept d phone-humne yuvi aur tania ko invite kar diya hai,par tania bhi hogi to plan ka kya hoga.....................

uske liye bhi tia ke pass ek aur plan hai😃

accha,wat??

nd after hearing d plan ranveer was like-wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww,its a superhit plan tia👏👏it will wotk definately,i am sure👏👏

haan ,ofcourse,tia ko to patta hi tha dat it will work,after all tia ahuja hona..............

koi aisi waisi baat nahin hai😆-ranveer completed d sentence😆

both laughed nd hugged each other😳😳

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par gies,tumlog mujhe drag karke kahan le ja rahen ho??-tania was screaming helplessly😡

tania,tum na tia ki baat suno,tum tia ki sath chalo,isse tumhara bhala hoga😉-tia was dragging her

par hume jana kahan hai??-tania was clueless

woh to tumhe abhi patta chal jayega😉

par humhe toh tumlogoke sath dinner par jana tha na??-tania was trying 2 stop tia

haan??to??hum jayenge na......par pehle uhan

haan tania,chaliye na-ranveer who was d silent watcher of d drama till now,controlled his laughter nehow nd spoke up finally😆

yuvi was clueless ki wats going on

he asked tia-mmmmmmmmm,tia,main kya tum logoke sath jaaon??

noooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo-tia screamed

all were scared😕

seeing dis tia said-ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh,i meant ki tumhara uhan koi kaam nahin hai,tum resturant main chali jao😉

par.............

no parwar,just goooooooooooooooo😉

nd tia nd ranveer almost disappeared 4m there wid tania😆😆

while tia nd tania went 2wards d car ranny called ashi-ahhhh ashi,hum ranveer..aap ek kaam kijiye,hume aur tia ko jane main thodi der hogi...........no,no aap chale jaiye,jyada nahin,thodasa hi late hoga,haan,pakka,15 mins se jyada nahin😉😆yup,okay,byee.

nd he smiled a evil smile😉😉

nd den a phone call 2 yuvi-ahh,yuvi bana,aap chale jaiye resturant main,hum aur tia abhi pahuchte hai😉

okay par ranveer bro,tania............😕

hallo..hallo.......😆hume kuch sunaiye nahin de rahan hai,lagta hai signal prob hai,baad main baat karte hain bana,bye.aap chale jana😆okay bana,bye.

nd he cut d phone immidiately nd switched it off.

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gr8,mujhe yahan pe bhejke tino ke tinohi gayab hai-yuvi was really disappointed😕

at dat moment ashi entered in d resturant,she searched here nd there,nd she noticed yuvi nd waved her hand-psycho😛

wacko😊-yuvi smiled nd waved his hand

he was relieved 2 see neal is not there😳

ashi took her seat

nd there was a pause of 2 mins😳

so,tum aur tania...........

ashi,tum aur neal.........

both started their conversation at d same time nd both laughed

y-k,u say first

a-mine a long story,will tell u later,tell me abt u nd tania

y-mine is alos a very long story

a-okay,dun tell me

y-yup,not now,will tell u sumday.but not 2day,plz.

a-k

y-so,harsh kahan hai??

a-woh mumma aur daddy cool ke pass hai

y-aur neal??

a-woh yahan mumbai main nahin hai.kisi kaam se bahar gaya hai

y-k😛so,tum kuch logi??order doon??

a-no,thanx,timbo aur thakur ko pehle aane do

y-k

nd their chatting went on nd on nd on😳

time just flew away😳

tia nd ranveer came almost 2 hour later

a-woh,to tumlog aagaye??bahut jaldi hua na,thakur,only 15 mins,rite?😡

t-aaah,ashi,tia ko kuch kaam tha,ranveer ka kuch galti nahin hai iismain,tia insisted her😉😳

a-hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm😡😡

y-tia,tania kahan hai??😕

t-dun worry yuvi,woh theek jagah par hi hain😉😆

y-matlab?

a-kya tania bhi aanewali thi

r-haan,par aab nahin aayegi😆

t-wof ho yuvi,woh theek hai,dun worry.lets order sumthing,tia ko bahut bhook lagi hai😉

r-hume bhi😆

a-k,fine😕

y-par tania😆

t-yuviiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii.tia said na she is okay,but thodasa busy,aab chale??😉

y-k,fine

nd d rest of d dinner smoothly continued wid generally chatter nd wid ashis added humour

after d dinner,they came outside-

t-ashi,tia ko kuch kaam pe jana hai,ranveer bhi jayega tia ke sath,yuvi,can u plz drop ashi at d home??😉

a(bewildered,seeing her watch)-abhi??

t-haan ,haan ,abhi,yuvi......

y-yup tia,dun worry.i will drop ashi

a-no thanx,i will manage a taxi

y-no way

t-yes,iitni raat ko,not at all😆

r-haan,tia theek keh rahin hai😆

a(frustrated)-okay,fine(turning 2wards yuvi)-psycho,u drop me😕k??

y-sure😛

nd both tia nd ranveer left😉

nd ashi nd yuvi just walking 2 yuvis car

suddenly yuvi craves 4 an icecream-wacko,i am really feeling like eating an icecream......wud u mind??nd if u r not getting late.......

