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Posted: 19 years ago
HEY SAYA DI WELCOME KYA VAPSI KI HAI PART 12& 13 BOTH ARE TOO GOOD 😊 I'M A LATELATIF NOW πŸ˜† RIGHT I'M SOORRYY BUT AAP HAR BAR AAPNA FIC CLOSE KARNE KI BAAT KYUN KARTI HAIN....WE LUV UR FIC 😊 AND NOW PLZZ TAKE CARE WHILE WORKING WID SHARP EDGE TOOLS ITS AN ORDER ....J'ST KIDDIN'.......U DISERVE πŸ‘
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Posted: 19 years ago
awesome part Saya Di πŸ‘

but why does Ashi hv to leave Maurya? πŸ˜•

continue sooonnnn

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Posted: 19 years ago
nice part saya continue soon. πŸ‘ Ashi leaving maurya πŸ˜• πŸ˜• 😭 😑


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Posted: 19 years ago

I luv it!!!!!!! Psycho this is seriously ur best work!!!!! You are a total rockstar!!!!!! Jaldi continue kar and dont be angry with me plz i wanted to come on Sunday but main apni naani ke ghar phaas gayee thi. Gopi ne bataaya tujhe right??? CHOLLY!!!!!😭 I miss u so much!!!!! Just PM me and i'll reply when i check it!!!!

luv u hamesha hamesha hamesha,

Wacko!!!

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Posted: 19 years ago
Hey Sayantika sorry for replying late

One more awesome part

Very romantic and emotional too

Plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz keep up the good work and don't think of ending this fic coz it rocks

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Plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
thanx ppl,i will post d 14th part 2day.maybe arnd 3,3:30.so,keep waiting 4 it nd u will get the answer there dat why ashi is gonna leave maurya πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰
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Posted: 19 years ago

Hey Saya sorry for replying late

awesome part

Very romantic and emotional too

Plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz keep up the good work and do cont soon

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Posted: 19 years ago

okay,as i promised,herez cums d next part-

part-14

no,ashi tum mere saath aisa nahin kar sakti ho-yuvi was heart broken

i know yuvi,i know,but i cant.after all he is my dad,mujhe jaana hi hoga....i mean he is dying nd 4 d last time,he wants 2 see me nd mumma,nd i hv 2 leave wid her 4 london-nd she started crying badly again

tears were also in yuvis eyes,but he just cant bear her sweetheart in so much pain,so he went 2 her nd hugged her tight-its k sweetheart,just calm down.

though tears were floating down 4m his eyes 2 like her.

yuvi,main bahut buri hoon naa nd selfish??i am leaving u,rite??-she sobbed

his voice was choaked coz of tears,but he didnot show his tears 2 ashi,or else she wud be hurt more nd he dun want 2 hurt her again,as he had hurt her so many times.

he replied-tum toh sach main hi ek wacko hai,idiot.how dare u 2 think all these rubbish??stupid girl,u must go wid sonia aunty nd must see ur dad,look,u will be back again,maybe after sum months-he paused a while-but its k,after all mujhe tum jaisu wacked out se kuch dino ke liye chutti toh milegi

nd he hugged her even more firmly

i am sorry,yuvi,scold me,i deserve it-she said resting her head on his shoulders as he gently caressed her face

he said nothing,but kissed her 4head wid such touching tenderness dat brought tears in her eyes

psycho,maine kahan scold,not kiss-she whispered

widout uttering a word he leaned 4ward nd kissed her again,she smiled running her hands through his loving curls.her heart swelled wid love 4 him,she is really lucky 2 hv a caring boyfriend liking him.

anvesha banerji ray,tum isse scold hi samajh lo-he whispered 2

COMMENTS NEEDED.OKAY SO MUCH OF RONA DHONA😭😭NEXT PART WILL BE SOOOOOOOOOOOOO ROMANTICπŸ˜‰I KNOW DIS PART WAS QUITE BORING,BUT CRITICISM IS ALSO WELCOME.

Edited by sayanti_ashiuv - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
part 14 posted,plz reply gies,i know its quite boring,par phirbhi πŸ˜• i promise next part will be romantic 😳 😳 sayanti promises πŸ˜‰
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Posted: 19 years ago

Hey Saya

awesome part

Very romantic 😳and emotional too keep up the good work and do cont soon

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