Distance- fanfic -updated.pg19

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hey guys im pretty bored of my first fic...srry i hv not updated it since long but ill continue when i get some inspiration....for now this is a new fic....n very different so i hope u guys like it....plzzzzzzz comment....its something new im tryin n if u guys dont like it tell me so ill discontinue....plzzzzzzzzzzz..

This fic is an adaptation of a very old book I am reading called 'The Razor's Edge' by Somerset Maugham….for all those who like reading…plz do read it..its a must…..its wht inspired me ...back to the fic….

Its about these two people or I shuld lovers, who want absolutely two different things in life…totally different…their madly in love wid each other…but their paths don't meet....when I say their paths don't meet I mean that they are like two lovers who want to go to a holiday together, but one of them wants to climb Greenland's icy mountain while the other wants to fish off India's coral strand,… so obviously its not going to work….one of them is a an idealist, a dream…the dreamer of a beautiful dream, n even if the dream does not come true, its rather thrilling to have dreamt it…n the other one is the one who faces reality…the practical one, so to say… one is a physco n the other a wacko!!!

n the story is of how madly deep their love for each other is but it may not work out…it may but one will have to make the sacrifice…who will, who wont…maybe no one will….well that is left to see…

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Part 1
They all meet for lunch….by all I mean….ashi, yuvi n larry….larry was their friend….he looked young, just under six feet, thin n loose limbed…he was a pleasant looking guy, neither handsome nor plain rather shy n in no way remarkable…he had dark brown hair, with a slight wave in it…his eyes very peculiar, so dark tht the iris made one color wid the pupil, n this gave them a peculiar intensity…he was a very dear frd of both ashi n uv…he studying engineering...he wuld write lovely poems n wished some day 2 publish them….he had a knack of understanding ppl n their emotions….n he was always read 2 help whoever was in need….

They chatted away wid their luncheon….ashi n yuvi wuld often glance at each other….their eyes met n there was in yuvi's a tenderness tht was beautiful to see… there is nothing more touching than the sight of young love…they were surely young but madly in love n thts why ashi yuvi had got engaged as soon as they left maurya…

"it appears tht u hv got an offer of a very good job, have u yuvi? asked larry
"yes a wonderful job!!" answered yuvi
"so ur taking it?"
"No I don't think so…"
" why not"
" I don't want to"
"then wht do u want to do" ashi questioned
he gave his radiant, fascinating smile
"loaf" yuvi said…
" common u cant loaf for all ur life" ashi argued
"I want to do things on my own, in my own way n in my own time"
" uv, I think doing whtever u want to do under someone's guidance is always better…u learn more….u waste a lot of time going down blind alleys mate" Larry pointed out
" u may be right. but I don't mind making mistakes….it may be tht in one of the blind alleys I may find something to my purpose"
" and wht is ur purpose"
" that's just it. I don't knw it yet"
larry n ashi both culdnt think of anything else to say to him….uv coolly drank his coffee…but ashi was thinking n her restlessness was evident in those pretty eyes…it had been just 2 months since yuvi was back from his pilot draining sessions….he had suddenly disappeared n had gone away to another place…cut off from his world in mumbai...n tht for flying…for the feeling of flying marveled him…he wuld say tht there was a lot of time to think when you're up in the air by urself, being up in the air made him feel he was in heaven…leaving all his world behind, he experienced divine peace up there….he simply loved it….he had then gone to Leh for a long silent vacation, all alone….n now he was back but a changed person…. Ashi pondered away………..

Edited by srkm - 18 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
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plzzzzzzzzzz comment guys....im really low...n i need u guys 2 comment...plzzzzz...
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Posted: 19 years ago
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hey its fantaaaaaaaastiiiiiic its really different its gr8 wow keep up and rite the next part as soon as u can and once again i would like to say its fab 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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thkz remixer...ur so sweet u always first 2 commenton my fic...thkz so much...ill wait n c if other ppl like it or not...thkz agin...God bless..
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Posted: 19 years ago
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hey it's beautifullllllllllllllll although i don't read ay fics but it's soooooooooo diff i wld sure ike u too cont it n yes i am a book lover so can u tell me is tht which name u prescribed is it very old or wht bcoz otherwise i'll hv to search in big libraries

thnxxxxxxxx
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Posted: 19 years ago
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AND ME THE SECOND
luvlyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy
its fantastic
conti soon
👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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its awesome 👏 totally marvelous!!!
yuvi and flying.....it suits him. cont soon 😛
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Posted: 19 years ago
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its really gud 👏
plzz cont soon 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: teddylovessme

hey it's beautifullllllllllllllll although i don't read ay fics but it's soooooooooo diff i wld sure ike u too cont it n yes i am a book lover so can u tell me is tht which name u prescribed is it very old or wht bcoz otherwise i'll hv to search in big libraries

thnxxxxxxxx

teddylovessme its an old book but teh author is damn famous so i guess ull get it at a gud book store...anywayz the search in big libs is also worth it for the book....do read it sumetime....

anywayz thkz for the comments though i expected a better response....if u like the fic, take out time to comment so tht i knw...plzz wake up silent readers...if no one replies ill knw tht i need 2 discontinue...

l8t..tc

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