'The True Definition of Love'updated ~53~ - Page 34

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: *nitz_rocks*

Hey fufu!!! like i said me will read nd reply in weekend.yeshh meri guggu kabhi jhoot nahi boltii..here i m😳neways this part is tooooooooooo senti😭 haannd uv is married?😲 me too shocked ganda uv haila!!! poor ashi😭yeshh Y always ppl break her heart😭exactly neways like sonam said...me too hope you gib it positive end to it😳..u want me to end my fic.lolz jokin😆.wid ur fav twists nd turns😉😆lolz u knoe me soo well neways applauses for luvly but senti part😳😭thankew

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nd now pleej cont. soon...i can't wait to read wat happens next...wat do timbo do...and who is this rishi? and how will ashi react when she cums to know bout uv is married? see i hab soooooooo many questions pending... u can't keep me curious for sooooooooo long...so pleej cont. it...JALDI!!!

My next part will answer all ur questions

Thankewwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww wwwwwwwww

My darling........Ok i'll cont once my vyva's get over tht is On the 11th And thtz a promise..

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Posted: 18 years ago
😡 jaldi cont kar.......... 😡 warna not talking 2 u 😡
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Posted: 18 years ago
Sayuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu maine kaha na i am not talkin to u pehle hi 😡 😡 😡
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Posted: 18 years ago
Hey kriti I read all the parts of ur fic together its super coooooool 👏 Plzzzzzzzzzzz cont sooooooooon 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago

Part-16

Uv was a bit confused as to wat was happening.....he went there thinking ke shayad kuch imp ho.....

Inside tia's anger was crossing degrees over degress...she was turning from red to blood red to santa red to floral red..

Uv enetered

uv- ahhh..tia kyya hua..anything serious ..

tia- aaiye aaiye mr.yuvraj dev husband of mrs.anshika dev...father of mr.x dev and just a so called friend of ms.anvesha rey..right...uv tumhe pata hai tum kar kyya rahe ho..u have no idea ke tum ek marte hue aadmi ko theek karke usse dobaara maarne ki planing kar rahe ho...isnt it awesom....Uv tum kitne smart hoMind blowing

uv- ok fine main maanta hoon ki ashi bahaut hurt hogi but tia agar tum meri jagah hoti to obviously tum yehi kartii...infact koi bhi yeh karta..tia main bhi bahaut hurt hua hoon .....infact more than ashi but tia this is life...''yeh jeevan hai iss jeevan ka yehi hai yehi hai yehi hai dhoop chav..''

tia- ha ha ha uv tum kitna accha gaate ho...

uv- thank you waise mujhe yeh pata hai so u neednt tell me..

(and he turned to go )

tia- uv tum kitni acchi acting karte ho plzzz isse ashi ke saamne jaane ke liye bacha kar rakho..mere saamne tumhe apni feelings chupaane ki zaroorat nahi hai...

uv turned back with tears in his eyes ......he was almost crying....tia ran to him and hugged him Just to make him feel comfortable……… uv hugged her back he was crying loudly like a baby...he had never cried like this......

tia- uvv tum tum chup ho jao...tumhi ne mujhse kaha hai na yehi jeevan hai aur jeevan to kabhi ek jaisa nahi rehta na...

Uv- tiaaa mere saath aisa kyon hue mere saath hi aisa kaise hota hai.......tiaaa main ashi ke begaar mar jaoonga par main ansh ko bhi nahi chod saktaa...

tia took him to a chair lying there and made him sit there...she caressed his hair and uv held her hand.......

tia- uvvvvvvvv tum present main jeo past aur future ke baare main mat socho jo hoga dekha jayega.....ab bacchon ki tarah rona band karo aur batao ke yeh rishi kaun hai

uv- ab yeh kaun hai...haan voo..yeh to ansh ka fiancee hai na..i mean ex-fiance one and the same thing

Tia- uv ur case is getting more and more complicatd ab yeh fiancee kahaan se aa gaya

uv- bahaut lambi story hai..u leave that waise humaari reetu kahaan hai usse subah se nahi dekha

tia- pata nahi ranveer subah apne saath lekar gaye the …woh keh rahe the ke doc ko dikha denge and phir pappa ke paas chod denge …. Accha uv waise hume shayad tum Oberoi's main lunch karvaane waale the right…..

Uv- ahh haan but mujhe abhi government house jaana hai uss case ke silsile main……ahh tum aisa kyon nahi karti pehle ansh ko doctor ke paas le jaana and after that u guys go to Oberoi's I'll join u there …..

Tia- theek hai phir ek ghante main Oberoi's par milte hain …

Uv- theek hai abhi byeeeee I gotta rush.