a-no,no.its k,lets go

they go 2 an icecream parlour near d area

after ordering his icecream yuvi asked ashi-ashi,wat will u hv??

ashi-nothing yuvi,i am very much full,thanx

yuvi-k

icecream looked really sinfull,nd yuvis expression while eating d icecream surely showed dat he was enjoying it throughly😳

y-want a bite wacko??😳

a-mmmmmm

y-cumon now,hv a bite😉

a-k😳

ashi takes a bite nd loves it😳

nd atlast they both ended up sharing d icecream😳😆

a-oops,mainehi to yeh end kardi,i will get another 4 u😳wait.

y-no,no,its k😃

a-cumon,yuvi,its yummy😆dun worry,i will share it wid u dis time 2😉😉

y(smiling)-okay,then😊😛

yuvi just looked at ashis innocent eyes😳

they keep glancing at each other😳

their eyes meet nd embarassed ashi looks away😳

they share another skoop of icecream 2gether 😳

nd both finally entered d car😳

yuvi dropped ashi home😳

nd went 2wards his house😳

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hallo yuvi.........

ashi,tum??😕😳

haan,dun be shocked,main bas tumhe iitna batane ke liye phone kiya i hv a match 2morrow against sheena malhotra,u know her na,a famous national lavel tennis player,agar possible hua nd if ur mangetar permits😆do come haan,okay??😉

ashi,main aapni marzise chalti hoon,aur mujhe kya karna hai main decide karti hoon,tnaia nahin,i will cum definately😛😳

thanx,will wait 4 u😳

d next day was tuesday,ashis tournament

yuvi,tia nd ranveer were there 2 support her

Deuce…
Anvesha score a point…
Ohh missed!!!
sheena serves
Deuce!!
Last set

ashi,cum on,cumon,u can do it,yesssssssssssssssss-yuvi was cheering madly 4 her😳

oh tias god,puhleese,ashi hi winner ho,god,puhleese,puhleese-tia was praying😳

cum on ashi,aap kar sakte hai.yes,go ashi gooooooooo-ranveer also was screaming😳

ashi,u can do it,u rockkk,cum on,cum on😃😛-it was yuvi😳

Good serve by anvesha…
sheena scores….
Scores level….
The next point is the deciding factor…whoever gets it wins!!!

yuvi,ranveer nd ashi were holding their breathe,nd finally d commentor spoke up

And…and….sheena scores!!!! N sheena malhotra wins the game!!!!!!

Yuvi's heart sank…..it was as if he had lost….he felt terrible…but he knew ashi obviously felt worse….

Ashi congratulated her opponent n left without saying a word to the anxious press….n went straight to changing room…

r-hum dekhte hai

but tia stopped him by holding his hand

nd she went 2 yuvi-yuvi,tia believes ki tumhi ho jo anvesha ko mana sakti ho,plz go.

y-ofcousre tia,no need 2 say,i will see..........

nd he went straight 2 d changing room

he entered d room nd saw ashi was sitting at d corner on a bench,her hands buried inside her face😭

yuvi sat next 2 her widout saying ne word,ashi looked up n then down at d ground again-yuvi,plz leave me alone

"ashi….." without saying another word yuvi turned to leave, when ashi caught his hand…
"I …I …really..really wanted to win….win the game"….ashi said choaked….
"its okay ashi….i know it means the world to u….but its okay sweety….u win some , u lose some rite??!!!"

but yuvi.....😭

ashi,losing nd winnig to game ka ek hissa hoa hai na,nd belive me,u hv played awesomeeeeeeeee👏👏

but ........but.i dint win na😭😭

tears rolled down her eyes while saying dis😭😭

yuvi knew it meant world 2 her,tennis is her game,her passion,dats why she is so upset😭😭

yuvi put his arms arnd her-its okay….plzz ashi…don't…life moves on….it was just not ur day sweetheart…."

ashis head just fell on his shoulder,n she experienced a sense of comfort,a relief dat she hadnot since 7 yrs now.nd dis feeling only yuvi cud give 2 her,only yuvi😳😳noone else😳😳

its okay….don't cry….plz don't…part of life ashi….don't cry…u cry so even I cry…my heart cries ashi….i can feel ur pain sweetheart…" 😳😳

These words struck ashi….the word 'feel' n 'pain' ringing in her ears….she forgot all about losing the game….she couldn't contain herself n just hugged yuvi tightly….yuvi hugged her too….unaware of the outside world….they were in their own world….a world in which only ashi n yuvi belonged….a world so beautiful…so nice…so wonderful.. d love world of ashi nd yuvi😳😳

yuvi,tha....

but he stopped her by putting his fingers on her lips-shhhhhhhhhhhhhhh😳dunsay nething sweetheart😳

ashi looked at him nd shut her eyes😳

yuvi cupped her face nd leaned 4ward 2 kiss her😳

but no.........

sumthing made him not 2 do it

ashi.....ashi is married

nd he 2 is going 2 get married soon..........

nd he didnot want 2 take advantage of ashis mental state😕

nd he didnot want her 2 regret 4 it later😕

so,he just stroked her hair nd hugged her tight nd whispered-ashi,i dun care,u win or not,but i just believe dat u r d best😳😳

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