Untouched (a fanfic) Last Part -- Pg 55 - Page 22

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PART 14



I t was midnight time and Tia was sleeping peacefully 😊 . Aashi , Vrinda and Pri went close to her and screamed " HAPPY BIRTHDAY" 😃 . Tia got up with a jerk with a startled expression on her face 😕 . And that expression changed into a wide grin within seconds when she comprehended everything and realized that they were not scaring her but wishing her for her birthday 😃 .



Tia --- (with a smile) Thank u so much guys ..Tia ne yeh bilkul expect hi nahi kiya tha .



Saying this she hugged Vrinda and Pri and was about to hug Aashi when she stepped back 🤢 .


Aashi --- Please Timbo stay away from me . Yeh birthday wish karne tak toh thik tha but this hugging , angel sign and all is not my cup of tea .Just because I am your friend iska matlab yeh nahin ki tum mujhe bhi apne jaisa bana do 😉 .

Tia --- Well tum jaise punk se yeh expect karna bhi galat hain . Tum chaho toh bhi Tia ki tarah stylish aur elegant nahi ban sakti … 😉

Aashi --- Tumhari tarah banna bhi kaun chahta hain ….yeh world Bimbos se bhari padi hain ..I don't want to add to that … 😆

Tia --- You....you..red punk ..how dare you say that…. 😡


While they were busy fighting they heard a thunderous or rather cracker kinda sound 😕 . They ran towards the balcony .And they all were thrilled as well as filled with joy at the sight 😃 😛 . They were completely dazzled when they saw fireworks which said "HAPPY BIRTHDAY TIA" decorating the sky 😃 . Tia was completely overwhelmed and wanted to know who did that but didn't see anyone around . The whole night she kept wondering who might have done that but could find no answer 😕 .



In the class all her classmates wished her . After the class , all her other friends wished her . But there was no sign of Ranveer . She kept wondering why didn't he turn up , why didn't he wish her , how could he forget her birthday . She felt very gloomy and let down by Ranveer 😭 .



During evening time , Pri dragged Tia to a hall . And Tia was totally speechless when she saw the hall beautifully decorated with balloons , flowers, soft toys , candles – in complete Tia Ahuja style 😉 . The moment she stepped in she was showered with flowers 😛 . Tia felt very enthusiastic and on top of the world . But suddenly the thought of Ranveer lessened her enthusiasm .



When she was busy thanking her friends for the party , someone came from behind and closed her eyes 😕 . She identified those warm hands at once and a smile crept over her face 😊 ---------------



Tia --- Ranveer tumne aane mein itna time kyon lagaya ??

Ranveer --- (happy that Tia recognized him) Tia saari arrangements karne mein time to lagega na

Tia --- (then suddenly remembering that he didn't wish her yet) Ranveer tia ko tumse koi baat nahi karni . Tumne Tia ko abhi tak wish bhi nahi kiya .

Ranveer --- Kya ??? Par humne toh aapko kal raat ko hi wish kar diya tha…

Tia --- What ??? ( Tia couldn't comprehend anything initially but then she remembered about the fireworks) Toh…wo…wo tum the …

Ranveer --- Ji Bilkul aur humein laga tha ki aapne humein kal hi pehchaan liya hoga .

Tia --- Oh.....Tia ko sochna chahiye tha ki aisa surprise sirf tum hi de sakte ho ( then realizing that Ranveer is not financially sound ).Ranveer tumhe Tia ke liye itna spend karne ki kya zaroorat thi .

Ranveer --- Tia agar aapne yeh topic band nahi kiya toh hum aapse baat nahi karenge . Humne yeh sirf appki khushi ke liya kiya lekin agar aap hi khush nahi hain toh iss sab ka kya faida .

Tia --- Ranveer Tia is sorry…......Tia bohot happy hain Puhleeeeeeeeeez Tia ko forgive kar do .

Ranveer --- Thik hain Tia .....aaj aapka birthday hain isliye hum aapko forgive karte hain .

Tia --- Thanx Ranveer 😛

Ranveer --- You are welcome .....Ab chaliye cake kat te hain



They all gathered around the table to cut the cake . Before blowing the candles she was asked to make a wish . Tia closed her eyes and wished --- " Oh Tia's God puhleez Tia ko itna courage aur determination dena so that Tia can stick to her resolve of remaining untouched ". After wishing she blew the candles . She fed the first piece of the cake to Pri , then to Meher , Ranveer , Aashi, Vrinda , Varun , Sid and Yuvi .