And he went leaving tia behind with millions and billions of questions……she knew tht he was hiding something …Something was there it wasn't just because of Ansh but something bigger problems oh his…and she took the pledge of finding them out….She couldn't see her best frnd dieing every milli second……She had to do something but first let ashi's Operation take place..she didn't want any complications for her…….Yes tht was right she had to wait…….But abhi she had to take Anshika to a doc…and she rushed downstairs where ashi was working on her laptop and Ansh was sipping black coffee

Tia ran to ansh and took the black coffee mug from her hand

Tia- anshhhhhhhhhhhh u can't drink this aisi halat main Black coffee nahi pete..i thought ke tum ek doc ho and tumhe yeh Gynaec bases to pata hi honge..tum bhi na..anyways abhi chalo I gotta take u to a doc..

Ansh- Docc tiaaaaa….i mean I a Ok

Tia- I knoe u r Ok but u should have ur Weekly Check up right I knoe u have ur Family Doc there but we could atleast see if everything is fine ..Ok ashi ab tum plzzzzzz apna kaam karna band karogi and humaare saath chalogi coz after that we have a lunch appointment with mom and uv there

Ashi- mom wow..but tia mera bilkul man nahi hai

Tia- ashiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii I'll kill u agar tum nahi gayi to u need some damn fresh air…..chaloooo

Ashi- ok ok main ek call karke aati hoon

Tia- no calls just come along

And she amost dragged ashi out of the house ..ashi wasn't feeling good ..she too had questions….what was this mystery about ansh's child and y was uv so possessive about the kid….Y had ansh's husband Left her…she knew this was ansh's personal matter but she had a strong feeling tht it was something related to Uv……what was it …will she ever be able to find her answers…she didn't wanted to die before all her questions were answered…

Ashi was in deep thought when Tia just snapped in front of her eyes

Tia- what happened sweetheart aap kahaan khoyi hui hain … anyways Car se utro hospital aa gaya

And three of them get out of the car..ashi waited outside while Tia and Anshika went inside to meet the Doc ……

Inside the Doc's Cabin..Dr.Mittal had just taken her sonography ,She came out with Ansh

Dr- Everything is fine Dr.Anshika bas thodi weakness hai …even ur baby is turning to be very weak.. aap kuch kha nahi rahi hain…take Green leafy vegetables loads of salad baaki main aapko kyya bataooon u r a doc urself and u kneo what to eat and what not better

Tia- exactly Ansh u r not hving anything main itni bhi gandi cook nahi hoon….Today onwards jitni der tum yahaan ho I am gonna take good care of u waise y don't u join Yoga classes maine bhi reet ke time par join ki thi they do an awesome job

Dr- exactly Mrs.Sisodia is apsouletely correct main aapko ek address deti hoon uhar u can consult I am sure yoga classes aapke liye bahaut acchi rahengi anyways what's ur husband's name…

Ansh- ahh….woh

Tia- Mr.Yuvraj Dev…tia smiled at ansh as she answered

Dr- Oh the well known Advocate jo Rajasthan Government ke opposition main case lad rahe hain…Both husband wife are Popular Celebrities

Ansh- Drrrrrrr……..anyways tia we should take a leave

Tia- ya thankew so much Dr.Mittal

And they leave outside ashi was waiting for them and turning red

Ashi- tumhe nahi lagta kuch zyaada hi time lag gayaa

Ansh- I am sorry ashi anyways chalo ab main drive karti hoon

Tia- oh no no

Ansh- oh plzzzzz yes yes

Tia- ok ok…and they laughed Thoroughly

They reach oberoi's ……Where uv was already waiting for them

Ansh- hey uv kaafi jaldii aa gaye actually tum time ke pakke hote ja rahe ho meri company main reh reh ke

Uv- oh puhleeeeeez….(he gave tia a wink and she looked at him with angry eyes)aisa kuch bhi nahi alright

Ashi- haan haan uv to pehle se hi bahaut Punctual tha band meetings main 1 ghante se zyaada to vo kabhi late hua hi nahi hain na …..

Uv- ashiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii and anshhhhhhhh u guys would plz sit down and haan tia tum paise laayi ho na…Main apna wallet ghar par bhul gaya

Tia- uvvv tum aise kaise bhool gaye…itne bade Advocate ke saamne hum jaise chotte log pay karein accha nahi lagta

Uv- nahi kuch nahi hota I don't mind

Tia- r u sure

Uv- han tia sacchi

Tia- Ok anyways pappa nahi aaye

Uv- unko kuch kaam aa gaya tha

Tia- accha….waiter waiter

And the waiter comes there

Tia- ashi tum kyya logi accha aisa karte hain lunch hi mangva lete hain…1 Dal bukhara …and Kadahi paneer….I butter chicken and about 6 naans…But usse pehle ek lemonade ek juice and 2 coffee le aana……

Waiter- Ok ma'am

And the waiter goes

Uv- tia tumnee itna kuch order to kar diya paise hain

Tia- arrey pay to tum kar rahe ho

Uv- abhi to tumne kaha ke tum kar rahi ho

Tia- Uv Tum paris main rehkar bhi itne kanjoos kyon ho…Just shut up and apna wallet nikaal kar rakho

Ansh- uv maine tumse kaha tha na ek din tumhe pay karna hi padega aaj vo wakt aa gaya

Uv- whateva but main kisi se darta nahi hoon who to bas

Tia- uvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvv

Ashi- anyways guys uv how is ur life goin on In Paris, Sidney main to main maze kar rahi hoon…what hot guys…beautiful places

Uv- hot guys…Ashii tum to bilkul tia jaisi hoti ja rahi ho

Ti- uvvvvvvvvvv……..anyways kisi ne humaare London waale ghar ki photographs dekhi..