After cake –cutting it was party time . Sid was coming towards Tia to ask her for a dance . Varun saw that and put his leg in between . Sid didn't see that and he fell down . Everyone including Varun rushed to help him .



Varun --- Sid tum thik toh ho na ??? 😉

Sid --- ( getting up) Iam okay .....(without wating a moment he asked Tia) Tia kya tum mere saath dance karogi ???

Varun --- (poking his nose in between before Tia could answer ) Sid tumhe ab rest karna chahiye ...…mujhe tumhari condition thik nahi lag rahi hain 😆 😉

Sid --- No Varun …Mein totally fine hoon …Dekho ( he demonstrated by walking) 😆

Tia --- (happily) Oh Sid , Tia bohot khush hain ki tum fine ho 😊

Varun --- No Tia externally wo fine lag raha hain par internal injuries bhi toh ho sakta hain . Meri advice hain ki jab tak tum doctor se check nahi kara lete tab tak tumhe dance ya koi aur activites mein participate nahi karna chahiye 😉 .

Sid --- But dude…..... 😕

Tia --- Sid…....Tia ko lagta hain ki Varun is right …

Varun --- Ya …...mein tumhe party se jaane ko nahi kahoonga …I know you love parties . Isliye tum uss corner mein jo chair hain uss par baithkar party enjoy kar sakte ho ..Okay.



Saying this Varun helped Sid towards the corner without letting him utter a word in his defence by showing extra-concern .



Tia --- Ranveer Tia ko lagta hain ki humein Sid ko akela nahi chhodna chahiye .

Ranveer --- Tia aap worry mat kijiye …Wo thik ho jayenge…aur waise bhi Varun hain na unke saath unka khayal rakhne ke liye .

Tia --- Tia thinks you are right

Ranveer --- Waise Tia kya aap hamare saath dance karengi ???

Tia --- Sure ….......



Ranveer loved dancing with Tia . This was the only time when he got to be so close to her .He twisted and turned her around while dancing . His heart was thumping with joy that he doubted whether Tia could hear his heartbeat . In between he offered a rose to Tia which she readily accepted . He felt this is the right time to propose so he signalled the DJ to stop the music . Then Ranveer kneeled in front of Tia ----------



Ranveer --- I love you Tia …Itna ki aap soch bhi nahi sakti …....kya aap bhi …...( he stopped seeing the bewildered and shocked expression on Tia's face . He started having a feeling whether he did the right thing by proposing her )



And Tia , she was totally numb and dumbstuck 😕 . Even Sid was , he never in his wildest dreams thought that Ranveer was in love with Tia 😕 . By now , everyone was glued to them waiting for Tia's answer and hoping that Tia says yes except Sid who was wishing exactly the opposite .



Tia took some time to register what Ranveer said . At first she didn't believe her ears because she always considered Ranveer to be a very good friend whom she can always look up to .



She felt betrayed by Ranveer . She started thinking that all this while Ranveer had been good to her only because he expected something in return from her . Bitter feelings for Ranveer started developing in her .



Tia --- (thowing the rose on the floor and in a bitter tone ) Tia ne socha bhi nahi tha ki tum Tia ke barein mein aisa soch sakte ho . Tumne Tia ki friendship ka insult kiya hain . Tumhare intensions ke barein mein Tia ko agar pehle pata hota toh Tia tumse kabhi friendship nahi karti .



Saying this Tia rushed off from there with tears in her eyes crashing Ranveer's hopes and leaving him totally shattered 😭 . Everyone present there including Aashi was shocked at Tia's behaviour 😕 . All felt bad for Ranveer except Sid who was grinning like a devil 😃.


Edited by honey_13 - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
Part 14 posted .
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Posted: 19 years ago
iwanted to be the first one to post 👏..😛. so i didnt read it... now i will
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Posted: 19 years ago

woooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooowwwwwwwwwwwww👏

superb......👍🏼totally sufi.......

enthralling......

tias birthday was exciting.....the fire works and all

ranvirs proposal .... and tias reaction... is rocking😊

Edited by aparna_1988 - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
awesum reshmi..luved the way ranny proposed to her..and also luved the way tia refused his proposal..waiting for ur next part.. 👏

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