Uv- nahi

Tia took out one photograph

Tia- yeh dekhoo

Uv- wo hoooooooo this is soo beautiful to tum log shift kab ho rahe ho

Tia- Ranveer yahaan par apna business set kar le…and upar se mujhe Curosity TV ka Head office bhi wahaan shift karna hoga…so its hard job…about 1-2 mahina to lag hi jayega

Ashi- aaram se…waise here liquids r here…..here uv ur coffee tea ka lemonade Ansh ka juice and meri coffee

Ansh- tia tum lemonade peeti ho this is good for ur brain and even ur heart auricles would work properly

Tia- ahhh..(and tia smiled)

Uv- anshhhhhhhhh tum kabhi apne doctor hone ke ehsaas se bahar nikal kar dekho life is beautiful

Ansh- Mr.Yuvraj Dev jaise aap to kabhi yeh jatate hi nahi tht u r a lawyer uss din raatko pub main shuld I start…just then she realized tht ashi was also there…she just looked at uv who was giving her a paagal ho gayi hai kyya look…She continued I mean…ke vo tum bhi to anyways Excuse me ….

And she went from there to the loo where she washed her face …

Ansh to herself- yeh tum kyya kar rahi thi……Tum aise nhi ashi ek samne yeh nahi keh sakti u cant say this sacchai in front of anybody who uv ke liye ek kadva sach hai….u cant do tht ansh u cant……

Meanwhileon the table tia was talking to ranveer on her cell and uv was too busy chking his mails on ashi's laptop …Ansh had forgotten her Cell there…..Just then there was a call on her cell…First ashi thought tht she cant pick it up but then uv asked her to do tht so she picked the phone and

Caller- hello Dr.Dev…Rishi here

Ashi wasa horrified she kept the call…wat was this……..Ansh ko vo Dr.Dev kyon bol raha tha…….what was this going on…..she knew tht this was wrong…….Y did uv do this to her…..tears were bobbling her eyes……she wanted to cry..she knew this wasn't the right place ..She got up and just ran from there…..

I knoe this was a bit boring i didnt knoe what to write i didnt wanted to disclose the suspense so soon...so i just started cooking stories ........ I hope it isnt tht bad

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Posted: 18 years ago
Mujhe nahi lagta meri fic itni buri hai ke ek hi reply mile....pehle to tum log keh keh kar cont karvaate ho and jab i cont no one replies......Only reading isnt enough........U guyss should knoe how bad it feels.......When nobody replies......I continued tomorrow and aaj bhi kal waala haal hai....agar aisa hi hai so u guys can tell me ke kriti ur fic isnt good isse cont mat kiya kar jhooti tareef karne ki kyya zaroorat hai............U guys expect me to waste my time..... 😭
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Posted: 18 years ago
will read l8r nd reply 😉 😃 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
rocking kritz!!!!! ab eik achhi bachhi ki tarhaan continue karo. aur woh bhi jaldiiiiiiii.

sweety di 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
Hey that was very nice 👏 plzzzzz cont soon 😳 Very egar to know what next 😳 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: remixer

Mujhe nahi lagta meri fic itni buri hai ke ek hi reply mile....pehle to tum log keh keh kar cont karvaate ho and jab i cont no one replies......Only reading isnt enough........U guyss should knoe how bad it feels.......When nobody replies......I continued tomorrow and aaj bhi kal waala haal hai....agar aisa hi hai so u guys can tell me ke kriti ur fic isnt good isse cont mat kiya kar jhooti tareef karne ki kyya zaroorat hai............U guys expect me to waste my time..... 😭

sweety dont say this..............😭😭😭😭

we all r here to read it but some are not always online and some cant read fics everyday coz they have their exams cuming or r still going on but u can always notice that sum1 or the other will always reply.............

sab nai toh koi to teri fic padta hai na??????? i know it gives a very bad n sad feeling wen no one reply but kabhi toh reply aata hi hai...........😛

n mam aapne meri fic mein bhi reply NAI KIYA HAI!!!!!!😡

BUT M NOT TAKING NE KIND OF REVENGE ................

this part was nice n as i always say that i just love fics so this fic is wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwww

so now dont be soooooooooooooo much hurt coz maine toh atleast reply kar diya na........😆😆

love ya loads n loads

sonam😳😳

Edited by sonam1509 - 18 years ago

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